BlindJester Posted May 5, 2011 Report Share Posted May 5, 2011 Name: CookieSweetsSex: FemaleAge: MareSpecies: UnicornPelt Color: IvoryMane/Tail Color & Style: Chocolate brown at the base, darkening into black further down. She usually keeps her mane in a loose bun.Eye Color: Medium blue.Cutie Mark: A partially eaten cookie.Physique: She is slightly pudgy. Her hoofs are a sandy color.Residence: Manehattan.Occupation: She is a baker who specializes in cookies, making all kinds for different occasions, she even makes cookie cake in her own shop called Sweet CookiesMotivation: Her motivation is to discover the best possible cookie recipes out there and share them with other ponies. She also hopes that she'll get a little protege---the little sibling she's never had.Likes: Baking, cookies, MelodySpark, singing, walks, jewelry, and having fun.Dislikes: Being confined, bullies, dressing up, reading much.Character Summary: CookieSweets lived a fairly typical Manehattan life. She had a good education and wanted for nothing, but because her parents traveled often, she had to fend for herself. Everything was nice and tidy and in its place. Cookie hated that about home: nothing was too surprising. CookieSweets wanted to do more, but wasn't sure what. So she put on her favorite bracelet, given to her by her mom, and went for a walk by the lake. Once she arrived there, she decided to go for a swim just to be spontaneous. After she was done frolicking through the waters, she sat on the ground to dry off, but noticed that her favorite bracelet was missing. She looked everywhere for it with no luck. Feeling defeated, she sat at the edge of the lake and cried. She wondered if having fun meant losing things she held dear. If that were true, she thought, then she didn't want to try to have fun anymore. Suddenly, she heard someone coming up behind her---another filly. Cookie said nothing and ignored her. But the filly asked what was wrong, and CookieSweets told her about losing her bracelet. The filly said she'd get her a new one, but Cookie declined. It could never replace the one she had lost.Then the filly started to sing. Cookie thought it was stupid of her to be singing such a happy tune when nothing good happens from acting silly, but she couldn't help but tap her hoof along. Soon she started to dance with the other filly. They sang and danced until Cookie forgot about her lost bracelet. As the two headed home, the other filly told Cookie that her name was MelodySpark. CookieSweets thought it was a fitting name for her and asked her new friend if she could learn how to sing too. MelodySpark agreed happily.When Melody got her cutie mark, Cookie told Melody to come over to her house so that they could properly celebrate. After some deliberation, Cookie decided to celebrate Melody's discovery of her special talent by baking her something extra-special: a cookie cake. When Melody returned, CookieSweets brought out the nicely made cookie cake. Melody was delighted. This was the nicest thing anypony had ever done for her.Glad to have done something good with her own hooves, Cookie discovered her own cutie mark. It was a partially-eaten cookie. Smiling to herself, Cookie thought this was the best day ever.CookieSweets is a shy pony. She hates conflicts and is often afraid to speak her mind, but when she feels confident about something, Cookie is far more talkative and happy-go-lucky. CookieSweets was often left home alone because her parents always liked to travel to all the different places in Equestria they invited Cookie to come with them, but she preferred to stay in one spot rather than living somewhere else every other month. CookieSweets always liked to have things stay constant instead of always changing. Since CookieSweet's parents didn't want to leave her unattended during their travels they had hired a nanny to check up on her twice a week. Her parents often worried about Cookie despite being the free spirits they are so they call constantly to make sure she's okay and come home every month to give her gifts that they got on their travels. CookieSweets never had anything real noticeable about her she always stayed quiet and did as she was told. Her only real achievements was making a true friend and earning her cutie-mark, which her parents were ecstatic about when she told them but sad that they missed such a milestone in their daughters life, CookieSweets hopes to make a bigger name for herself so everypony will recognize and remember her before she can't do anything else. CookieSweets has a deliverypony named PaintedWings who works for her in exchange for rooming and food. Cookie is PaintedWings legal guardian since Painted is to young to be out on her own yet.Art done by the ever so talented ChelseaGold<3Art by me. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 This is good, but I think it needs a bit more. You told a story about MelodySpark and CookieSweets, but that seems to take up a lof of the Character Sumary. You can keep the story in there, but talk a bit more about Cookie. What did her parents do that they had to travel a lot? Who did Cookie stay with while they were gone? Were they happy with Cookie's Cutie Mark? Does Cookie work at a bakery or restaurant? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlindJester Posted May 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF I tried to keep these questions in my head lol but it didn't work obviously. I'll do some serious editing./edited. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skye Posted May 7, 2011 Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 She seems like a very sweet pony. Manehattan may be a wild place, but she likely could find her niche there, I hope. Approved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlindJester Posted May 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2011 Eeeeeee! Thanks I hope she does too x3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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