TechBrush Posted December 5, 2012 Report Share Posted December 5, 2012 (Drawn on DSi via Flipnote)Roleplay Type: CrossoverName: KunSex: MaleAge: TeenSpecies: Dog/HumanEye colour: Dark RedCoat: Very Dark Gray with White spikes on chestTail: Spiky Very Dark Gray with a White tipPhysique: thin and tallResidence: a house in the woodsOccupation: Building thingsCutie Mark: N/AHistory: His perents died due to a a group called "Darkness" when he was borned. Which he was living a lone but he was very smart and made a robot friend called "Afla". Afla was the care taker for kun when he was a Kid, But as Kun got older he started to build things that no one would think of making. Soon Kun starts knowing about his past and things start happening he just thought it was just thing with his age as he got older, But one night he was thinking he was having a nightmare but as he woke the next morning he was by a pond. As he looked in to the pond his Eyes where all white and he was black all over. He was scared of what he was finding out that he was a Half Darkness, but he calmed down and he turned back to normal.Character Summary: He stops the Darkness anyway any cost for the safety of everyone. He is very timmed at anyone that wants to hurt anything/one, but over all nice with a bored look on his face. Is from a differnet universe. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MidnightBlackhorn Posted December 5, 2012 Report Share Posted December 5, 2012 I am not familliar with the rules for creating dog-men for crossovers. He......sounds cool I suppose........Not rally sure how he'd fit in as far as actual RP goes, but, whatever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solaria Posted December 5, 2012 Report Share Posted December 5, 2012 [colour=#daa520]Small question: If Kun was smart enough as a child to build Afla, why did he need Afla to take care of him? Was it more of a butler role?[/colour] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TechBrush Posted December 5, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2012 [colour=#daa520]Small question: If Kun was smart enough as a child to build Afla, why did he need Afla to take care of him? Was it more of a butler role?[/colour]Yeah, how did you get it that fast. lol well.. Kun was just a little kid so not a lot people would want to talk to a kid that was 2 or 3. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted December 7, 2012 Report Share Posted December 7, 2012 Is he from a certain universe, or just a story of your own? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TechBrush Posted December 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2012 Is he from a certain universe, or just a story of your own?oh... urm... ok. I'll fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted December 10, 2012 Report Share Posted December 10, 2012 oh... urm... ok. I'll fix that.Fix... what? It was just a question. :S Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dessa Posted December 10, 2012 Report Share Posted December 10, 2012 I think she's asking if he's from an existing setting, like Sonic, Pokémon, etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TechBrush Posted December 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2012 Fix... what? It was just a question. :Slol... it was a yes, due to Kun and Tech are different in every way. Kun is from the Sonic universe I would have to guess.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MidnightBlackhorn Posted December 11, 2012 Report Share Posted December 11, 2012 (edited) lol... it was a yes, due to Kun and Tech are different in every way. Kun is from the Sonic universe I would have to guess..What? I don't even.....-- images removed due to complaint -- Edited December 11, 2012 by Autumn images removed due to complaint Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Autumn Posted December 11, 2012 Report Share Posted December 11, 2012 What? I don't even.....If you have nothing constructive or enquiring regarding someone's application; do not post at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rosewind Posted December 11, 2012 Report Share Posted December 11, 2012 Hay there! We're going to stamp this application, but we wanted to give you a few tips, so you might choose to improve it later (or for if you decide to give Mane RP a try):Try to give more details about who this character is. Even for a crossover, other people will read it, so we want to be clear to them why this character is good with robotics, who Afla is, etc.Try taking only one or two creative ideas you like, and fuse them together in a way that makes sense. This is especially true for people that may not know what "Darkness" is, or why your character is a young robotics expert.Remember people will read this application, so running it through a spell or grammar check will make it easier for them to read. I understand English may not be your first language, so I applaud your efforts.Here's a little more from Scotchie:We think you have a neat character here, and we're going to stamp him, but we thought we'd offer a few suggestions based on questions that we find ourselves asking, and others who RP with Kun might ask as well!You might want to consider telling us what the "Darkness" is, although leaving it vague does instill a sense of mystery.You might want to add to his history what happened to him between the time that his parents died and he learned to build Afla. After all, everyone, even super smart people, have to learn the things they know somehow.Finally, you might want to elaborate on how he battles the darkness. Does Afla help?I am sure you might be able to work these things out as you RP with the character a little bit. You are always welcome to go back and edit your character if you discover the answer to these things we do not know about. Have fun in Crossovers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flutterscotch Posted December 11, 2012 Report Share Posted December 11, 2012 I went back to the past to reply! WHOOHOO!Good luck, Tech Brush! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TechBrush Posted December 12, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2012 I went back to the past to reply! WHOOHOO!Good luck, Tech Brush!heh... thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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