ziddia Posted May 31, 2011 Report Share Posted May 31, 2011 [ Pony Related Character ]Name: Aurora ShineSex: FemaleAge: Young MareSpecies: UnicornPelt Color: Blue/Purple (it flows)Mane/Tail Color & Style: Green, medium length and wavy.Eye Color: BlueCutie Mark: A collection of twinkling starsPhysique: Slim, slenderResidence: FillydelphiaOccupation: She has started a small business creating sparkling lights and beautiful pictures for mares and their children. She is also making some hanging mobiles for fillys, but she hasn't taken that up as an 'official' line of work yet. She's looking for a partner in her business, so that she can get new inspirations and have a pony to help out with her creations. All these beautiful objects are created by hoof, but she enchants them and makes them beautiful with her magic.Motivation: She always had a fascination for beautiful lights in the sky, especially the stars and the Aurora Ponealis, which she was named for. She tried to replicate the beauty of the Aurora in her works, but she hasnt quite made a perfect match yet.Character Summary: Aurora was born to poor parents at midnight, while they were traveling from a nameless town in the frozen North to Fillydelphia. The very first sight she saw was the Aurora, an her parents decided to name her after these lights. They made the trek across the ice successfully, and arrived in Fillydelphia hoping to get some sort of good job. Unfortunately for Aurora, they managed to get an amazing, well paid job from a rich film star, as an attendant.When Aurora started to grow up, she saw less and less of her parents, Star Shine and Twinkle Ice, and she did most everything on her own. Rather than becoming strong and independent, she became reserved and shy, afraid to go against any adult pony. Her parents really did love her dearly, but they didn't have the time to stay with her very much, especially after they both became the personal assistants of the star. Aurora was enrolled in pony school, where she was teased constantly for being a Blank Flank. She sought help from her parents, who decided to send her on an exchange trip to the North.Aurora enjoyed her time there, and loved everything about it. It had seemed to her that it was in her blood to be here- which, of course, it was. Her favorite part of the place was the amazing Aurora Lights, late at night. She spent ages outside every night, just to watch the Ponealis. When she was only just old enough to leave filly school, she was still a Blank Flank. Disappointed, she started to pack to go back to Fillydelphia. All of a sudden, she saw the stars appear outside, in the frozen land that was almost perpetually dark, and she saw the lights. From the heavens fell a piece of stone- a rock that had great power within it. Using her magic, she carved a beautiful star shaped stone, which seemed to glow from inside. She knew that this was her destiny, to create joy from what could only be a star. And a cutie mark of stars appeared on her flank. From then on, whenever she needed more pieces of stars, she would be able to seek them out, as though the equine gods had taken pity on her. She began her business and was happy.Now, she searches for the one stallion that can be for her, and she hopes to make her business amazing. She is lonely and scared, and all she wants is a comforting hoof. She enjoys her work and is ready for anything.Picture: Removed because I accidentally gave her wings. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ziddia Posted June 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2011 Updated! No longer a WIP. Still missing it's cutie mark though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Systemdertoten Posted June 1, 2011 Report Share Posted June 1, 2011 I'm pretty sure the wings would anyway hide the cutie mark from that angle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ziddia Posted June 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2011 Damn didn't see that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted June 1, 2011 Report Share Posted June 1, 2011 You say her mane and tail are green, but in the picture you on the application it's purple. Also, you don't have a hair style. Is it short, long, frizzy, curly, what? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlindJester Posted June 1, 2011 Report Share Posted June 1, 2011 How come your pony has wings?((I ask because of the photo))Is she a unicorn or a Pegasus?She can't be both because Alicorns/Unisus are against RP rules. I believe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted June 1, 2011 Report Share Posted June 1, 2011 How come your pony has wings?((I ask because of the photo))Is she a unicorn or a Pegasus?She can't be both because Alicorns/Unisus are against RP rules. I believe.PaintedWings makes an excellent point as well. I was going off of the picture, and totally didn't notice that she has wings as well. So is she a Unicorn or a Pegasus? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ziddia Posted June 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2011 Oops, my bad. Ignore the wings, accidentally added them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ziddia Posted June 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2011 My picture was bad, from an old write up. My bad. Removed pic. Anyone wanna take a look please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted June 6, 2011 Report Share Posted June 6, 2011 The only thing is that I don't think that she can make stars fall for herself. It seems like you're trying to say it's mysterious, but if it happens every time, it sounds almost like a talent or skill. That type of thing just seems a little too powerful.However, she can still make items from stars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thunder Boomer Posted June 6, 2011 Report Share Posted June 6, 2011 Genuine meteors that don't totally burn up in the atmosphere are actually pretty rare (And can be quite valuable). So, not only does a talent where she can call down space rocks seem too powerful, it also seems to ruin how rare these rocks are. They're not rare if she can produce them whenever she wants. Perhaps a better talent would be her ability to find meteorites and meteorite fragments. It could possibly work like Rarity's ability to find gems, or be something more unique. A lot of Meteorites tend to be high in iron. So perhaps she knows a spell that allows her horn to act like a magnet and lead her to where a meteorite might be buried. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 How is this character coming along? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ziddia Posted June 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2011 Finished, hopefully. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 Right, I see now. She's got a spell like Rarity, except instead of gem-finding it's fallen stars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manestream Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ziddia Posted June 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 Thanks everypony Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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