Bubbly Snacks Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 [ Pony Related Character ]Name: Bubbly SnacksSex: FemaleAge: MareSpecies: Earth PonyPelt Color: CreamMane/Tail Color & Style: Red, Bed-headed.Eye Color: GreenCutie Mark: Bottle of coke and a chocolate chip cookiePhysique: No scars, fair skin tone, kinds on the heavy set side.Residence: Sandtrot BeachOccupation: Helper at a diner in SandtrotMotivation: Serving Sweet Snacks and fizzy drinks!Likes: Soda Pop, Cookies, Cake, ChocolateDislikes: Bland food, boring activites, a unbusy shopCharacter Summary:Bubbly was born in Canterlot, but grew up in Sandtrot Beach to the ripe age she is now. She is sweet, kind, optimistic and loves to be around other ponies. Generally she is an all around awesome pony who loves to eat sweet and fizzy things. Her parents owned a Sweets shop in Canterlot, but after the birth of Bubbly they decided to shut down and move somewhere more quiet. They now own a diner where they sell milk shakes and fries all day and they all live in a cottage by the sea. She came to work at the Soda Shop, which is owned by a sweet old couple; which she met while helping her parents set up their shop in town; as soon as she was a Filly, which is also when she got her cutie mark! She been at It ever since, and loves it. She got her name name from the fact that she loved anything that deals with soda pop: soda shops, floats, and rock music. The snacks part of her name is her family name, as her grandparents own a sweets shop. Her favorite food is a root beer float, as it combines soda pop and ice cream! But she also enjoys a warm cookie from time to time also. Don't let her fair color fool you, she loves the sand and sun! And she aspires to open up her own shop when she grows up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlindJester Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 This is a good application so far but I would like to know more about her. What did her parents do? How did she get her own shop? Was it a present to her from her parents or did she manage to afford it herself? Where exactly does she live? In a apartment or a condo or house? Where are her parents now? Does she keep in touch with them? How did she get her name? Also unfortunately we don't use actual numbers here for ages and time since we don't know how they measure time and how they age. You can change her age to filly or make her slightly older by making her a young mare so she can still run the shop by herself. Sorry for all this I just want to know more about this character Edit: Sorry I misunderstood I thought you implied she owned the shop but I reread it and it says she's a helper at the shop. So who owns the shop? Does she know them personally? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 This is a good start, but we need to know more about your character's personality. If she was born in Canterlot, why did her family decide to move to Sandtrot Beach? Does she live with her parents still? Does she have any hopes or plans for the future, something that she wants to do or accomplish?Also, instead of using ages, could you please use Foal, Filly, or Mare? Foals are children, Fillies are female teens, and Mares are female adults. We don't really use ages around here, since we don't know how long ponies live. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbly Snacks Posted June 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 WOO! Thanks guys! All fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlindJester Posted June 25, 2011 Report Share Posted June 25, 2011 Unfortunately we already have a pony named Fizzy so if you would kindly change the first name to some similar such as Bubbles or Bubbly any other name of your choice. You can keep everything else the same, but if you do not wish to change her name I'm sure we can come to a mutual agreement around this little bump with the help of Manestream. Please let me know your thoughts as soon as possible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbly Snacks Posted June 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2011 Name changed to Bubbly Snacks. Is there a way to change my username to that? /shot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SonicBoom01 Posted June 25, 2011 Report Share Posted June 25, 2011 I think the admins can do that if you ask them directly, but I'm not sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlindJester Posted June 25, 2011 Report Share Posted June 25, 2011 Please be sure to change the titled of this app my dear.Also I'll ask Mane about the username change. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbly Snacks Posted June 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2011 Done and done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted June 28, 2011 Report Share Posted June 28, 2011 "And she aspires to open up her own shop when she grows up!" You list her age as a Mare. She really seems typical of a Filly, is there any particular reason you have her as age as a Mare? Because if she is, she already IS grown up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlindJester Posted June 28, 2011 Report Share Posted June 28, 2011 "And she aspires to open up her own shop when she grows up!" You list her age as a Mare. She really seems typical of a Filly, is there any particular reason you have her as age as a Mare? Because if she is, she already IS grown up. Actually I think that was my fault.I got confused and gave the wrong age.Sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Bubbly Snacks Posted June 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2011 ...yay...lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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