xXDashieXx Posted November 29, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2013 ((yay!! full now!))Rainbow Dash turned around to look at Twilight. "So, princess, Celestia said something about a plain field. Maybe you know about that AJ!" Rainbow Dash asked. "Well, a plain field, the only one i know of is sweet apple acres. Otherwise i don't know about any plain fields." Applejack said. "Hey, Rainbow maybe you can fly up and see if you can find a plain field. Applejack suggested. Rainbow Dash looked up at the sky. "Ok, i'll give it a shot!" Rainbow Dash told them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steamboltx Posted November 29, 2013 Report Share Posted November 29, 2013 Fluttershy greeted her friends when they approached, she nudged at Spike, playfully. She bowed before Princess Twilight Sparkle, she'd made a habit of doing this, forgetting Twilight's request to not bow, but Fluttershy felt it was necessary. Twilight was now royalty after all. When she arose, she felt Jon rubbing against her flank again. She playfully bumped back at him, feeling as tho Jon had always been a good friend of hers. "The magic of friendship." She thought to herself, smiling. Pinkie Pie looked up at the sky as Rainbow Dash zoomed up high. "Ooooh! This place is sooo boring!" Pinkie complained. She began searching the ground and looking at her friends, thinking of a way to help her now increased boredom. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXDashieXx Posted November 29, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2013 Applejack glanced at Pinkie. "Lets hurry up! Pinkie is already getting bored." Applejack said. Rainbow Dash was high up in the sky. "I found it!!" Rainbow Dash shouted from the sky. She had found a plain field in the middle of nowhere. She was looking when she saw a sign saying Candie's Bake Shop. "And, um, there is also a bake shop!" Rainbow Dash pointed out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steamboltx Posted November 29, 2013 Report Share Posted November 29, 2013 Pinkie Pie gave a confused expression. "Bake shop? What pony would have a bake shop out here?" Not dwelling on it for too long, Pinkie shrugged and bounced her way to the front of the group. "Let's check it out!" Fluttershy looked over at Jon, "I'll be right back." She assured him. She began fluttering her wings, flying up to be eye level with Rainbow Dash. "Um, do you think it's safe to go to the bake shop, Dash?" Fluttershy looked out over the plain field, examining the bake shop, becoming slightly nervous. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ScratchAttack99 Posted November 29, 2013 Report Share Posted November 29, 2013 Jon made sure Thunder was keeping an eye on the grounded ponies and took to the air himself, flying up to Fluttershy and Raindbow Dash's level. He kept reletively close to Fluttershy as he examined bake shop in the distance. "Something feels.....off maybe. I haven't heard of this bake shop and few things escape my scrutinity. Allow me to go first everypony." He took off in an instant, landing a few feet from the bake shop and slowly circling it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXDashieXx Posted November 29, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2013 "Of course its fine!" Rainbow told them. "Yea, lets get going." Applejack said. Rainbow Dash flew back down to the ground. Applejack stood next to Pinkie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steamboltx Posted November 29, 2013 Report Share Posted November 29, 2013 A glimmer of doubt filled Fluttershy's eyes. She knew something was off about the bake shop and she didn't want to find out what. She flew behind Jon, landing on the ground beside him in front of the bake shop. She glanced back, waiting for her friends to catch up. "I don't feel okay about this place, Jon." She gave him a worried expression. Pink, fluffy hair flew everywhere as Pinkie Pie continued to spring to her destination. "I hope there's cupcakes!" She exclaimed, smiling at Applejack. She then looked up at Rainbow Dash, a strange scratch in her voice, "Don't you, Dash?" She smiled creepily. She shrugged and bounced over to Thunder. "Wanna be my friend?!" Her mouth left open with a grin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXDashieXx Posted November 30, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2013 Rainbow Dash looked at Pinkie. She flew over to see through a window on top of the house. "Wait! There's people inside!" Rainbow Dash said. Applejack looked at Rainbow. "Say what now?" Applejack asked. "I said there are people inside!" Rainbow Dash repeated. Applejack looked at Rainbow with a doubtful look. "Al right, but lets still go in." Applejack said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steamboltx Posted November 30, 2013 Report Share Posted November 30, 2013 Pinkie Pie overheard Rainbow Dash say there was ponies inside the bake shop. Knowing she just needed to be friends with everypony, she grew anxious to meet them. Pinkie bounced over to the front of the bake shop, practically busting open the front door. She stood on her hind legs, front legs outstretched in the air, and a huge grin on her muzzle, "Helllllllooooooo!" She exclaimed. "I'm Pinkie Pie! it's nice to m-" Pinkie cut herself off at the realization that this wasn't any ordinary bake shop. Fluttershy stayed behind with Jon, she was very jittery. Something just didn't feel right at all about this random bake shop. She peered ahead to see her friends peeking inside the bake shop, a blank expression on their faces. "What's going on?" She whispered to herself. (I'm not sure where you are wanting to go with this RP, Dashie, but for some reason I'm wanting to go dark with it? Haha. Up to you tho! ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXDashieXx Posted November 30, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2013 (i'm open to whatever! But, we are going to have different episodes. This one is episode 1. Eventually i'll have to stop it and make a new episode xD!)Rainbow Dash looked at Pinkie. "Pinkie SHUT UP!" Rainbow Dash shouted at Pinkie. "Yea! We can't let them know were here!" Applejack pointed out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steamboltx Posted November 30, 2013 Report Share Posted November 30, 2013 Fluttershy hooved to the front door, "Um, too late." She pointed at the stranger ponies who were glaring, angrily at her and her friends. Pinkie Pie remained froze on her hind legs, front legs still outstretched in the air, holding a grin. She darted her eyes over at Fluttershy, "Should we leave?" she said through gritted teeth. Fluttershy just simply nodded her head, backing up slowly out the front door. Pinkie Pie gave a nervous laugh and darted out the front door. Still inching her way out the back door, Fluttershy gave a nervous smile, "Sorry to have-" She gulped, "Interrupted you. We will be going now." She turned around to leave when she heard low growls coming from the stranger pony's chests. Her eyes grew wide before charging off out the front door, hearing the sound of galloping behind her, she began screaming uncontrollably. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXDashieXx Posted November 30, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2013 (i like where this is going )Rainbow Dash was running beside Fluttershy and Applejack. "Now, don't you look back ya'll!" Applejack told them. Suddenly, Rainbow Dash took off in the air. "I think i lost them!" Rainbow Dash exclaimed but she was dearly wrong. There were two ponies to both sides of her! "Shoot!" Rainbow Dash exclaimed. Applejack sped ahead with Flutteshy shy alongside her. "Keep running, run like you've never run before!" Applejack exclaimed. Suddenly Princess Luna appeared in front of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QueenChrysalis747 Posted November 30, 2013 Report Share Posted November 30, 2013 (And Im leaving, I dont do dark rp) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steamboltx Posted December 1, 2013 Report Share Posted December 1, 2013 (We might want to move this to the 18+ thread, just incase ;D) Fluttershy couldn't breathe, her lungs were burning, not only from screaming but constant running. She looked behind her to make sure all of her friends were okay. She turned back around to Applejack, who was also panting from running. She stopped suddenly, feeling a presence in front of her. She looked up to see Princess Luna hovering over her. "P-princess Luna?" she stammered, a confused expression on her face.Pinkie Pie ran and never looked back, she couldn't bring herself to stop. A fiery spark arose inside her. She felt she needed to get away as soon as possible. She ran until she crashed into her group of friends, whom were staring at Princess Luna. "Guys! They're gaining on us!" Pinkie Pie's voice cracked in desperation. She looked behind, seeing the stranger ponies galloping closer and closer, her eyes were full of fear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXDashieXx Posted December 1, 2013 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2013 (yea)Princess Luna looked around at the stranger ponies. "I see you have found the place where the elements of harmony are hidden. Unfortunately, I can't let you do that." Princess Luna said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ScratchAttack99 Posted December 1, 2013 Report Share Posted December 1, 2013 Jon was flying right by Fluttershy when the Princess arrived. "Princess! You can't be here! But....well permision to use force to stop these ponies!" He kept close to Fluttershy,feeling oddly protective of her. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXDashieXx Posted December 2, 2013 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2013 Princess Luna looked at Jon. "You've failed your mission." Princess Luna told him. Rainbow Dash flew over. "Wait, how can we FAIL the mission?" Rainbow Dash asked. "Well, for starters." Princess Celestia said. "Why is Celestia here?" Rainbow Dash asked. "This is a hot mess!" AJ said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ScratchAttack99 Posted December 2, 2013 Report Share Posted December 2, 2013 Jon 's jaw dropped, his pupils shrunk to dots, and his ears folded back. "He whispered. He felt his world shatter around him. He had never failed before, not in his entire time in service to the sister Prinncesses. He hung his head low in shame and started walking off. He couldn't be there any longer,he was just a failure.Thunder glared at Luna and spoke up. "Now that is a sack of hay! His job was to escort these fillies and see them safe! There is not a scratch on them so how canyou just say he failed?!" The unicorn was so ad his horn was sputtering sparks and he shook with his withheld rage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXDashieXx Posted December 2, 2013 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2013 "You didn't retrieve the elements of harmony." Princess Luna said simply. She looked around at the other ponies. "Yes. The elements of harmony are in the wrong hands now." Princess Celestia said. "What do you mean?!" Rainbow Dash asked. Princess Celestia looked down at Rainbow Dash. "Well, you know the elements were at Twilights house the entire time." Celestia said. "We thought you might go to your house to check a book or something Twilight." Luna said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ScratchAttack99 Posted December 2, 2013 Report Share Posted December 2, 2013 ((actually what Thunder said is true, she only charged Jon with the protection of the 6, not the retriviel, that was their job)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXDashieXx Posted December 2, 2013 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2013 ((yea but he had to make sure they actually got the elements also)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ScratchAttack99 Posted December 2, 2013 Report Share Posted December 2, 2013 Thunder snorted in frustration. "Now listen here Princess Luna, look how heartless you are! Look at that Pegasus and then look me in the eye and tell me, is that stallion as big a failure as your letting him believe he is right now?" His sparks were growing faster as he was getting angrier and angrier. Jon was already through the brush and out of sight. He kept walking, head hung low and heading towards the castle. At his current pace he would arrive in a few days be he cared not. He would just get back to making armor though he didn't think the Princesses would want a failure to do as such a job anymore. He didn't care, he just wanted to busy himself until he knew his ward would call for him so she may dismiss him of his duties as her guard.((Well, more drama to the pot! Lol. I guess either have Luna send Fluttershy to find him or do it herself if you want, he needs someone to cheer him up!)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXDashieXx Posted December 3, 2013 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2013 ((okay))Princess Luna looked at Fluttershy. "Go comfort him." Princess Luna told her. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QueenChrysalis747 Posted December 4, 2013 Report Share Posted December 4, 2013 (If this stays away from grim dark I guess ill stay but this plot makes no sense what so ever) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXDashieXx Posted December 4, 2013 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2013 ((its a remake of the season almost.)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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