PyroBlaze Posted December 18, 2014 Report Share Posted December 18, 2014 Flux smiled slightly before walking over to the sleeping Slash and curling up beside him on the floor, wrapping him in her embrace as she closed her eyes and fell asleep as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flashdash250 Posted December 18, 2014 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2014 "I do not like to be mean to my friends and my sweet Venus so Slash can we go back to get along as friends like it was before this happen and Slash sorry if i mad you i hate getting mad at my friends so can we be friends with a funny look in his eyes towards Slash and Flux and where is Pyro and Cory at now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CanvasMayHogany Posted December 18, 2014 Report Share Posted December 18, 2014 (( I suppose and he is doing much better but got anything for sentence structure?))Venus smiled as Flash apologized but frowned as Slash ignored. She sighed and turned to Flash. "Let's go home, dearest. We have work to do." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SymphonicFire Posted December 18, 2014 Report Share Posted December 18, 2014 ((I'll try to find something on sentence structure, grammar, and the use of quotation marks))Slash sank his sharp teeth into his bear plushie as he dreamt of something painful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PyroBlaze Posted December 18, 2014 Report Share Posted December 18, 2014 Flux frowned at the feelings Slash was giving off. They weren't pleasant. She hugged him tighter as she slept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flashdash250 Posted December 18, 2014 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2014 "please Slash lets put all of this stuff in the past and be friend please i do not want to hurt you Slash you are my friend let's stop for Venus please Slash!!!!!!! Flashdash yell it out towards Slash. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SymphonicFire Posted December 18, 2014 Report Share Posted December 18, 2014 "Hurt me...heh heh" Slash mumbled, his mind still in a dream. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flashdash250 Posted December 18, 2014 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2014 "Slash my sonicrainboomflash is not just for show and have been working out at the Cloudsdale gym for three weeks now and i am faster do not challange me. "Slash i am stoping because Venus ask me to if it was not for her. Then you know i can make you so dizzy that will make it hard for you to find me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CanvasMayHogany Posted December 18, 2014 Report Share Posted December 18, 2014 "Flashdash. Slash is no longer out here. He is inside and appears to be asleep." Venus said to Flashdash as she heard him continue the fight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SymphonicFire Posted December 18, 2014 Report Share Posted December 18, 2014 Slash woke up and saw Flux next to him. He wiggled out of her hooves and popped his head out of the window. "Flashdash, when I think about a challenge, I don't think about a race. To be honest, I'm not even challenging you, that would be a waste of energy. Working out in a gym for three weeks doesn't really change anything, it's more like three months before you see a small difference. I'm already gettin a headache from the pointless words you're throwing at me, so being dizzy is out of question." Slash said, with his unamused face. "If you are looking for a challenge, I'd be happy to have another bird for dinner" he snickered as his pupils became slits and his teeth became sharper. His face went back to normal as he shut the window. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CanvasMayHogany Posted December 18, 2014 Report Share Posted December 18, 2014 Venus gasped at Slash's words "HE IS TRYING TO BE NICE AND APOLOGIZE TO YOU AND YOUR BEING RUDE!" She yelled unable to hold her anger back anymore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PyroBlaze Posted December 18, 2014 Report Share Posted December 18, 2014 Flux woke up as Slash left her embrace, sighing at Venus' yelling. Why couldn't they get along? She stood slowly, grabbing Slash with her magic as she dragged him over to her. "Would you just stop? I don't want you two fighting, so please just stop." She said, looking him in the eye. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flashdash250 Posted December 18, 2014 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2014 " you have not seen what i had to do to survival in my past. i was chase by group of bully dragons. and then when i got to mad my eyes starting to change color from my nomal eye color to a bright red color. and when i woke up the bully group of dragons that was chaseing me. was dead all the way around me i lost my real wings that day. and thats why i have these metal wings now Slash. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SymphonicFire Posted December 18, 2014 Report Share Posted December 18, 2014 Slash gulped as Flux talked, looking away. "Fine, I'll appologize" he said as he went out and faced Flashdash and Venus. "I appologize for being stubborn" he said, sighing a little. How could Venus say Flashdash was apologizing if he was threatening him at the same time? Slash didn't really believe Flashdash's story either, thinking it was weird for dragons to be chasing ponies, they usually don't care about them. It was weird that he had this...supernatural instinct that turns him into a killer. Slash has a similar problem, but it was because there was an error while he was fused with a cat, giving him the 'wild animal' instinct that turns on when he is angry. Did Flashdash really think that he could scare him with that tale? Flashdash thinks that he had a hard past, but he only knows his own. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CanvasMayHogany Posted December 19, 2014 Report Share Posted December 19, 2014 (( since when do you have metal wings?)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SymphonicFire Posted December 19, 2014 Report Share Posted December 19, 2014 ((That's what I thought. The backstory itself is quite uncanny)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PyroBlaze Posted December 19, 2014 Report Share Posted December 19, 2014 (Yeah, it's confusing me as well.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flashdash250 Posted December 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2014 the metal wings thing is a lie. "but the rest of my past is true besides the metal wings part if you was there when my eyes turn mad red i just had to look at it for few seconds when my eyes are red to kill it and if you push me to far. It will happen to you Slash thanks for the sorry and i forgive you for it so can you two help us with this party please?!. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PyroBlaze Posted December 19, 2014 Report Share Posted December 19, 2014 (... I don't even know anymore. Now he's got a literal death glare.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flashdash250 Posted December 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2014 " yes that can happen to me once i get push to far so are you two going to help us with this party. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SymphonicFire Posted December 19, 2014 Report Share Posted December 19, 2014 (( I know Pyro, that red-eye-going-to-kill-you thing is just...*Fire pushes herself away from the computer and gets up from her chair, shaking her head as she walks out of the door*))"If you lied about the 'metal wings', then i can assume that the whole things was a lie. How did get it? Why did the dragons pick on you? Why are the dragons even bothered to bully a pony? Why did you allow yourself to get so angry, that killing them was the only way to calm you down?" Slash asked, a cold look on his eyes. "I wouldn't brag or threaten ponies by talking about this kind of...curse, and after all those death threats, you still expect me to go to your party? Do you take me as a fool?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flashdash250 Posted December 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2014 "Yes but i said i was sorry like my sweet Venus told you Slash.and i ask you to help us with the party but if you do not come to this party it will hurt my sweet Venus heart. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SymphonicFire Posted December 20, 2014 Report Share Posted December 20, 2014 "Well, saying 'sorry' doesn't always solve everything. If you break a plate and try to fix it with tape, it's still not the same as it was before" Slash said as he turned away. "I'm sorry Venus, you would understand" he apologized as he walked into his house, closing the door behind him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PyroBlaze Posted December 20, 2014 Report Share Posted December 20, 2014 Well, at least he had apologized. Now just to hope they both just dropped the issue. He didn't want them to get into a fight. She simply watched as Slash came back into the house. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SymphonicFire Posted December 20, 2014 Report Share Posted December 20, 2014 Slash looked at Flux, but didn't say anything. He locked the door with his tail and walked over to the kitchen, pouring himself a glass of water. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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