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That first part of yours

Only had 3 syllables.

You have failed the test.

*BUZZER* I'm sorry, it is you who have failed the test. While most people do the usual 17 syllables, 5-7-5 form, that is not the /only/ way it must be done. In fact, haiku are more about the feeling, 'the moment', than about strict form. [ http://www.ahapoetry.com/haiartjr.htm ]

Now, I guess I better throw a few haiku in here

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scattering dead leaves

with a wide sweep of my hands,

looking for green grass.

-

Rainbow Dash overhead,

the wind captured in her wings--

a sonic rainboom

-

the last sip of the sixth infusion,

and my eyes are heavy, drowsy;

first snowfall of the year.

-

peeking under

Mother Nature's skirt:

the willow tree.

-

I saw the crow

caw sadly at the sky

and I just had to weep

-

quivering leaf

still hanging

in winter's midst

-

heavy snow.

a fir tree

breaks.

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There, a nice little sampling of some of my haiku. That Rainbow Dash one I just wrote now, because I wanted at least one pony haiku in there. :P

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