Skye Posted April 8, 2011 Report Share Posted April 8, 2011 I'd like to see a little more development on his summary. Granted he doesn't have much of a role in the episode, but you can still draw a number of conclusions and update them if/when they are confirmed or changed in later episodes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hippo Posted April 15, 2011 Report Share Posted April 15, 2011 Last updated April 9th, 2011. Is this summary good? Or... What kinds of other things could you be wondering about Madden in his 'free time'?Also, I'm a little torn between whether to make Hoofball it's own sport, (which is really is) or traditional kickball with pony characters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skye Posted April 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2011 I think he looks alright to me now, but I'll leave it up to the powers that be to decide! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hippo Posted April 15, 2011 Report Share Posted April 15, 2011 I think he looks alright to me now, but I'll leave it up to the powers that be to decide!Just alright? Just tell me what you think!TELLMETELLMETELLMETELLMETELLMETELLMETELLMETELLME! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manestream Posted April 15, 2011 Report Share Posted April 15, 2011 I know Meow and Ashi are handling the Mane cast characters personally, but I don't see any major problems or faults with this application, I think its coming together. You might consider moving the videos and larger pictures to the bottom of the post, that would prevent the rest of the bio getting 'lost'.You could also delve deeper into his history (make some up) about how he found his cutie mark, past events that he has announced, and perhaps future dreams? A new stadium, or perhaps a bigger event for all of Equestria that he dreams of announcing for? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hippo Posted April 16, 2011 Report Share Posted April 16, 2011 You could also delve deeper into his history (make some up) about how he found his cutie mark, past events that he has announced, and perhaps future dreams? A new stadium, or perhaps a bigger event for all of Equestria that he dreams of announcing for?I struggle a little bit with trying to not over-do it. He wouldn't be too much fun if he literally lived, breathed, ate, slept sports. So as far as his dreams? I fell like his dream job has pretty much been met.I definitely plan to update his backstory with deeper material. But I'd rather add it when I feel an inspiration I see in his character arising, and not write it now just to put something down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manestream Posted April 18, 2011 Report Share Posted April 18, 2011 I think it would help other RP'ers interact with this character if they could have some idea of areas that he can grow. No one ever stops growing or learning, we just deal with different types of problems at different points in our life. That's why I was trying to encourage you to develop something open-ended for this character so that other people may come up with ideas in how to interact with him- and even through RP suggest themes along the lines of growth you have laid out.Right now it feels like its lacking that open-ended factor for potential growth, and that gives this character a stunted feeling. If he's not looking for anything, then he's gone stagnant. Its possible for something to come up in RP; but i'd prefer you to have some direction/plan with where you will be taking him, rather than relying on RP to suggest something your interested in.However, thats just me- there are other people who can approve as well :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 Hey there, are you going to be continuing on with this character? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hippo Posted May 19, 2011 Report Share Posted May 19, 2011 Yes.I am taking Manestream's feedback into consideration, but I still am waiting on approval too. Any extra feedback would be gravy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hippo Posted May 19, 2011 Report Share Posted May 19, 2011 Added paragraph of character flaws. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted May 22, 2011 Report Share Posted May 22, 2011 For his age you can just put Stallion, you don't need the adult part. A Stallion IS an adult...so it's kind of repeating the same thing.In the Character Summary, you say, the Young Flyer Competition. I believe it's actually called, the Best Young Flyers Competition. You also say 'spokesman', when it should be spokespony. I also don't think you need to put 'and ESRN' in the title, since ESRN is not a name of the character.Other than that, it looks good, but you'll have to wait for Meow's final approval. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted May 27, 2011 Report Share Posted May 27, 2011 Not quite sure who is handling cast applications right now, please just sit tight! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hippo Posted May 28, 2011 Report Share Posted May 28, 2011 no rush, i'm in a reorganizing mood for my OC's anyways. This Cast charcter can wait to dive into RP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted May 29, 2011 Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 Meow is still handling cast applications, so this will require her approval.But it's got my approval stamp. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meow Posted May 30, 2011 Report Share Posted May 30, 2011 Approved!Thanks so much for your patience, sorry it took me so long to get around to this but it looks great. ^^Remember to review the Cast Member Policies! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hippo Posted June 26, 2011 Report Share Posted June 26, 2011 Will this character be moved to the Pegasus subforum because of the new discussions about background ponies not considered cast? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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