Thrylos Posted March 19, 2012 Report Share Posted March 19, 2012 Roleplay Type: "Mane" RPName: HopsSex: MaleAge: Older StallionSpecies: PegasusEye Color: A cheerful lime greenCoat Color: Nice, beer brown with much lighter cream bubbly pattern on his rumpMane/Tail/Markings Color & Style: Short, leafy green in a leafy look.Physique: Burly, tough, a little short but stout nonethelessCutie Mark: A water droplet splashing into a cup of beer, the symbol of Rain Splash Alley PubOrigin/Residence: Old Canterlot, before it was so big, in an alleyway pub only those that know can reach easilyOccupation: Bartender and Rain Splash Alley Pub boss.Motivation: Family and friendships that have lasted are the reason why Hops just keeps truckin' with his small company.Likes: Friendship, a good ale, clouds, Princess Luna, and music.Dislikes: Corporate giants, a small bit of himself that doesn't like Celestia, though he trusts her wisdom, the feeling is just sort of a bur in his hide, and the idea of death.Character Summary:Hops had a quite normal life until he reached the age of a young colt. His father, Winder, the main brewer, showed him how to make beer, and his mother, Fizza, the bartender, showed how to work the front. He helped in both departments, and was an almost master at both. By the time his parents were to old to run it, Hops parents turned over the pub when they retired. As years passed, less ponies came and Hops believed it was his fault. But hope in an amazing thing, and as regulars became close friends, Hops cherished every moment of life. Ever since, Hops has kept the pub open for a happy long life.His cutie mark was interesting. In a surge of business, just as a colt he had to start working. His parents were tired, but Hops kept the store on its feet. At the end of the surge, in amazement his cutie mark appeared, the symbol of fresh, crisp life in an old, aged environment! It was the cutie mark that would become the pubs logo as well. Hops is a fun and cheerful guy, always happy with both old and new costumers. But he is serious about the company and go from the silliest stallion you'll ever meet to super serious in a second flat(try and clear clouds that fast, Rainbow Dash!), and is the drive for the company. Though without a doubt Hops believes in his business, there has always been an urge for him to return to the skies that the pegasi came from, and always hopes he can journey with an airship! But liking the clouds doesn't give you a reason to destroy friends, and Hops knows how devastated he would be if he got rid of the business. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted March 21, 2012 Report Share Posted March 21, 2012 How is this Application coming along? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thrylos Posted March 21, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2012 Oh, fine! I'm going to jump on it the second I get the chance! At the moment, I have to write a script for student film. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thrylos Posted March 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2012 Finished! It will probably need a lot of editing after completion, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted March 26, 2012 Report Share Posted March 26, 2012 Finished! It will probably need a lot of editing after completion, though.Your title is still marked as [WiP]. Your Application can't be assessed until it is marked [Final]. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thrylos Posted March 27, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2012 Yeeup. I decided I was more interested in completing my other one, and marked that one as final. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted March 30, 2012 Report Share Posted March 30, 2012 How is this Application coming along? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thrylos Posted April 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2012 Complete change of plans! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SunsetSombra Posted April 2, 2012 Report Share Posted April 2, 2012 Reading it over, it feels like there's still some details missing - like there's a pony-jigsaw that could be complete, but the pieces are all missing and need just a little bit more working on - maybe a little exposition on his likes, dislikes, ambitions for the future...that may help to flesh out what otherwise looks like a genuinely potentially solid pony.Give it maybe a little more thought, and we'll roll with it from there - it's not really a deal breaker, but I do feel like there's just a tiny 'something' lacking here.However, if you honestly can't add to it by tomorrow night, we can probably let it through and see how it fares in the RP as-is...I just felt it might benefit from an extra chance to be creative! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thrylos Posted April 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 2, 2012 Great idea! I just was using him as a background pony, and I have not a single pegasus in the mane rp, so I thought I'd give it a go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thrylos Posted April 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2012 Well, thats about it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Thrylos Posted April 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2012 Yays! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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