MysticWater Posted April 15, 2012 Report Share Posted April 15, 2012 Roleplay Type: Mane Role-playName: Velvet RoseSex: FemaleAge: Young MareSpecies: PegasusEye Color:HazelCoat Color: BrownMane/Tail/Markings Color & Style: Her mane is smooth and long and so is her tail, both are made up of red and light pinkPhysique: sideways hourglass figure and tallCutie Mark: A Tiger Lily with Diamonds on all of its petalsOrigin/Residence: CloudsdaleOccupation: Clothes DesignerMotivation:Her main motivation is to make ponies look beautiful and happy with her creations, her other motivation is to become one of the most famous pony designers in all of EquestriaLikes: Stylish clothes, making new friends, happy customers, and relaxationDislikes: unhappy customers, rude ponies, and brain blocksCharacter Summary:Velvet was born the only foal to two normal weather working Pegasi in Cloudsdale. At an early age they tried to coax her into weather but she preferred fashion, especially when one day a beautiful pony that had butterfly wings instead of normal wings came to Cloudsdale with a few other ponies from Ponyville. Her outfit was amazing and so were her wings. Ever since Velvet saw those gorgeous wings she vowed to at-least attempt to make clothes that at-least looked as beautiful as those wings. Velvet is an honest,nice, and generous pony. The one obstacle that kept keeping her from her dreams was that she wasn’t experienced enough to even start sewing. After taking pointers from some of the outfitters in Cloudsdale she started getting started. Her first attempts were nothing far from shabby. There were cousins of hers who were willing to model her clothes so she could see them on a pony but they always looks disgusting!It took her a while until she finally made a suitable dress but it was missing certain accessories. By the time she was a filly and nearly finished flight school, she flew down to the ground and went to a lake where she saw a few lilies floating in a lake. They had little dew drops on each of their petals as if someone purposefully put them there for her to find. She gently took the lilies up towards the clouds and far enough so the dew drops froze onto the clouds as they were. She was so excited that she immediately sewed the lilies into the dress. When one of her cousins wore the dress around Cloudsdale the dress was so gorgeous that it gleamed the sunlight off of it and attracted a mate to her cousin causing not long after for her cousin to get married. At the wedding Velvet received congratulations from not just her parents but also random ponies that she never met in her life. She recievd her cuie mark after realizing that her talent was that she could bring together her friends and family with beauty. The diamonds represented her friends and family and the lily represented the beauty of her outfits.After realizing her true talent she set up a shop in Cloudsdale.Her personality helped her get her new found customers great bargains and she was generous enough to let her customers put clothes on lay-away until they could get enough bits to buy their favorite outfits. Her parents visit her when ever they could due to their jobs to see what new masterpieces she had creates (which weren’t many) but they were glad that she never gave up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sevofthesands Posted April 15, 2012 Report Share Posted April 15, 2012 i like the character but could you elaborate on the cutie mark i'm having a bit of a tough time understanding Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MysticWater Posted April 15, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2012 okay! but wait do you mean the description of it or how she got it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sevofthesands Posted April 15, 2012 Report Share Posted April 15, 2012 what the mark represents why is it what it is if that makes any sense :S Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MysticWater Posted April 15, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2012 Ohhhh ok! I'l see what I can do xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MysticWater Posted April 15, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2012 I believe the problem is fixed now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sevofthesands Posted April 15, 2012 Report Share Posted April 15, 2012 yes that makes more sense to me but what do i know *Shrug.avi* :S Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MysticWater Posted April 15, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2012 lol you seem to know alot! xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brianblackberry Posted April 19, 2012 Report Share Posted April 19, 2012 Greetings,I am struggling with this sentence:At an early age they tried to coax her into weather but she preferred, especially when one day a beautiful pony that had butterfly wings instead of normal wings came to Cloudsdale with a few other ponies from Ponyville.What did she prefer? The sentence indicates she prefers something over weather work, but what would that be?Ever since Velvet saw those gorgeous wings she vowed to at-least attempt to make clothes that at-least looked 2/3 as beautiful as those wings.Why two-thirds? Why not "as beautiful!" What other aspects of her personally are there, what other things is she into? You mention she is a honest, nice, and generous pony; how do these traits manifest in her interaction with others? Answering these may help have her become a more well-rounded and multidimensional charters, which would be far more fun to play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MysticWater Posted April 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2012 Eddited it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brianblackberry Posted April 20, 2012 Report Share Posted April 20, 2012 Looking good! For Great Fashion Justice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RCTwilightSparkle Posted April 24, 2012 Report Share Posted April 24, 2012 (edited) Your application has been accepted but you will not be able to RP in the mane RP section until a moderator moves you to the Roleplayers group. It shouldn't take long! Edited April 24, 2012 by Helix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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