RCTwilightSparkle

I'm sorry but you missed a few, these will need to be removed as well. Thanks! - RC

When you are approved the character application will no longer be in the apps section, it will be listed under the accepted application forum. Your app needs to be approved first by a helpstaffer and then by a moderator, you'll see the stamps. Like Dio said you're going to need to remove all references to cast characters from this application before it can be approved for mane RP. Thank you - RC

that's adorable! Thanks

Hey Holy can you please put a WIP or FINAL tag on this app? thanks - RC

How's this app coming along? - RC

how's this app coming along? - RC

how is this application coming along?

if you're still taking requests I'd LOVE one of Star Chaser!

This is an interesting app but I have a few comments, Name & Cutie mark: I understand that you're trying to reference the car company with this theme but cars simply don't exist in Equestria. As an actual name, Mercedes refers to the virgin mary and isn't very pony-like. If you'd like to keep the Mercedes-Benz logo as her cutie mark we're going to need a setting appropriate explanation as to why this symbol is her cutie mark. Origin: HockEnheim isn't a city in our Mane RP setting, however if you'd like to design and build it yourself you can make a thread in the proposed lore section. If you decide to go this route please keep in mind that lore acceptance isn't a quick process and not all user lore becomes board canon. Unless you have a specific reason for using the city of HockEnheim, the quickest fix would be to choose a city that already exists in our board lore. Motivation: I'm having trouble understanding how levitating herself could be her motivation in life? Since she is an engineer maybe her motivation could be to design and build things? Character Summary: I'd like to see more information here, some topics that should be discussed in a character summary are - RC

I just need to ask before this app goes any further, do you have permission to use the image you're using at the top of the app? Thanks -RC

How is this application coming along? - RC

How is this application coming along? - RC

How is this application coming along? - RC

How is this application coming along? - RC

How is this application coming along? - RC

How is this application coming along? Also can you please add either a WIP or FINAL tag to this app, thank you. - RC

How is this application coming along? - RC

I've just got one little comment about this app, if he's graduated from canterlotU and he's a full fledged journalist he should be a Stallion by now - RC