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  1. Well the game was inspired by a creepypasta, so in a way I guess you could say that.
  2. here is my review of the game http://www.canterlot.com/blog/302/entry-2221-neo-reviews-friendship-is-8-bit-story-of-the-blanks/
  3. Well here we go! Now we're going to do something a bit different and give this episode a bit of a darker message. I was thinking about saving this for October but I'm doing it now, so let's get started! So Story of the blanks starts with you playing as Applebloom, somewhere (Being outside or in the everfree forest.) you find Twilight who is taking an item to Zecora. She thanks you and also says that you don't want to be out in the dark. On your way home you encounter some fallen trees. Twilight tells you to wait there as she works but when you move up you'll find a filly who wanders into the forest, and as you follow something really creepy tingles down your spine. The story at first was hard to understand, even after I played through the game again it was still hard to figure and piece together but I soon did figure out the real story was and I loved it. The concept of creepy things in equestria has always made me excited. I also do wonder how the first cutie mark was discovered and how other's reacted to it so such a thing. The story does have some holes though, does Zecora know anything about this? Did Twilight see any of the events going on or was she being too focused on other objectives? Was it even real at all? These are the things that never really get answered. Since no one but Applebloom reacts to it I can't answer if it was true, and even a little talk at the end still doesn't answer anything because it was just a monologue, so if no pony else is talking did it all just go on in Applebloom's head? Gameplay was interesting to say the least. I mean I know the game was horror but it was really easy and really short. There's one part where you might get stuck but other than that I don't think there is any other place that is too difficult. I did love a puzzle in the beginning of the game but that was the only puzzle and kind of made me depressed that it was the only one. I would have loved to see this event take place over a long time so I could play more but alas the gameplay is short and seems to be a running, puzzle game with only one puzzle. (Possibly two if you count the rock.) The graphics of the game were meant to be in 8-bit and even in 8-bit it's kind of creepy, the whole aura about it coupled with the colours of the dark creepy forest or bright red fire really make it seem creepy. I happened to play it at 1 in the morning EST and I can say that I was creeped out. Also the designs of the ponies really fit into the setting as well. Now to be fair I hadn't heard about this game before and while I did study creepypasta during a time before canterlot I purposefully did not want to read story of the blanks. Being an MLP creepypasta I just shoved it aside, gaming creeppastas were my favorite and I did read some others but never did I read any MLP creepypasta. That being said I was glad I gave the game a chance as it was fun to play and I did like it. However the game should be longer. (Though it should be set up for a sequel according to the ending.) With all of this in mind guys I give this game a: C+/B-...wait that's not right... I give this game a: 7.7 out of 10 It's a good game that is short enough to be worth your time but I do think it should be longer or at least have sequels. (But don't go crazy like the Luna games, I still have nightmare about our princess of the night.) All right guys, so tell me what you think of the game in the comments below, here's a link the game: http://jayisgames.com/games/friendship-is-magic-story-of-the-blanks/ and I'll see you all next time!
  4. Well...I'm going to do another review, see you guys in about an hour!

  5. Who's!? I demand to know exactly who was responsible for this episode! The moral of this story is probably one of the best things anyone could learn...kind of. Let me explain when we get to the end. The story is that Pinkie pie is having random feelings, twitches, etc that Twilight can't understand and hunts for the truth to the point where she evolves again. That's pretty much it without spoiling anything. How do I like it? Well...I don't. I think this story is kind of odd as we randomly end up in areas with no type of way of knowing where it really is. As far as I know froggy bottom swamp is in the everfree forest. Now I find my dis-interest of this episode to be disappointing as the continuity with previous episodes is awesome and along with derpy and pokemon, I should have liked the story but it just doesn't do that with me. Animation was gorgeous, from pokemon, to twitches. to animals, and everything else. (Lab room equipment.) The animation was spot on. While all the characters seem to act true to themselves, I think Twilight might be different. I feel like Twilight should have been more open- minded but isn't and that makes me feel odd. Twilight's been really open-minded before and after so why isn't she in this one? Though, maybe I'm just going crazy and this is Twilight. The voice acting of Tara was extremely likable. Especially when Twilight makes all her annoyed comments and when she's having her break down: "That's not the dosy?" Now we have the lines and what can I say? The conversations that go on are either hilarious or entertaining. There really isn't a line I hate. So one other thing before I end it. Dat. Ending. All right so here's the deal, I hate the lesson learned, plain and simple. As a christian I feel that I should share my religion with those who want to listen, not those who don't want to. If you want to learn about the bible or anything, I'll help you, if not, cool let's go play some video games. The fact that the lesson says to just accept things you can't understand seems like it's yelling at atheists and I disapprove of anyone making fun or hating on any one's religion. (Or lack thereof.) Maybe they were talking about something else but that's the way I interpreted it. I think the lesson would have been better if it was to not question other people's beliefs or if it was to accept your friends even if they believe something you don't. I don't know but this isn't a rant blog. With all of this in mind I give this episode my reviewer rating of C+. Could have been better, could have been worse. Wow I really need to hurry if I want to get to season 3 before season 4 starts...Well this has been Neo: Reviews, thanks for watching! But wait! We're not done yet my fellow informationist, I have a proposal. You know what's better than reviewing by yourself? Reviewing with Friends! I'm planning on doing a review with ZigZag, who's a person not on canterlot, sometime in august and I thought, why stop there? So I'm asking for help! If anyone (and I mean anyone...) Wants to help with a review, send your thoughts in on Episode 16 or whatever episode I haven't reviewed that's next if your reading this from the future. Just send it to me and I'll do mine along with it, and you'll officially be a reviewer! (If you haven't reviewed before.) It's easy!
  6. [colour=#000000]Time Spinner looked over the two dead ponies in front of him. His eyes streamed with Tears as he looked at them. [/colour][colour=#696969]"Don't worry..." [/colour][colour=#000000]He closed the eyes of Spitfire and Carmus. [/colour][colour=#696969]"Shimmer and I will take care of the children. Rest easy, in Caelum's halls..." [/colour][colour=#000000]He looked back to Deity who also looked saddened. He turned his attention to Twilight along with Deity and together they spoke. [/colour][colour=#8b4513]"Are you happy Twilight? Are you happy that we had to lose Carmus and Spitfire a second time? Maybe if you would have studied better we wouldn't have lost them! Why Celestia and Luna left you...[/colour][colour=#696969]Celestia...and Luna..." [/colour][colour=#000000]Time fell to the ground as he finally broke down from everypony he had lost. His parents, Aqua, Echo, Gadget, Blitzy, Celestia, Luna, Spitfire, and Carmus. He lost so many of his own family. If there was anything Twilight and Time had in common it was that they both loved the princess. They were just like another set of parents to them, for Twilight when Celestia had been her mentor and for Time Spinner, when he was alone in this new time frame. Time, with no mother of his own, had found that void filled by the Princesses.[/colour]
  7. Ah...break out ye olde OC chart Pony edition. (Luna knows there are other editions...) Time Spinner - Magic Time uses Time magic...that's his talent. Swift Blitz - Laughter Swift can get people laughing but at the expense of someone else. Gadget - Honesty Gadget has never lied, every other OC I have has. Silver Chain - Kindness Silver Chain's pretty kind. She hasn't insulted anyone yet. Seeker - Loyalty Seeker is very loyal to her family. Echo Forte - Generosity Echo was just a little bit generous then he disappeared and is now doing other stuff...I should RP him more.
  8. [colour=#696969]"Now wait just a minute there, what of me and Deity? If you separate us we can take the fall." [/colour][colour=#000000]Time Spinner stepped up to say.[/colour] [colour=#ff0000]"Time, Sundial is dead, if he takes us, Time itself will be destroyed and you and I cannot be separated. We can't make the sacrifice but we can continue the legacy. If we were...to lock it up, we just need to be separate." [/colour][colour=#000000]Deity told him, his horn charged up. Time sighed as he looked back at his kids and sent the spell off, causing them t[/colour][colour=#000000]o be sent to the past, where he didn't know but if they could fix it, fix all of it, none of this would be needed. Alas the world did not change in the slightest. [/colour] [colour=#000000]Deity turned to Spitfire and spoke. [/colour][colour=#FF0000]"I won't sit idly by while my pet just dies!?! I cannot lose another one, I just can't...I-I..." [/colour][colour=#000000]Deity's eyes flashed as his vision changed. He never knew why he was so attached to Time and Spitfire but not their connected or even Time's children but he knew when he saw the flash. Right in front of him was the small dark blue Pegasus with yellow eyes and a heart of gold, yet when they flashed again it was just Spitfire. The same thing happened with Time Spinner, when his eyes flashed he found his yellow alicorn daughter, with a burst of energy and a seemingly endless amount of Knowledge. Yet her heart held evil and spite. If he could cry he knew he would be but he couldn't, he knew why he was attached to them, they were what he ever wanted his children to ever become.[/colour] [colour=#000000]A grey swirl had enveloped the children as they felt their eyes readjust and felt a magical blast as they landed on the cool green glass. [/colour][colour=#008000]"Where are we?" [/colour][colour=#000000]The pegasus asked. [/colour][colour=#00ffff]"I don't know but...maybe we could ask a police officer?" [/colour][colour=#000000]The unicorn pointed to the town a few feet away. [/colour][colour=#008000]"Let's go!" [/colour][colour=#000000]They never noticed the locks, they were now wearing rings, rings that held an image of a lock. This trinket worked in a similar way Time's pocket watch did. Even holding a guide for them, but this one was a bit more happy. [/colour][colour=#0000ff]"It's nice to feel used again." [/colour][colour=#000000]Gadget said to himself in his new home.[/colour]
  9. You want someone to draw your pony OC, go ask someone and they'll give it to you on a silver platter. You want someone to draw your Sonic OC? Go hunt for a golden dodo bird, with a pair of cider goggles glued to your eyes and when you find it turns out you need to go spend another 15 years to find the platinum one because they hunter is sick of the colour gold. -_-

  10. I've always wanted to be a nimbat, can I interview?
  11. That was Time 2.0 not original. (So, no time travel.) and I kind of wrote that from what he knew. So it's what he thinks. He's not the best historian in the world so it would make sense that others knew about that time. He just doesn't know them. (Time's a hermit.) As for the PMing the relations...Time doesn't have any. Time 2.0 has never met Luna. After going over it again that's only thing that says to PM. To me that seems like sending you a friendship or what not. Which Time 2.0 doesn't have with luna...
  12. Well crud I was gonna send in Era's accepted app but I'll just throw that out the window. *Play window breaking sound* Anywho, in the words of Pinkie Pie "LET'S GET THIS PARTY STARTED!" [colour=#282828] Name: Time Spinner [/colour] [colour=#282828] Link to WOE Approved Application: [/colour]http://www.canterlot.com/topic/14151-time-spinnerwoe-ready/page__hl__%2Btime+%2Bspinner [colour=#282828] Reason for involvement : Time has studied history for all of his life. He loves it and after finishing history and opening his office, he started to research legends and myths. Time knows of the legend of the moon, The lunar rebellion, and the turning of Nightmare Moon. Time Spinner is the only one who can recall the events of her ascension, and is someone she has nothing against. Time Spinner knows that every darkness has a light, and wants to help in anyway he can. [/colour]
  13. I'll throw a couple of my bits in! Username: NeoExlucky Pony name: Time Spinner Custom or owned: Owned Reference pic!
  14. [colour=#696969]"Spitifire hurry!" [/colour][colour=#000000]Time called as his ethereal armor flashed onto him. The world was lit on fire or so it seemed. His horn started to glow as he readied himself for the spell, the spirit of Deity stood next to him and also had his horn lit.[/colour]
  15. Time rand alongside his wife and daughters to the core. He looked back at their frightened faces. Maybe if he had done a better job protecting the world, then it wouldn't end like this. As they approached the cracked core, Time couldn't help but wince at what he had to do. [colour=#696969]"Silver, I need you to charge up a time spell, Seeker stand next to your sister."[/colour] [colour=#40E0D0]"Dad...what's happening?"[/colour] [colour=#000000]Time didn't look at his daughters, a tear streamed down his cheek as he said the next phrase. [/colour][colour=#696969]"You girls are gonna save the world. Just like your mother and I."[/colour] [colour=#008000]"We know your lying dad, what's happening."[/colour] [colour=#696969]"I'm going to send you two back in time, hopefully along with your cousins. You girls are going to find Auntie Blitz and and tell her about what's happening. Then she'll know what to do from there."[/colour] [colour=#40E0D0]"What will happen to you guys?"[/colour] [colour=#696969]"I...don't know." [/colour][colour=#000000]He said with a sad expression on his face. The girls got into place and Time held his wife's hoof tightly. All they had to do was wait.[/colour]
  16. Time was confused by the random, loud noises. Though he was a smart stallion and when he looked up he was able to come to a conclusion, the world was going to be destroyed. He had to think of something fast but what could it be? The book never mentioned the world being destroyed! It wasn't until he looked into his mind that he understood everything. (Time's Mind room.) (Also I like this music for this moment: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-fZNB6YlB5c [colour=#696969]"What do we do?" [/colour][colour=#000000]Time asked as the internal clock of his belled loudly.[/colour] [colour=#FF0000]"It's all over...Not even Celestia herself could save us if she were still around."[/colour] [colour=#000000]Time broke down as he heard those words. He always came to Deity in troubled times but now what? If Deity couldn't think of anything then what would happen?[/colour] [colour=#696969]"No...no...this can't be it, there has to be something, anything that we could do...what about ancient form? I-I could go into it and stop time around the destroyed area. Then we-"[/colour] [colour=#000000]Deity cut him off. [/colour][colour=#ff0000]"How long would that last Time Spinner? Hmmm? You haven't even ascended into alicorn hood and even if you did you couldn't hold a time stop that long. Maybe a year, but what's the point in delaying the inevitable?"[/colour] [colour=#696969]"But...flash, Vel, Rune, Seeker, Silver chain, what about the children? Do we just leave them to die too?"[/colour] [colour=#FF0000]"...as much as I hate to say this...yes..."[/colour] [colour=#696969]"We have to do something!"[/colour] [colour=#000000]And it was in that last moment of sanity, that last moment of quiet, and that last moment of peace when everything was broken. The clock chimed and the floor beneath them cracked. Time was hopeless.[/colour] [colour=#696969]"I won't give up my kids so easily..."[/colour] [colour=#000000]That was when the clock struck 12 and everything fell into place, every spell, every mask, every love and loss, every dream, every mentor, every dawn, and every evening all were cast into the dark abyss below. The room was enveloped by Darkness and soon the scream of every last friend, family, and loved ones echoed in that deep pit of despair in the room that they dared to call Time Spinner's mind...and yet...something happened. It was a small glimmer at first but grew and filled the room with light again and everything was back into place. It was all a lock, a chain of events that set off these moments that could somehow be molded by the fabric of space and time itself. All they needed was the essence of two powerful beings, all they needed was the best of the best, all the needed was a species that the clarions and the sentinels could call their own, and they just so happened to have two along with them. Time was the last of the clarions and Shimmer was a descendant of the first sentinels, with story foretold, and fate sealed, Deity came to the final conclusion. [/colour][colour=#FF0000]"Get Shimmer, Silver chain, and Seeker to the core..."[/colour] [colour=#696969]"Deity..."[/colour] [colour=#FF0000]"Do you remember what I said when we first met?"[/colour] [colour=#696969]"Blood writes history, blood can rewrite history..."[/colour] [colour=#FF0000]"And blood is what we're going to have to pay..."[/colour] [colour=#696969]"What of Shimmer and the connected? Will they live?"[/colour] [colour=#FF0000]"Only if the heroes can make it to safety."[/colour] [colour=#696969]"How many can we send?"[/colour] [colour=#FF0000]"We can only do what Jamora did to you, we can only send children. You were barely a child at that point. I'm sure companions can join."[/colour] [colour=#696969]"How. Many."[/colour] [colour=#FF0000]"Maybe five children."[/colour] [colour=#696969]"Thank you...Deity..."[/colour] [colour=#FF0000]"You know when you perform the spell...all of the kids can see me...and they're going to need a spirit guide."[/colour] [colour=#696969]"Who will it be?"[/colour] [colour=#FF0000]"He saved you life, became a wonderbolt, went to the darkness and came back...and it seems he's calling us."[/colour] [colour=#000000]Just like that a phone rang near Time Spinner and he went to pick it up. [/colour][colour=#696969]"Hello?"[/colour] [colour=#0000CD]"Hello Time-"[/colour] [colour=#696969]"Gadget it's been a long time."[/colour] [colour=#000000]Just like Gadget saw...a phone call to the future....[/colour] [colour=#000000](Reality)[/colour] [colour=#696969]"We need to get to the core! Come on."[/colour]
  17. [colour=#696969]"Well, the girls been fine and you forget that until yesterday, my sister's been here. Seeker had someone to fly with and Silver's been learning some more time magic. Though two days ago they were harassing some boy and claiming that he was lying about something." [/colour][colour=#000000]Time shook his head. His daughter's talents seemed to work together. Silver chain could tell when someone was lying as some type of chains would "appear" over them and Seeker could get them to tell the truth, but they seemed to use this power a little too much.[/colour]
  18. Well, I kind of thought it worked like pony generator, but all right, I made NeoExlucky, and Rider over here: http://www.tektek.org/dream/dream_canvas.php?avatar=53728711# Give it a like or...I don't know. I don't play gaia. I'm still waiting on legeneds of Equestria. OH MY CELESTIA, LEGENDS OF EQUESTRIA!!!!!!!!!!!!
  19. Hello there! Welcome to Open an OC, where I'm going to talk about how to make OC's and things that have to do with OC's. This episode we're going to talk about the types of OC's. Well cover what exactly each character means and what you really have to do with them later. Let's begin. The Logo OC Meet NeoExlucky, an OC from the fandom of reality. What is his purpose? To stand there and look pretty. That's it. Logo OC's don't really have a purpose, their just a character you create to represent something. The Rules to a Logo OC are that they just have to exist and be drawn. You don't even have to name them or do anything else with them after that. Best (or worse) of it all is that their looks don't even really matter. For example another Logo character is Philsterman10's OC. Why does his look not matter? Well he's an Alicorn OC, but no one cares. That's really what a Logo OC does. They stand there, look pretty, and do nothing else. Now they don't always have to be just that, for example the third type of OC could also be a logo Character. Mind Character A mind character is a character you create with your own cannon and with whatever you want. They could if you wanted, be used in roleplay but the only thing stopping them is the cannon and you. You need to know everything about a mind character from what their favorite cereal is to their favorite voice actor. This is rider, My vocaloid OC. He's in love with Hatsune Miku, both his parents work at Nintendo, he's a 15 years Old, etc. Every character was at one point a mind character. Mind characters normally are just a few steps away from being our third type of character. Fan Character [colour=#000000]The best of all the characters, a fan character is a character you know everything about and have done something with, you made a Fanfiction with them, did a roleplay, whatever! You know everything about them and hopefully you haven't made a character everyone hates. This is a Fan character. Time Spinner is this example and he's great at what he does, he's also one of my logo's as a representation of me and was also once a mind character, but I don't like to talk about that. Time Spinner's been there since the beginning an I've never looked back. This is a character that everyone should have. Maybe even make up how each character knows each other and so on. I actually have a tie in for all of my characters and how they all tie in together but we'll talk about that at another time.[/colour]
  20. (Rune X Silver Chain, ship it like FedEX!) [colour=#000000]Silver chain blushed as Rune disappeared, causing seeker to roll her eyes. [/colour][colour=#006400]"What's with you and him?"[/colour] [colour=#40E0D0]"He's kind of cute, okay."[/colour] [colour=#006400]"How can you think that's cute?"[/colour] [colour=#40E0D0]"How can you think other fillies are cute?"[/colour] [colour=#006400]"That was too far."[/colour] [colour=#000000]The smiled as they saw their mum and were about to speak when Time interrupted.[/colour] [colour=#696969]"I'm right here, Honey." [/colour][colour=#000000]Time said as he trotted from behind the twins, out of breath. [/colour][colour=#696969]"The girls...just got away from is all." [/colour][colour=#000000]He looked from one of his daughters, to the other, then to his wife.[/colour] [colour=#000000]Seeker was really excited as she pulled her pack off and started to dig through it. [/colour][colour=#40e0d0]"Auntie Blitz helped us pick it out!" [/colour][colour=#000000]Seeker pulled out a dazzling quartz yellow necklace, it had five stones on it and each one had a cutie mark, one had a pocket watch, a chain, a key, a feather, and an ice blue bird. [/colour][colour=#008000]"Happy birthday mum!"[/colour] [colour=#40E0D0]"Even though it's not her birthday..."[/colour] [colour=#008000]"Happy late birthday mum!"[/colour]
  21. Silver chain jumped excited as she made her way through the plaza with her sister Seeker. She was really excited about her new spell she had learned, Time Stop. It was difficult, and silver couldn't perform it by herself but she was so happy that she and her father did do it. Time Spinner was a stay at home father, after all he wasn't in the military and his office was in the house they lived in. It changed a lot since before. Auntie Blitz would come to visit and stay in a purple room that the foals would play in sometimes. It had something that Blitz said she got from a friend called a turntable. There was another room, bright blue that their father kept locked, as well as a dark black room. The house got extended so that Silver and seeker could have their own room. Swift Blitz taught Seeker how to do some tricks every know and then but it was Shimmer who taught her the most. Time Spinner taught Silver how to use her magic at least what Time could teach her. It seems that she could still use the clarions magic, and not suffer from most of the problems that happened after. Silver could stop time with another normal Unicorn for 5 seconds! It would also seem that Silver was gifted in healing magic and with a little help from the auntie Luna and auntie Celestia, she was able to get into Celestia's school for gifted Unicorns. While not as serious as Twilight was, Silver was a very good student. They were both excited to see their mother but something caught their eye, it was a book, that read "I make Time Spin." Silver though it was odd and put it in her pack and they kept walking to see their mother.
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