NeoExlucky

(Oh good, I can say how Silver Chain and Seeker got to trottingham.)

Now we come to one of the arguably best episodes of MLP itself. I prefer another set of episodes but lets get on with the apocalypse! Alright so the story is that Twilight goes to Rarity's to get a dress fixed that she says she is going to wear to the gala. Rarity takes it too far and makes everyone of the Mane 6 dresses. The story was really good at exploiting Rarity's Charity (Rhyme Time) and showing us how rarity acts to certain things, especially her wallowing. It's one of the goo things about this episode. The animation of the fashion show (Take 2) is beautiful and well done. Plus the animations for the song Suited for success is really good too. I liked it. The characters here are very true to themselves and it makes me smile at some of their comments, like rainbow's "And fluttershy's freaky knowledge of Sewing." Which makes a few thoughts fly through my head and make me chuckle...NOT THOSE THOUGHTS! Voice acting was done superbly. Rarity's wallowing, The cheers of the crowd, and hoity toity's voice were excellent! The song of Art of the Dress, is really good and is one of my favorites. I think personally that it still holds up against the other, songs in the show, it doesn't beat winter wrap up or Celestia's Ballad but it was still well done. The lines were...okay there were a few bad one. My least favorite is the "I don't like it, I love it!" line that Rarity does. While it came off right it's always a line that I hate. However the other lines in the episode like Pinkie Pie's comments were nice and some Spike's comments were good too. So rarity joined the cast of the ponies I like here and the song was fantastic as well as the story. So I give this episode my Reviewer rating of a B+. Well done and excellent. Wow this one was short. Well either way, This has been Neo Reviews, thanks for reading!

Well for Time Spinner it's Live and learn by crush 40, For Deity it's love the way you lie by Eminem, For Gadget it's Time will remember us by Epic Score, and for Swift Blitz it's the last one by audiomachine.

Deity face-hoofed mentally. He looked around at the mind room he was in. It was different from Spitfire's and Time's. Time had a bunch of clocks and some distant pictures of canterlot back in the discordian era. Sometimes it would shift to a room in a orphanage and a blue filly could be seen in the distance. Spitfire's looked like caelum, possibly due to her dying but Carmus made him feeling like he was in the air as he saw the sky and the clouds and the floor looked like a town in the distance. He looked for a door but found none. He pushed himself forward, back into Spitfire's mind and felt a bit of pain that Spitfire would feel as well. [colour=#ff0000][Your welcome.][/colour]

"Sounds like the greatest thing ever!" -No one ever

[colour=#ff0000][And considering Time's luck with danger, that might not be a just a threat.] [/colour][colour=#000000]Deity 'mumbled.' [/colour][colour=#ff0000][Alright you remembered to not let them on to my existence. Oh and the reason your listening to me is we have a mutual goal. I won't let them kill any of my hosts. I have something better planned for them...and- no I won't spoil the surprise." [/colour][colour=#000000]He snickered.[/colour]

Deity was in trouble now. They were going to send spitfire off and Carmus was no where near them. What was he to do? He had to think of something but what? He searched around for something, anything that could help him. One thought came to mind...a thought that could risk everything he stood for and may cause a bit of pain to Spitfire. He pushed himself forward, not to Spitfire, not to Time Spinner, but to Carmus himself. He felt a void of nothing and then a flash as he entered the mind of Carmus himself. Deity felt the draw back as he winced a bit. He heard the whole conversation and an Idea hit him. [colour=#ff0000]"Listen to me Carmus, if you want your wife to remain here with you do as I say. First if they want the line of the sentinels to mention children to them. Spitfire wants kids, no? If you two do that, then the line will continue. Not to mention Shimmer and Time's marriage is also sure to bring Foals along with it[/colour][colour=#000000]."[/colour]

So besides RPing, Watching the Ponies, and Reading, what are your favorite Past-times?

I feel like he's saying "I am not satisfied with this pocket watch. Take it back and bring me another." or he's saying "I have no idea what this even is." I love it! Thanks Sparkle Fire!

[colour=#ff0000][You don't get it do you? I have Emotions now! You know what that means? Carmus Dies, You Die, I Die, Time Dies, Shimmer's heart stops AKA she dies. Besides, even if that wasn't the case, your my host now. No one is allowed to kill you but me and age itself! Not even Nature can!] [/colour][colour=#000000]Deity thought loud enough to shake a building.[/colour]

Deity heard a beckoning. He looked up from his sorrow and heard the words of Spitfire cry out in sadness. He sighed and moved into the mind of the Pegasus, soldier. In a moment he was flooded with thoughts and feelings until he got control over himself. [colour=#ff0000][They want you to do what now?] [/colour][colour=#000000]Deity looked back through her thoughts between herself and Carmus. [/colour][colour=#ff0000][No! No, you go up to them and tell them to burn in oblivion, that's a suicide mission, alright, you'll die if you go there!][/colour]

( I forgot deity's epilogue!) Deity stewed in his muck of the mind room he owned. One door was on the left which lead to Time Spinner and the one on the left led to Spitfire. He stayed where he was, though he could hear the words of every thought, spoken word, or thing heard. He could control it, of course. Five years of doing this does this to you. His room consisted of dark walls, the two doors, and a bed. Deity stayed there thinking when a 'shink' sound could be heard. Like iron sliding out of iron. Deity opened his eyes to find a third door. One he had never seen before. What did it do? Where did it go? Curiosity took hold of the demon and he arose and walked to the door. It looked like his others but it was...odd. He opened the door to find a grey room, that held one thing, a full body mirror. It stood in front of Deity like a gaping hole, beckoning for his attention and yearning for his gaze. Deity, still filled to the brim with Curiosity, approached the mirror. It appeared normal and showed Deity's reflection. Then it turned, and began to show everything that made Deity angry. His curiosity changed into a combination of anger, pain, and sorrow. He was so frustrated over everything that happened he took his hoof back and brought it into the mirror, causing it to shatter. He looked down at the pieces and smiled. He stopped as he stared at a shard that had a pupil. Deity quickly picked it up and put onto the mirror, it stuck. He did this for every piece and recreated it like a puzzle. He stared in horror at the thing in front of him. It was a dark blue alicorn wearing some type of sleep wear. It was fierce depart, his old self. He looked saddened and Deity looked that way as well. [colour=#008080]"Why are you so sad?"[/colour] [colour=#000000]Fierce told the Demon. [/colour][colour=#ff0000]"I...I..." [/colour][colour=#000000]He said before he was interrupted by a calm, female voice. [/colour][colour=#0000ff]"Fierce!" [/colour][colour=#000000]A dark blue alicorn mare with short light blue mane and tail had sweetly called. She came into view and caused Deity to wince in pain. [/colour][colour=#0000ff]"You look fine, sweetheart! Except for the pajama's." [/colour][colour=#000000]Fierce chuckled at the joke and the two embraced with a short kiss. [/colour][colour=#0000ff]"I have some royal duties with my sister and the rebellion but afterwards we can go take a walk around white tail woods. You said you wanted to go there right?" [/colour][colour=#000000]Fierce smiled. [/colour][colour=#008080]"Well...the doctors did say that walking would help with the twins." [/colour][colour=#000000]Luna smiled and looked down to her swollen Belly. She kissed Fierce on the cheek. [/colour][colour=#0000ff]"You should rest a bit dear. Yesterday was a hard day." [/colour] [colour=#008080]"I can't. I'm going to check out this weird temple today. Supposedly it causes hallucinations. Can you tell Liesha, I'm sorry I won't make it for our tea party." [/colour][colour=#0000FF]"Your so good with her. I will, let Equinox or solstice know when you get back. They'll be able to tell me." [/colour][colour=#000000]Luna walked out the door and Fierce turned to the mirror. [/colour][colour=#008080]"Where'd you go?"[/colour] [colour=#000000]Deity stood up, tears running down his eyes. [/colour][colour=#008080]"What's the matter?"[/colour] [colour=#FF0000]"I...I just want to see my kids again..."[/colour] [colour=#000000]He flashed back to his spot in the room and the door that led to the mirror room was gone. Deity looked down and then headed for Spitfire's door, but stopped in front of it, he turned and went for Time's door and did the same thing. He moved to the center of the room. "[/colour][colour=#ff0000]I'm alone now..."[/colour]

(Thank Celestia Pony generator exists!)

alright!

Warning may have spoiler if you haven't watched the episode! Puns! Puns everywhere! There to you left! There to you right! Holy horseapple! I should quit horsing around! Suddenly celestia! Okay let's start the review. Alright, fall weather friends is an episode that I forgot was so good! It's one of the few episodes that made me think "I love this show!" the night I turned into a Brony. Let's break it down for you; The story goes like this, Applejack and Rainbow dash are having a horse shoe throwing competition and they're just having a grand old time. The two have a bit of a conversation about it and they go into an iron pony competition that goes up, then spirals down. The rest well...it gets a bit RACEY afterwards. Ha, ha, ha...okay back to the review. The animation of the episode is petty top notch, with all the things that get shown off when Rainbow dashes, from place to place or when the leaves fall. It's pretty nice and I haven't seen be this good since Episode 1+2! The characters stay true to themselves and are just a blast to watch. They make it so much more interesting and Twilight's little bits are always great. I love some of the banter between Pinkie Pie and Spike, it always makes me chuckle. The story is simple and sometimes it's kind of lacking. We pretty much just skip to the events whenever Someone finishes the last one and this isn't something I like but I won't count it off for it. Still it was something I could see happening between these two characters. The voice acting of Ashleigh Ball was superb. I loved the quality of it and it out shined almost all of aspects of the episode. The lines for the characters were decent. It was good, better then Ticket Master, but there wasn't anything too outstanding of it, so I can't really mention anything that FELL into the WEATHER of my FRIENDS liking. See what I did there...I'm so Punny! Anyway the puns in there were actually what made this episode feel interesting. Anyways this is a very good episode for season 1 and it's one that, while other are better, always makes me smile and feel better about myself. It's really good and I love it...though it falls into the top 45% for me. I give this episode my exluckiest rating of an B and I give it a highlight of Season 1! It's good for it's time but if you were to put it against episodes like suited for success or Sweet and Elite, or even Lesson Zero and Magic duel, it would fall a little flat. This has been Neo Reviews, thanks for reading!

(Wanted to get some closure on Time's family, so this final post from him and Swift.) Swift Blitz had just arrived in Trottingham when she was in the station. Trottingham needed more police and Swift, with very little to do, had offered her services. She sat in the lounge reading a file when a Police Mare walked in. [colour=#a52a2a]"Uh...miss Blitz? There's these two foals asking about you...do you want to see them?" [/colour][colour=#000000]Swift put her file down, it was about a strange flash of magical energy that had shown up, but their was nothing there when the deputy arrived. Swift had known a lot about magic and took on the case. [/colour][colour=#800080]"Foals?" [/colour][colour=#000000]She got up and followed the Mare cop to the front room, where their were two Fillies sitting on the bench. The first one looked a bit tougher then the other and had a brown mane and tail that were a bit more fine then the other. Her eyes were a dark blue that looked very warm and caring, she also was a pegasus. The other was a bit smaller and her mane and tail were silver and dark purple. They were also more curly then the other and her eyes were ice blue. She was a unicorn. Both of their coats looked like Time and Shimmer's. In fact they...[/colour] [colour=#40E0D0]"Auntie Blitz!" [/colour][colour=#000000]The unicorn said and stood up. [/colour][colour=#006400]"We found you!" [/colour][colour=#000000]The pegasus also stood up and the pair ran over and hugged Swift Blitz. [/colour][colour=#800080]"Who are you!?" [/colour] [colour=#008000]"She doesn't know who we are?"[/colour] [colour=#40E0D0]"Hmmm maybe we went too far back..."[/colour] [colour=#000000]The pegasus turned too her. Her voice was very loud and commanding. [/colour][colour=#006400]"Too far back? How do we get home then?"[/colour] [colour=#000000]The Unicorn's voice was soft and sweet. [/colour][colour=#40e0d0]"I don't know! We have to figure something out Sis!" [/colour][colour=#000000]She said back. [/colour] [colour=#000000]The Pegasus turned back and gave a confident smile. She said something...something that...well...I'll just save what she said for another story but let's just say that it caused the Unicorn to smile and caused Swift to just stand their in awe, like it was something out of the Evening Zone.[/colour] [colour=#006400]"My name is Seeker!"[/colour] [colour=#40E0D0]"and my name is Silver Chain and were Twins!"[/colour] [colour=#40E0D0][/colour] [colour=#000000]Time Spinner had just walked into his house in Canterlot. It was quiet since Gadget and Swift were gone and Time always noticed it whenever he walked in. Except for the sounds of the arcade cabinets in the corner of the living room, everything was quiet. Time sighed as he put a brown bag of fruit onto the counter of the kitchen and walked into the small library he kept to hold all of his history books, codes, and property histories. He walked into the room and went to the window seat he had. He opened the bottom of it and inside was a book, a book which mentioned everything that had happened. Time sent to the future, his suicide attempt, Gadget becoming a shadowbolt, Gadget dying, Twilight's shield, Time Spinner's marriage, all of it was going to happen or had happened. He was unsure if it was all true or not until Twilight's shield happened. Then he realized that it was true. After all it said that in one week Time would be married and it just so happened that in one week Time and Shimmer would get married. He opened the book and read the chapter after.[/colour] [colour=#696969]"A legacy comes true." [/colour][colour=#000000]He read out loud. [/colour][colour=#696969]"On the year of the eclipse the legacy will bring with two children of power returning to the year that sparked the legacy to inflame They will push for a new thing to happen that will change the future. Once they return to the future the legacy will come true with 13 lights fighting 13 darknesses. The lights opposite the dark and vice versa. The lights are Power, Trust, Wisdom, Ages, Life, Redemption, Stars, truth, memory, Honor, Spirit, courage, and Passion." [/colour][colour=#000000]Time slammed the book down. [/colour][colour=#696969]"But what does that mean?" [/colour][colour=#000000]He turned around and went upstairs to his room. He put on a set of clothes and looked into a mirror. He was wearing a dark black suit, one that he would wear on his wedding. He didn't have many best men as his brother was dead as well as some of his closest friends but Luna, Celestia, and Swift Blitz all were going to stand with him. After all they were his closest family now. He smiled as he looked at a picture of him and shimmer and laughed at it, forgetting almost all of his troubles.[/colour] [colour=#000000][/colour]

Flutteryay.com!

The app I sent in was the accepted Time Spinner for WOE...

Good, cause I have an app for Her but she's not accepted yet. Name: Era Whirl Link to App: http://www.canterlot.com/topic/14151-time-spinnerwoe-ready/

(I don't know if I can do this, but this is the Gender Bender version of Time Spinner.) RP type: WOE Name: Era Whirl Gender: Female Age: Young Mare Species: Unicorn Eye colour: Blue Coat colour: Grey Mane/Tail: Wine red and short. Her tail is sort of a backwards 'S' shape. Physique: Small and weak. Residence: Canterlot Occupation: Historian Cutie Mark: A Silver Pocket Watch Era wasn't the last to get her cutie mar but she wasn't the first. Era got her cutie mark in Canterlot, where she grew up. She applied to go to a very fancy school in Manehatten. Era thought that she would be an automatic pass but a couple of weeks later it would turn out that she did not make it. Era was so sad that all she did was read. She read one book that became very dear to her heart. In it the hero was a smart alek Unicorn who loved to go on quests and always made his companions feel better by making jokes and calling himself the Doctor. Era was so upset about herself that she adopted the personality of the Mare. Little did she know that the book was actually fiction and this caused a spark of knowledge for the past. She did find out a long time after that the book was fiction but it was too late. One day while in her studies she found a book about all the kingdoms in Equestria and she read it front to back. When she finished the last page, her cutie mark formed. It's based around her collection of history knowledge and ability to answer almost any question about the history of a monarch or castle, though she probably will reply with a joke instead. History: Era grew up in canterlot with her mother and father. [colour=#282828]Her mother (Ticker Tock) and father (Firo Song) were very good at there jobs. Ticker was a watch maker and Firo was a singer. Her father, Firo was very loving and always taught Era that she should help others, though for a while Era never listened to this. Ticker always taught Era about being a proper lady but Era didn't really pay attention to that. While Era didn't listen to her, she may have wanted those skills as there were a few Stallions that did crush upon Era and tried to date her. Both of her parents were paid very well and because of this Era enjoyed the luxuries of her life, including a love for Coffee. Her mother actually showed Era a lot of the things she holds dear, including a Silver pocket watch necklace, which Era keeps as an heirloom. This made it all the worse when her Mother passed. After this Era focused her life on trying to find a good enough talent. For a while she thought it was magic and applied to join the manehatten school for talented unicorns. When Era was declined she threw himself into her studies and came across a falsely labeled book. She fell in love with it and perhaps fell in love with the hero of the story. He was very sarcastic and Era adopted this trait. Eventually she found out the book was fiction and she fell in love with both fiction and non-fiction though she enjoyed history books the most. When Era was still growing up she had met a white raven. Era was infact reading a great book about a troublesome raven at the time. The raven seemed to take a liking to Era and she named him Quoth. Later in Era's life she had won a bet with a gambling Pegasus and Era ended up with 'Time Lines', the name of her office and store. Now Era studies history, myths, and legends. Trying to uncover the secrets of equestria, one book at a time. While Era does normally show off her funny side, secretly she has a heart of gold and a thirst for friendship, even though she would be the last to admit it.[/colour] [colour=#282828]Character Summery: Era is great at learning history but is terrible at magic. She enjoys some of the little things such as chess and Coffee. Era has a good sense of right and wrong but will try to find the funniest way to pursue either one. Era enjoys chess, coffee, helping the weak, fighting bullies, White lies, making jokes, getting paid and history. She hates being mean, Showing off, Bullying (Especially foals.), and she is scared of Hydra's, and Snakes. Era's only real past times are writing, reading and playing Chess. The latter of all that she does often. Being around Era can be a history lesson or a night of funny times. If asked about anything Era will probably start to ramble or she'll make a smart comment and just continue on. Era judges others too often and hates when someone hurts her friends. Era always fails at doing any physical thing or activity due to her weakness. Era can get sick easily and will often end up with a cold. Whenever she gets confused Era will either get curious or angry. Lastly Era doesn't like apologies at all and will not be one to forgive and forget. Era is scared of Hydra's and Snakes.[/colour]

Okay, bit of a question before I sign up, we're playing in a gender bender world. So could we send in an app for a character but play the gender bent version of them? The reason I ask is (in my mind.) the only thing that would change is their gender and their name.

I have no idea what's going on but if I remember correctly, we never even got to the first gym. So, no I don't think it's impossible. I'll see if I might be able to revive it.

Hello there! I'm going to put a request here...that was probably obvious with me being here. Anyway I'm going to ask for a pic of my OC Time Spinner. Here's a pic in pony generator with his Pocket Watch.