WhatWentWrong

Well how the hell am I meant to know that when your profile says your not telling you gender!

Though I'm not allowed to accept them looks pretty good to me bro! Will be nice to have a fourth along!

Slick bounced along somewhere, he didn't really know which way he was going but when you have your eyes closed and hum to yourself your bound to bump into something or somepony at some point. As if on que THWAK right into somepony else. Slick took a small while to recover and see none other than Knight infront of him... oh and that other pony too from earlier... whats his face. Slick let out a laugh and pulled himself up, holding out a hoof for Knight to "[colour=#006400]Well wakey wakey there bro! Didn't know you'd gotten up since I saved your flank![/colour]" He laughed, glad he could joke about it now it was behind them, though not really sure if Knight had known he had to be saved a small while ago "[colour=#006400]So... I kinda did something stupid while you were out... Kinda told Shade I had a thing for her...[/colour]" He said half proudly, though still a hint of a blush on his cheeks "[colour=#006400]Aaaaand... she said she said, listen to this, SHE! Said that she could see me every day and that I would make her smile[/colour]" he said with a small sigh, not remembering that Knight couldn't care less for fillies, turning to look at the other drowned pony from earlier "[colour=#006400]But sorry! Where's my manners, I'm Slick... not too sure if we have 'properly' met yet... though my memory is pretty horribl[/colour]e" He laughed, nothing could make this day bad! Too bad there wasn't going to be too much of day left by the looks of things...

Derpy didn't really know what to say... such a good story full of sadness and happiness all mixed up in a jumble of words. "Wow...." Derpy let out, finishing off the last muffin "So that explains the big key thingy..." she muttered as suddenly that random stallion from earlier fell between the two ponies, instantly pinning the changeling to the wall. Derpy jumped up and pulled at the stallion to try and pull him off of her newfound friend "Stop this please! Hes a good changeling! Don't do this!" She yelled, as she kept trying to pull at him "And no sword fighting! Can't we just talk about this!?"

4/5! Because it confuses me! D: Nice images though, jealousy is defenatly lowering your score too

"Oh!" Derpy said, a little surprised... guess she hadn't really thought that one through had she... Derpy fluttered over and landed squarely back on the seat with a wide smile, ready to hear more "Guess that makes sense doesn't it? I just don't know what went wrong with me there" she laughed, sneaking another muffin "Continue!"

"Oh wow..." Derpy let out with a swallow of her last muffin, suddenly feeling a little awkward and a bit sad that she had been so... pre-judgmental. Kinda like how she got with the eyes thing "Well I get what your saying... someponies are so mean! They always bring up the... the... she started, one eye trailing off a bit "you know..." she muttered, eyes and ears drooping "Don't worry Mr. Changeling... I wont tell anypony about you... Not one! I... I promise..." she muttered with a small sigh "sorry about others... like that stallion from before... he's an odd one" she said with a small smile "And thanks for the muffins! They were so scrumptiously delicious!" She smilled again, giving a small nod to the mare "Almost as good as mine!"

xD Sorry man! Hope some others get there hides in here! Has potential!

(on it! But the next few days I'l be a little slow, I'm off to the beach for a bit, will be replying but it will be slow over Easter) Derpy grabbed a good two... no twos not enough, three more muffins before plopping herself onto the couch, still a mouth full off muffin being chewed in her mouth as she spoke "Ok! I'm ready" she spluttered out, not too many chunks of muffin spraying from her mouth as she got comfortable, still eating away at her muffins

(waiting for the other guy before I post, dont want to leave him behind)

After Slick placed Knight onto the bed he could feel his hooves shaking from the nerves it was just too much, he felt like at any moment he could pass out [colour=#800080]"..There's no reason to be sorry.." [/colour]He heard that cute little voice say, he could see what was coming next, a big 'but', why did that word exist? It got so many hopes up and then pow! Right in the kisser you were shut down, feeling worse than you would if they had just said no! Oh well Slick... the thought was good while it lasted [colour=#800080]"..I feel like you're the kind of pony who I could see every single day and never grow tired of. You're fun, random, and.. and you do silly things all the time and it make me laugh" [/colour]Wha... what!? that was... unexpected, Slick felt a warm feeling pass from his head to hooves and a bright blush appeared across from cheek to cheek, he would have said something if he could feel his body, jaw just dropped while Slick tried to remember how to talk again, it all turning into mush in his head [colour=#800080]"I REALLY like you, Slick!! But, you're right.. I guess that I need to just take a little while and figure out what I really want before anything else" [/colour]Ack.... there it was... the 'but' he was dreading... oh well, it's not like it was without reason and atleast Slick could bring himself to talk now "[colour=#006400]It's... it's cool! Don't even worry about it Shade... you get where you need to be and if it ends up close to where I am just... yell me over[/colour]" He said with a small grin, turning round to feel a little nudge on his back hoof before he could leave [colour=#800080]"Thanks for being honest with me, Slick. I'm sure everything will work out" [/colour]See! He had told himself that honesty was the right thing! But half of Slick didn't want to listen, aw well, it all worked out really. He turned and gave Shade a small parting gift on the cheek, just a little peck for good measure! "[colour=#006400]It's fine Shade... you deserve it[/colour]" He smiled warmly before leaving round the side of the colts cabin, popping his head back round for one last thing "[colour=#006400]See ya! Good luck with figuring your things out![/colour]" He said with a smile, at least Pocket wouldn't have seen much from the beech seeing as the two were at the front of the cabin. He started to head down to the beach with a spring in his step, oh glorious day!

Right! So I made a small edit to make it more history-e if you know what I mean. But I hope thats what you were looking for. Anything else?

Right! I think I got what you were saying and got too it! Hope I dont need too much more!

Slick was pretty happy that he could have a hoof helping Knight up to the cabin... poor guy... stupid stupid... but still, not everypony had gone through lifeguard training... not everypony knew about how bad the water could be. He looked up to see who was actually helping him and saw Shade of all ponies [colour=#800080]"I'll you help carry him. Great job with the cpr!! I was really worried back there!!"[/colour] Slick had kinda done that hadn't he... Why did Slick have so much trouble suddenly finding the words to speak to this filly! He was fine on the bus... "[colour=#006400]It was nothing really... I'm just glad Knight isn't hurt...[/colour]" He said with a small smile, leaving the conversation with a bit of an awkward silence as they carried the half concience colt up to the cabins "[colour=#006400]So Shade....[/colour]" He said, trying to think of something to continue "[colour=#006400]erm... you and Pocket huh? She seems... nice you know[/colour]" He said, letting out a nervous laugh, the last time he'd had any interaction with her she had given him a demon glare. Things were just too odd for Slick, he needed to come clean and now, while they were alone "[colour=#006400]Look Shade... Your a really pretty filly and I really like you... But I will leave it at that... I don't want to break anything up between you and Pocket... I just needed to get that off my chest... I'm sorry...[/colour]" He said, starting to mutter as he reached the end, not really wanting to look at Shade. Atleast the two had reached the colts cabin... What where you thinking Slick? Your such a goof!

Right, gave history another swing, thanks a bunch for this Starswirl! :3

Derpy took a muffin in her hooves and let out a gasp, wide eyed as she held the still warm muffin in her hooves, it seemed to glisten as she stared at it, taking a long pause before taking a long, large bite... hmmmm... she took another pause before chewing and swallowing the warm muffin "hmmm... there amazing! Thank you so much mrs... erm... changeling?" She said with a small smile before taking in more bites

Derpy was a little reluctant to answer, she still didn't trust the changeling, for all she knew he could have brain washed his 'wife'... that was a thing they could do right? She eventually smelt something familiar... something amazing... he heard the changeling asking the mare what she had baked and the answer was... MUFFINS!!! Derpy jumped up with a wide grin "[colour=#daa520]Muffins?! Names Derpy! The mail mare! Glad to meet ya![/colour]" She called out with a wide smile, holding out a hoof for the changeling "[colour=#daa520]A friend of muffins is a friend of mine![/colour]"

Derpy wasn't happy about this, but decided that she had best comply if she wanted to go quicker. She head over to the couch and slumped down, surprised to see a mare, a pony mare out of her wandering eye, Derpy had had experience with changelings once but that was when Chrysalis tried to take over Ponyville (In the comics). "[colour=#daa520]Why are you here with a changeling!?[/colour]" She asked the mare in suprise "[colour=#daa520]Do you know what he did to me!? One minute I'm delivering mail then I'm being held by the throat![/colour]" She half yelled, she was so annoyed! The mail was going to go undelivered... and it's all her fault for getting sidetracked... nice one derpy

Slick recoiled back after getting a mouth full of salt water from Knights cough up... lovely... Slick soon coughed it up and gave Knight a pat on the back, he was breathing on his own and coming to, Slicks job here was done. He stood up from his friend and wandered over to Violet, giving her a large warm hug, just trying to calm her down "[colour=#006400]Hey cmon Violet he's fine... it's ok[/colour]" he said in a calm, motherly type voice, letting out little 'shhh' just to tell her it was ok and she could quiet down. Slick thought about it for a second and couldn't believe that today he had saved a life... he did the mouth to mouth and it worked! Though he was sure once Knight heard the story he would never want to speak of it again and fair enough, it's not like Slick was going to go round yelling out he practically kissed a stallion, that would not be ideal. Slick pulled back from the hug and smiled warmly, if there was something he was good at that wasn't physics it was knowing how to calm down an upset friend. He placed his hooves on either of Violets shoulders and spoke softly "[colour=#006400]He's fine Violet... I'm going to tell the others to take him to his bed... if you want to go and be there for when he waked up I'm sure that will help you to get closer to him[/colour]" He grinned, wiping a tear from her eye before going back over to Knight "[colour=#006400]Hey, can somepony help me take Knight to his room? He's not going to do great lying out here[/colour]"

[colour=#282828]Name:[/colour] Spirit Water [colour=#282828]Race:[/colour] Unicorn! [colour=#282828]Occupation:[/colour] Wandering water seller, out here it's a needed occupation! Sometimes the rain just isn't enough [colour=#282828]Wagon: Y Basic water carrier wagon except most of the back is just a large keg with a system to filter falling water through a mechanism on the roof using pipes and what not[/colour] [colour=#282828]Reason for leaveing:[/colour] Water just isn't selling... the area getting poorer and poorer means that ponies don't have the money to buy water, doing anything they can to get it free [colour=#282828]Hope/dreams:[/colour] To maybe just find a nice town... settle down and rest his feet... hes been on the road for too long now. [colour=#282828]Bio:[/colour] [colour=#282828]Spring has a rough exterior but don't let it fool you, it's pretty natural for most folk in these parts. If you get to know the guy and don't be a nitwit he has a heart of gold, always trying to help somepony and he would gladly give a few ponies a drink for free if they looked like they needed it. But when the whole town needs it for free then it just isn't good buisiness.[/colour] [colour=#282828]Interesting notes: It's a unicorn travelling out in the wild! Need I say more?[/colour]

"[colour=#daa520]Ehem!?[/colour]" Derpy coughed to catch a little attention, wriggling and writhing inside the arm of the odd pony behind her "[colour=#daa520]How about you both let me go? And then I can get back to my home?[/colour]" She asked rather calmly for the situation "[colour=#daa520]This time it's not even my fault this time!!!! Let me goo!![/colour]" She yelled, starting to squirm more, she just wanted to get on with her mail before she got fired!

Slick saw that Knight was passed out on the sand 'oh sweet Celestia! Well... this training has to come in use at some point right? "[colour=#006400]Sorry Violet! Knights in trouble... if your up for training then in a bit ok?[/colour]" He said with a small but nervous smile, rushing over to puzzle and Flash "[colour=#006400]Puzzle! Put him down there's no time, he needs oxygen now![/colour]" He commanded, 2 years of life guard training and his first proper rescue was his best mate... oh boy. He helped Puzzle to put him onto the floor and nealed by his his friends head, looking down his airways to see if they were blocked... nothing "[colour=#006400]Ok Flash or Puzzle, I need you to press on his chest and I'l do the erm... you know the other thing[/colour]" He said, rushing with a nervous smile before tilting Knights head back "[colour=#006400]Ok Slick... just like training...[/colour]" He muttered to himself, before going for it, breathing deep into the passed out Knights mouth. He came up with a bit of an odd look on his face, mainly because the salt water but still... he was practicaly kissing a colt! And Slick wasn't really into that kinda thing "[colour=#006400]The one that's not pumping his chest keep checking the pulse... c'mon Knight![/colour]" He half yelled as he repeated the process, not liking it any more than the first time

I'm in! I don't have time to app now but will do one when possible! Sounds great! :3 Not to mention I need another Rp under my belt!