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Brony: A guy who likes My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic.

Alrighty, your app sounds good. Ashi will have to give the final say, but, looks fine here.

I never said you need to change her job, but if that's what you want to do with the character, that's fine. But, keep in mind, your pony probably needs a job to support themselves, since she isn't a professional yet (so it seems). If her parents support her, that's fine as well.

Is there a specific reason that Holly is a Pegasus?

Your application looks pretty good! Why does she live with her aunt though? Maybe a quick background history of where she and her brother came from. You know, how they got where they are today. Also, if you could, between each category (name/age/species/etc.) could you put a space so it'll be easier to read? That, or bold each category. Thanks!

One question, is BerryBlast just an employee at the juice bar, or does she own it? You might want to put a little bit more history into her, maybe who her parents were, why she moved to Ponyville. Also, is there a specific reason that she's a Pegasus? It's a good looking application so far!

Hey there! I like Anime and comics too. Also, I see you're excited to RP, since you've already submitted an application!

Oh my gosh.

AND THERE WAS MUCH REJOICING!

It's sound like it would be really fun, but I'm not familiar with this sort of play.

It looks great! Very nice application. If you feel it's done, remove the WIP from the title and Ashi can take a look at it.

Here you go, the penciled rough of him: Up to you, did you want him color completed? Certainly do that if you like or if someone does want to adopt him. I would like him colored and such, if'n you don't mind.

There is already a topic for Garden Party. This is separate, and contains excerpts and spoilers from future parts of the story. The Garden Party WIP topic is for the story to go in chronological order. 'When I was on the moon, I went crazy. All I could think about was revenge, and hatred. Eventually it consumed me, and Nightmare Moon was born. She was the strong side of me. Inwardly, I was just a scared little filly. But Nightmare Moon was powerful. With her, I was invincible. She was like a protective shell. I was only hiding behind her, but as time went on, she gained a mind of her own. I'm no longer in control of Nightmare Moon. Once, she and I were the same." -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 'Lu....na.....' ShadowMist breathed. She felt the hoof on her throat. She felt it loosen suddenly, and then press down harder. Luna was fighting back. 'Luna's not here now.' she smiled. ShadowMist focused on trying to breath. She felt dizzy, and the world spun. She kicked her legs in a last desperation. The spinning turned hazy, and dark around the edges. ShadowMist felt the hoof against her neck shudder, Luna was trying, trying. Everything inside her screamed for a breath, but there was no air. Nightmare Moon didn't let go until ShadowMist's body stopped moving, then she let it drop to the ground. Luna stood, shocked, looking down. Nightmare's hold slowly drifted away, and Luna was left alone. 'CELESTIA!' she yelled, knowing full well her sister couldn't hear her. She raced back across the garden, calling for her sister. Through the castle and into the throne room, her hooves pounded against the floor. 'CELESTIA!' she yelled as she threw open a set of double doors to the side of the throne room. There Celestia sat, as usual, regally on her throne, taking care of the day's business. She, and the few guards in the room, turned suddenly as Luna burst in. 'Celestia, you have to help me!' Luna's breath came in gasps. 'In-In the garden.' she choked out. She couldn't hold back, and tears began to stream down her face. She turned, not waiting for Celestia, and raced back to the garden. Luna reached ShadowMist's body, still laying where she had fallen. Celestia came up beside Luna. 'Please Celestia! I've never asked you for something as important as this. You have to bring her back! I can't, you know I can't! Please, just do this one thing for me! PLEASE!' Celestia looked from Luna to the body. She didn't say a word, but placed her horn on the Pegasus' side. ShadowMist unmoving lay on the ground, Celestia's horn glowing and pressed against her. Luna tried to calm herself. Everything was going to turn out alright. She smiled. Then Luna jerked back, fighting off Nightmare Moon. Death was nothing to smile about. Luna pushed against Nightmare Moon, barely keeping her at bay. She backed up, shaking her head, mentally fighting off the darkness that wanted to consume her. All of a sudden, Luna felt the weight pull off her, and she was herself again. Tears once again formed in her eyes as she realized what she'd done. The only pony that had ever tried to understand her, her one friend in all of Equestria....was dead. The Nightmare had killed her. And yet Nightmare Moon was still Luna. Luna had let it happen. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 'I saw her Luna. She was over you, upon you, like a ghost covering your body. I saw you struggle against her. I flew down and pushed her off you. I couldn't fight her anymore after that. Everything went blank again, and I thought I was gone for good. But you...you brought me back.' 'No. It was Celestia. I cannot do the things that she can. I cannot bring life, or goodness. I only bring death and despair.' -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 'Don't say that!' ShadowMist pulled back the covers and stepped out of the bed. Luna jumped up. 'No! You shouldn'tâ€â€Â' 'I'm fine.' ShadowMist said, even though she wobbled where she stood. ShadowMist spoke as she walked over next to Luna. 'You can't keep putting yourself down like this. It's how Nightmare Moon gets through to you.' 'I'm nothing. I can't do anything right. I'm worthless.' 'Stop saying that!' ShadowMist yelled. Luna raised a hoof in the air, to smack her, and ShadowMist knew that Nightmare had a hold on her, but she stood her ground. The hoof wavered in the air, two forces against each other, fighting inside the same body. The hoof came down and touched the ground, Luna having won this time. ShadowMist put her head under Luna's chin. 'You should tell Celestia. She's your sister. She can help you.' ShadowMist rubbed her cheek along Luna's neck in comfort. 'She hates me.' Luna whispered. ShadowMist stopped and looked up at Luna. 'That's not true. You're sisters! And she brought me back. She did that for you.' 'She did for you, not me. She had to fix the damage I'd done.' 'She doesn't hate you!' 'Yes, she does!' ShadowMist suddenly felt dizzy, and she sat down on the floor. There was quiet between them, both thinking to themselves. 'Do you know the legend about my imprisonment?' Luna asked. 'You turned against your sister, and all of Equestria, by refusing to lower the moon and make way for the dawn.' ShadowMist paused, then added. 'Or so, that's how I've heard.' 'It's wrong. Everything everypony knows about that night is wrong.' Luna sighed. 'We were happy. I was happy. Well, as happy as I could be. I was ruler of the night, the time when nearly everypony was asleep. But Celestia saw the night as more beautiful than the day. Ponies could look upon my moon, and enjoy it. They could gaze at the stars, chart them. They created things that allowed them to view my night in more detail. And yet, most ponies still preferred the day over the night. But during the day, the sun was too bright for ponies to look directly at. There were no stars during the day. So even though most ponies enjoyed the daylight, they actually liked to look at my night. Celestia became jealous of ME. She didn't want just the day or night. She wanted it all. So you see, Celestia was the one who wanted more power. But she flipped things around, and blamed them on me. She paid off anyone who promised to keep their mouth shut, and got rid of anyone who threatened to reveal the truth. I was sad that ponies didn't enjoy my night, not angry. I didn't demand anything from Celestia. She's always been more powerful, greater, more loved. The favorite.' ShadowMist sat in silence, taking in Luna's side of the story. Everything that everypony knew WAS wrong...according to Luna. But who was really telling the truth? What Luna said was a possible scenario...but anyone who had been around during the incident was no longer alive. Luna continued. 'It's already hard for everypony in the kingdom to try and accept a new ruler. Celestia has been ruling for a thousand years by herself, and then I come along and am supposed to be her equal. Look at me! I spent a thousand years on the moon doing nothing. I had no spell books, no teacher. I couldn't grow any stronger. I could only practice the little that I knew. And now I'm back in Equestria, back to the same age I was when I was banished.' Luna paused to wipe tears from her eyes, remembering her time of extreme loneliness. 'Not to mention, most of Equestria still isn't sure if they should trust me. Nopony would even believe my side of the story. I've always lived in fear of my sister, but not as much as I do now. I'm so much weaker than she is. I always have been, but now more than ever. Nightmare Moon can't even compare to her powers. She has an extra thousand years of experience and practice on her side as well. And yet, everypony still fears ME! Do I look dangerous to you?!' Luna let out a sob, letting her tears fall to the floor.

Ah, another one that didn't get posted. Rainbow Dash Mini-Game DONE V3 (Clear Clouds, Avoid Derp): http://urimas.deviantart.com/art/Rainbo ... -201264368

Here are three more, Equestria Daily dubbed, "Collect Cupcakes, Lick Ponies": http://yeaka.deviantart.com/art/MLP-FiM ... -202202384 My Little Platform Game (Eat Apples, Smash Shroomlings): http://inkwell-pony.deviantart.com/#/d3ch2sl Dancing Pony Gorgeous Flames Insomnia Labrinth: http://www.yoyogames.com/games/169121-d ... rinth-demo (Look out, fullscreen!)

Moved "the blooper thread" here because it's basically the same thing.

Well, you could put the app in the OOC, just so that people can get an idea of his personality. Unless you are actually going to RP him, this seems like a good place if you want to put a description of him.

Up where you list her age, you don't need to put adult, because mare=adult. It looks pretty good, but it seems like Mystery Chaser's job wouldn't be a high paying one. Perhaps she needs a side job? Unless her parents support her. I'm just trying to see where her income comes from. You have a nice. well thought application. You even put the back story in there. Also, nice artwork. Very nice job!

What about like, Nahima Haiku?

I'm making a male pony named Shortstack, who has a stack of pancakes for a Cutie Mark. I thought the name was neat, but I don't really know what to do with him. Someone made a sketch of him....somewhere on the forum. Anyway, he's basically an adoptable. There isn't a set place that he lives, but I imagine he works at a restaurant or breakfast place.

You can put nicknames your character has underneath their real name, with a Nickname: line. I was a little worried when you said that your pony wanted to control water and time entirely, but, reading until the end, I see that she will gradually grow in her powers, and controlling time is just a dream. I'm not quite sure why she would be mocked for loving the sea...can you give a little more clarification on that? Nice looking application though. I find her fascination with the ocean and how the tides tell the flow of time is really interesting and neat.

Well, horsefeathers.

They can be found right in this topic: viewtopic.php?f=13&t=509 Nope can't be found there >_> is the same youtube link which is removed by hasbro. No, it's not. Those videos were put up by MyLittlePony1080p, not MASTERLINKX. If the videos had been taken down, I don't think the embedded videos would work anymore.

I'll be honest. My first reaction was to reply with some snark about how Equestria isn't exactly driven by the American economy. But as I reached for a chip I realized, wait. Maybe the reason why ponies seem so well-adjusted and connected is because they believe in working for "the better good". I'm not talking socialism; I just mean, maybe their society is less focussed on economy. It's pretty common in cartoons, after all. So everyone's presented with the ideal that "everypony can help", be it making baked goods or growing apples or dressmaking, or... It's an entirely different economy in Equestria. It seems like everypony who is old enough is doing something. I mean, even Twist seemed to have some sort of job, and she was still a filly. You don't see lazy ponies. Sure, Dash is kind of laid back, but she can also do her assigned job quicker than other Pegasi. Ponies all have talents because ponies are all meant to do some sort of work to help society.

Also, having ponies pull the train creates more jobs.