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[Solaria]

There's two Davvys! One must be a changeling imposter.

[Davroth]

No, lag just returned unfortunately. For me at least.

I'm totally not evil pod pony Davroth. Definitely not.

[Rosewind]

I think he's a changeling! GET HIM!

[Davroth]

*runs in circles chuckling*

Oh no, you have to believe me, girls. ;D

[Saren]

[Solaria]

Hyaaaaaaaaaaah! Oh wait, we're not fighting ninja?

[Davroth]

Unicorn magic force choke. Brilliant.

[Sulvuss]

Oh, man, oh man, oh man, oh man, oh man. Were is the chat bar...guys...where is it...I'm cracking up here!

[Davroth]

Yeah, that chat bar. I hope it returns. :I

[Conor Colton]

'Afternoon

Hello Sulvuss, Aria, Davvy, Rose and Saren

[Solaria]

Ugh, this Cadence app. I was worried that I wouldn't have enough to put in there. Now I'm afraid I'm going to have to take shears to it, because I'm pretty sure at this point it's the longest one.

And hello Conor.

*drops welding mask and lights the tip of my horn like a torch*

Oh well, time to turn a diamond into a flawless diamond!

[Sulvuss]

Hey there, Connor old buddy, old Pal.

In fact, hello to all my charming denizens to the LPW thread. I assume that your all having a grand old day.

[Davroth]

You don't have to do this alone, you know. :I

Also, hi, Conor.

[Conor Colton]

Hey. Nice to see you all again

And yeah, if you want, me and Davvy could help, Aria?

[Solaria]

Her uh... cutie mark story alone is three paragraphs long

[Conor Colton]

....Maybe just a little trim on that one there, Aria?

[Davroth]

^^

That might be a little.... excessive.

[SilverSwirl]

[Solaria]

Well, that's the whole point of a draft now isn't it?

"Oh here, let us help!"

"Yes, we want to!"

...

...

"Do exactly what you were going to do."

I'm not sure what I would have done without your input, you two

[Davroth]

:I

I can't help with what I can't see. XD

[Sulvuss]

....Maybe just a little trim on that one there, Aria?

Huh, 3 paragraphs dosen't seem long to me.

[Solaria]

I'll PM it to you Davvy. I already know some areas I can cut down on, I just like how it was like... an actual little story.

[Conor Colton]

...Yes, I'm that helpful, Aria XD

But like Davvy said, we can't help if we can't see...Unless the bit you sent me yesterday was the whole cutie mark thing, was it?

[Davroth]

Well let me put it that way. It doesn't have to be too much. I can appreciate a well thought out Cutie Mark story. ^^

[Conor Colton]

Same here...

Just trim some small bits to make it looks shorter, but still have the actual substance and thought in there

And...forgive me if the edit I sent didn't make a huge difference