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[Conor Colton]

So....no advice for me then?

[Fawkes]

Welp, while I don't know the exact flavor of the folks on FIMFICTION I'd say go for it.

Critique is always good. Just don't take it the wrong way.

But if there's anyone who doesn't have anything constrictive to say, just ignore 'em or tell 'em to buck off.

[Acynder]

EE nope

[Conor Colton]

But have a really hard time taking criticism of any type

I don't know why!

....I think I need to work on that here before I go anywhere else.....

[Conor Colton]

Ugh...why did I even tell you guys?

You guys don't care about my stupid flaws

[Fawkes]

It would certainly be a positive.

Critique is essential in order for any good writer to improve their work.

It's just to help you better your writing~

[Acynder]

True

[Fawkes]

Ugh...why did I even tell you guys?

You guys don't care about my stupid flaws

Stop that defeatist sorta talk, Conor >:[

I care~

[Brony-Vas-Normandy]

I in serious debate with myself whether I should post my stories on FIMFICTION.....

Everyone else seems to be doing it but....

What if nobody like what I write?

What if everyone's a jerk there?

I can't decide and it's literally tearing me apart

>Loving and tolerating people

>Not jerks

I've never seen any rude comments on FiMFiction. Besides, if you don't face criticism, you'll never learn where you're good and bad, and you'll never be able to face the imminent haters everypony gathers when they become more recognized.

[Conor Colton]

You're right Normandy....

It's just I need time to work on it is all....

In fact..I have an idea to help me with that

How about I show you guys chapter two now, and you tell me what you think?

Oh and if you hadn't read the first chapter I strongly advise doing so first....

So what do you guys say? Will you do this for me?

[Brony-Vas-Normandy]

Of course!

[Conor Colton]

Okay....and I want you guys to be brutally honest okay?

Don't hold back anything....I'll be ready for it

So should I post it here or what?

[Brony-Vas-Normandy]

Yep.

Oh, and I was going to wait 'till chapter 2 came out to start reading, so I'll need a link to chapter 1 as well.

[Acynder]

You're right Normandy....

It's just I need time to work on it is all....

In fact..I have an idea to help me with that

How about I show you guys chapter two now, and you tell me what you think?

Oh and if you hadn't read the first chapter I strongly advise doing so first....

So what do you guys say? Will you do this for me?

[Conor Colton]

Okay...here goes

Chapter one: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oRnXFGhW7VjccdMSdTorIR1G_pjxorHnSofccPLA9bU/edit?hl=en_GB&pli=1

Chapter Two: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mRD3ix4zW1TtUe-Dp50IdTuI5fu3epdMMK60jg9PEQg/edit?hl=en_GB

Work away everyone....I'm ready

[Conor Colton]

I wasn't asking you Acy >:[

Ya troll

[Acynder]

Okay...here goes

Chapter one: https://docs.google....?hl=en_GB&pli=1

Chapter Two: https://docs.google....g/edit?hl=en_GB

Work away everyone....I'm ready

Well appearanly It's so bad that my PS3 froze when I clicked on the link. Thats new.

[Conor Colton]

Well that's a a shame isn't it?

Edit: At least you clicked the link

[Conor Colton]

Waiting, waiting, waiting.....

*whistles*

[Acynder]

Well that's a a shame isn't it?

Edit: At least you clicked the link

Course I clicked on the link. I had to tear this new fanfic a new starfish. It's my job.

[Conor Colton]

Well it's nice seeing you pursue a career you enjoy Acy

There are only a few people who are, consider yourself luck my friend

[Nasty]

Well trust me, stick to your guns and continued writing regardless of what anyone might say

I recently came to that realization myself

Was that becuz of nastywasty?

I doubt it but nonetheless, let us rejoice! What I think everypony (it felt so right saying that) needs is a review person/station/thread/everyonejustrevieweachother'sstoriesforthelulz. Something that'll kick writing into shape. Because we all want people to read our stories, but we don't want to prance around and burden people to read it because it's a thirty-some page story that no one has the time to read (my situation)

But who would be up to such a task?

[Acynder]

Was that becuz of nastywasty?

I doubt it but nonetheless, let us rejoice! What I think everypony (it felt so right saying that) needs is a review person/station/thread/everyonejustrevieweachother'sstoriesforthelulz. Something that'll kick writing into shape. Because we all want people to read our stories, but we don't want to prance around and burden people to read it because it's a thirty-some page story that no one has the time to read (my situation)

But who would be up to such a task?

I would do it. Tearing fanfics a new starfish is my awesome talent.

[Conor Colton]

Oh you

[Angie Cakes]

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