IceStorm0 Posted December 16, 2011 Report Share Posted December 16, 2011 Roleplay Type: Equestria Crossover Rp Name(CHANGED!): Canvas Sex: Male Age: Foal Species: Unicorn Eye Color: Green Coat Color: Orange. Mane/Tail/Markings Color & Style: Mane and tail / Changes through the activity of his imagination. Physique: Skinny/Tall Cutie Mark: None here Origin/Residence: Canterlot - but was moved to Ponyville. Occupation: Farms corn / carrots Motivation: Creativity / Art Likes: Drawing / helping / silence Dislikes: Getting into fights / Defeat / Admitting he is wrong. Character Summary:Canvas was born in Canterlot, with a loving, wealthy family. He was going to a boarding school, with all A's and B's! Until his father got fired from his job, they couldn't pay their bills and were forced to move somewhere else, somewhere calm, peaceful. Ponyville. They moved there, and ever since, his parents were abusive, his grades were bad, and nopony wanted to be his friend, either. He's been farming carrots and corn to support for his family.Canvas wasn't like other ponies. You know that one outcast that sits in the corner? Yeah, that's him. He always drew. During class, at home, where ever he could. He often got in to trouble for that, but he didn't care. He did it anyways. He often got picked on, as well, mainly for being an outcast, but also because of his blank flank. Anypony who knew Canvas didn't like him all that much. Even the teachers were hesitant of talking to him. He was also failing ever single class, other than art. His parents almost put him up for adoption for that. He hasn't gotten his cutie mark yet, I'm afraid. But he will, eventually.Canvas often liked to draw what he thought his cutie mark would look like. It was one of his most favorite things to draw. But he only did that in the privacy of his room. He didn't like other ponies seeing his drawings, or seeing anypony else's drawings. He was afraid of defeat. He has never admitted it, though.He wanted to go back to Canterlot, but he couldn't work up the nerve to run away. And besides, he had no money. How could he survive on his own? He had an idea, but it would take some time. He'd save up enough money to buy food for a couple months, a train ticket, and an education. And so, for the next 5 months, he saved up as much as he could, snuck out through the fields of corn, and was on his way. He caught a train and was on his way back to Canterlot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuickLime Posted December 16, 2011 Report Share Posted December 16, 2011 You can't steal somepony elses cutiemark, and I doubt Equestria has the technology for fire alarms Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceStorm0 Posted December 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2011 Lol. They know what a bullet is, and a tank. But oh well. I was going to redo the entire story.And sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DantonDamnark Posted December 16, 2011 Report Share Posted December 16, 2011 Alternatively, you could say something like: "A Wizard Hat and Wand (Similar to Trixie's)" or explain how it is different from Trixie's (Maybe without Wizard Hat). Also, I think your App is coming along nice; writer's block is common by the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RCTwilightSparkle Posted December 16, 2011 Report Share Posted December 16, 2011 guys, please read the entire application before commenting (and look over the critiquing guidelines again), this is a crossover application...Icestorm, you're allowed to make this character however you'd like because it's a crossover character, as long as they fit into the rules on this board. Keep in mind that we have a general audience rating which means no violence, gore or anything sexual. I get the feeling you've already read them but here are our RP rules in case you're not sure what is/isn't allowed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceStorm0 Posted December 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2011 Wait so when I'm done do I just put [FINISHED] after it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RCTwilightSparkle Posted December 16, 2011 Report Share Posted December 16, 2011 Wait so when I'm done do I just put [FINISHED] after it?yup, that's how the staffers know you want it looked at Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DantonDamnark Posted December 16, 2011 Report Share Posted December 16, 2011 ... This is a crossover application...Ugh, I always overlook such minor things! I did read the critiquing guidelines but I didn't comment until after QuickLime; I felt their comment could be misconstrued as "rude" and wanted to comfort IceStorm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceStorm0 Posted December 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2011 I need critiquing on my summary. Is it good enough to be accepted? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuickLime Posted December 16, 2011 Report Share Posted December 16, 2011 It's fine I didn't see this was a crossover app, for crossovers I don't think you need to be accepted? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceStorm0 Posted December 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2011 Oh really? O_oWow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlindJester Posted December 17, 2011 Report Share Posted December 17, 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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