MyLittlePonyTales Posted March 11, 2012 Report Share Posted March 11, 2012 How is this Application coming along? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuickLime Posted March 13, 2012 Report Share Posted March 13, 2012 I personally think you are laying it on a bit thick with the whole "Death sentence" and "Useless" Bit due to poor eye sight, considering I have a Pegasus who also has bad eyes. Maybe you could soften that and say she felt that she wouldn't live up to her family's expectations instead? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted March 14, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2012 Any progress on this Application? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted March 17, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2012 If a comment is not made saying you would like to keep this character, it will be removed in 5 days. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amarillys Posted March 19, 2012 Report Share Posted March 19, 2012 I personally think you are laying it on a bit thick with the whole "Death sentence" and "Useless" Bit due to poor eye sight, considering I have a Pegasus who also has bad eyes. Maybe you could soften that and say she felt that she wouldn't live up to her family's expectations instead?That was exactly what I was trying to imply in my application. But now that you mention it....................maybe "Death sentence" is too strong of a word Imma gonna edit now.If a comment is not made saying you would like to keep this character, it will be removed in 5 days.I would like to keep her ^w^ Sorry for not keeping my promise OTL. Anyway, I've finished her final art. Just a little bit of editing in her description and she'll be finished! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amarillys Posted March 19, 2012 Report Share Posted March 19, 2012 And now she is finished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brianblackberry Posted March 19, 2012 Report Share Posted March 19, 2012 She is a cute character and its a cute story. I am also glad that you showed that her despair was mostly in her mind and her life was actually decent with caring parents and a loving brother. What I do feel is missing is how she got her cutie mark, what it means to her and how does it relate to her special talent? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amarillys Posted March 21, 2012 Report Share Posted March 21, 2012 ^Hmmm.................I guess I do see where you're coming from. I'll change her backstory a bit.Thanks for critique! ^w^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imagination Posted March 23, 2012 Report Share Posted March 23, 2012 I think this is a very cute character!And don't worry about the drawings, all things considered they really aren't half bad! Everypony has to start somewhere As for the app itself:I can kinda see the tie between her cutie mark and reading Cinderella, but how exactly did that give her her cutie mark (or did I misinterpret this)? What does her cutie mark represent, and what does it mean to her?If you could help me out and clarify on this, I'd be more than happy to stamp this! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amarillys Posted March 23, 2012 Report Share Posted March 23, 2012 I think this is a very cute character!And don't worry about the drawings, all things considered they really aren't half bad! Everypony has to start somewhere As for the app itself:I can kinda see the tie between her cutie mark and reading Cinderella, but how exactly did that give her her cutie mark (or did I misinterpret this)? What does her cutie mark represent, and what does it mean to her?If you could help me out and clarify on this, I'd be more than happy to stamp this!I'm planning to change her backstory for a bit, for the sake of clarifying how she got her cutie mark. My only regret is making her character summary even longer Y____Y *What I still don't understand is what everyone is talking about when they say "what it means to her" though* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imagination Posted March 23, 2012 Report Share Posted March 23, 2012 *What I still don't understand is what everyone is talking about when they say "what it means to her" though*Well the best way I personally can put it is:"What is her affiliation to her cutie mark?"Like, what does it mean to her emotionally, or in terms of her lifelong goals or overall outlook on life?For example, a pony could write a bestselling book and get a cutie mark for it, but deep down that cutie mark represents his/her love for writing and seeing other ponies find enjoyment in his/her written ideas.Hope this helps! If you need further clarification on anything, please let me know! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amarillys Posted March 23, 2012 Report Share Posted March 23, 2012 Thanks for putting it in a more literal way ^w^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imagination Posted March 23, 2012 Report Share Posted March 23, 2012 No problem!Though if you're putting UNDER CONSTRUCTION into the profile for now, I'd ask that you change the tag back [WIP] so that we know you're still working on it! Once you're done you can change it back to [FINAL] and I'll take another look! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imagination Posted March 26, 2012 Report Share Posted March 26, 2012 How's this app coming along? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amarillys Posted March 26, 2012 Report Share Posted March 26, 2012 I'm finishing up right now ^w^ Sorry for slow progress, writter's block. I should be able to finish today though.Edit: Mfw my application counts as a "hot" topic. Can't tell if good or bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imagination Posted March 26, 2012 Report Share Posted March 26, 2012 Awesome!This looks good to me, so I look forward to seeing her on the boards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amarillys Posted March 27, 2012 Report Share Posted March 27, 2012 Yay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skye Posted March 31, 2012 Report Share Posted March 31, 2012 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amarillys Posted April 1, 2012 Report Share Posted April 1, 2012 Sweet!So what do I do now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skye Posted April 1, 2012 Report Share Posted April 1, 2012 Now you peruse the roleplay forums to see if there's any roleplays you'd like to join, or you can start one of your own! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amarillys Posted April 5, 2012 Report Share Posted April 5, 2012 Okie Dokie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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