tyler008bon Posted May 9, 2012 Report Share Posted May 9, 2012 Role-play Type: World of EquestriaName: Amy IronhoovesGender: FemaleAge: MareSpecies: Earth PonyCoat Color: Light yellow with a black maneTail Color & Style: black and short, it curls a bit at the endsEye Color: green eyes Cutie Mark: A hammer making a downward motion onto an anvil Physique: about averageOrigin: Born in Fillydelphia, now lives in CanterlotOccupation: Metalwork’s apprenticeMotivation: A major motivation of hers is to become a master blacksmith, but she loves seeing her friends’ smiles and making them happy.Likes: Positive emotionsHer friendsHer blacksmith teacherBright and positive colorsWorkingDislikes: Negative emotionsSnooty poniesDark and negative colorsCharacter Summary: As an only child born in Fillydelphia into a high class family, Amy Ironhooves was expected to act as regal as her parents did. She was in the best private school money could pay for, wore the best clothing, and ate the highest class food available. Close to her school, an orphanage was full of foals and fillies that she quickly warmed up to. She got dirty playing with them, ate her lunch with them, and even went far enough to skip school to play with them. Her teacher found out about the activities and told her parents, so they moved to Canterlot to get her away from the “negative influences” She was furious with her parents after that, and always disobeyed them. She met a blacksmith after a few months in Canterlot and found her true calling. She tried hiding her hammer and anvil cutie mark, but it was to no avail and her parents found out. The family was destroyed (emotionally, of course), and she moved into the attic at the blacksmith’s shop almost immediately after becoming a mare. After a short time away from her family, her smile and uppity personality returned for good, and she chose to keep it that way, only getting angry at snooty ponies and things that made people sad.Amy's goal in life is to make a very successful living as a metalworker, she is a bit... emotional, quick to anger and quicker to forgive. Stress can hit her hard if left unchecked, and sad or depressing news hits her a lot harder than most.She is never willing to show her sadness in front of friends,but more than willing to let it out in private. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted May 12, 2012 Report Share Posted May 12, 2012 How is this Application coming along? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tyler008bon Posted May 12, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2012 I was hoping for some feedback before changing this to Final, but no one has responded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RarityDash Posted May 12, 2012 Report Share Posted May 12, 2012 The staff don't really look at apps until they're marked final. WIP is more just if you're app is physically incomplete and you don't want anyone to look at it yet. When you want feedback, it should be set to final.Really kind of confused me with my first app too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tyler008bon Posted May 12, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2012 Oh, okay.Thank you Phil!I hope you get Rarity! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SunsetSombra Posted May 13, 2012 Report Share Posted May 13, 2012 Well, whilst the application looks a little short, I'll certainly say that the information given is dense enough for me to see how it goes from here! No guarantee that somebody won't ask for a little more, but it ticks most of my boxes to get a stamp!{ Also, Phil DID get Rarity - Good on him, too! } Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tyler008bon Posted May 14, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 14, 2012 Thank you Robikku! I'm curious, though, what did you look for that I was missing?(Also congrats Phil!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dio Posted May 15, 2012 Report Share Posted May 15, 2012 What's missing is additional exposition on her personality. We have a bit of history and a bit of family, but next to nothing on what she is like as a person. What makes her tick? What dreams and desires does she have? What flaws, quirks, and little unique bits of character give her life and make her interesting? These things help you flesh out the character and make her your own in addition to helping other players know how to react and giving them more material to make story hooks out of. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tyler008bon Posted May 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2012 Holy cow, I almost forgot about this, sorry!Amy's goal in life is to make a very successful living as a metalworker, she is a bit... emotional, quick to anger and quicker to forgive. Stress can hit her hard if left unchecked, and sad or depressing news hits her a lot harder than most.She is never willing to show her sadness in front of friends,but more than willing to let it out in private.This will be edited into the full post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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