SonicRainboomGirl Posted June 20, 2012 Report Share Posted June 20, 2012 Roleplay Type: World of Equestria RPName: Heidiara Nobeli (Heidi to her friends)Sex: FemaleAge: Full-grownSpecies: GriffonEye Colour: Powder BlueCoat Colour: Dusky brown feathers that range in lighter to darker colours. Rusty orange talons and beak.Mane/Tail/Markings Colour & Style: N/A, standard griffonPhysique: Medium height, lean build. Mildly muscular.Origin/Residence: Born and raised in Talonopolis, still lives there.Occupation: Heidi is a nurse, caring for those who have been hurt or need help. She finds her work very rewarding.Motivation: Heidi is very charitable, and enjoys helping others. Her thoughts are constantly consumed with the urge to heal the world, and thoughts of how to make it a better place. Her work is often disturbing or upsetting, and she is a very sensitive person. She secretly hopes to overcome her sadness and guilt in the workplace.Character Summary:Heidi was born in the beautiful city of Talonopolis, a temperate paradise. She and her large family were very rich, for her father owned the local grocery store. This store sold exotic goods, foods from all over the globe, and was a constant stop for travellers and griffins alike. Heidi was very sheltered, never leaving Talonopolis until she was full grown. She found the most joy in caring for others, always showing extreme compassion. Even though she was the baby in the family, her maturity and responsibility made her appear to be the oldest. She took care of her siblings thoughtfully, and this was well acknowledged. Wickedly sharp, Heidi got a full scholarship to study medicine in Rockwington. There she found her true talent in nursing.Her parents were very noble and rich, but didn't have much time to take care of their children. They were cold and distant, so for the most part Heidi and her six siblings were raised by a nanny. The nanny, Solarisina, was Heidi's role model. Heidi aspired to be exactly like the beautiful, caring griffin. When Heidi's older sister, Mariosa, was incredibly ill, Heidi was the one who nursed her back to health. Her parents are long gone, and have for the most part disregarded Heidi. But she is so independent, she doesn't really mind. She never needed them much anyways.Heidi is incredibly sensitive, a little too much so. She feels much too much empathy often, and hates anything violent or related to death. When it comes too these matters, she can't seem to get the job done. She takes things a bit too literally often, being a very serious gal.Heidi is very serious, but sweet and caring. She takes good care of her friends and family, putting them high above anything or anybody else. She is romantic, but considers it a last priority. She gives everybody she meets the benefit of the doubt, no matter how difficult they can be. She stays focused and on task, taking time and effort for every task she faces. A careful and tireless worker, she doesn't give up easily. You can always expect her to do what's right, being a lawful good. Her honest nature and beautiful soul make her the kind of griffin every griffin should know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brianblackberry Posted June 21, 2012 Report Share Posted June 21, 2012 Origin/Residence: Born and raised in Talos, a large city in the Griffon Kingdoms. It was snowy and cold, just how Heidi likes it. She currently lives in Pisa, but visits Equestria often.Actually we have a Griffin territory call Aquilla, you can find the maps and links to descriptions here. We even have a proposed lore about the Griffin lands and culture here that is almost complete. Please use these for the basis of where she is from if you are going to use the Griffin territories, thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SonicRainboomGirl Posted June 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2012 Oh! Alright, I just used the map on Equestria Daily for my app, thank you for pointing me in the right direction! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brianblackberry Posted June 22, 2012 Report Share Posted June 22, 2012 Oh! Alright, I just used the map on Equestria Daily for my app, thank you for pointing me in the right direction! No prob, just let us know when you changed things. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted June 22, 2012 Report Share Posted June 22, 2012 Where did you get the art of her? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SonicRainboomGirl Posted June 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2012 I took a recolor of Gilda, and then made a few changes using Gimp and Paint (the blue eyes, the orange talons). It was a lot of fun! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SonicRainboomGirl Posted June 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2012 I think I've got it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brianblackberry Posted June 23, 2012 Report Share Posted June 23, 2012 Just a couple notes for you here. Motivation: Heidi is very charitable, and enjoys helping peopleShould change "people" to "others" since there are no humans in that world. Heidi was born in the beautiful city of Talonopolis, an icy paradise. She and her large family were very rich, for her father owned the local grocery store. This store sold exotic goods, foods from all over the globe, and was a constant stop for travellers and griffins alike. Heidi was very sheltered, never leaving Talos until she was full grown.Talonpolis' climate is more semi-arid and temperate; it does have cold and snowy winters, but is not icy year round. In the last sentence, you call the city "Talos".Other than these the application is just fine. So fixing these will assure a stamp. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SonicRainboomGirl Posted June 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2012 Mistakes FIXED Thanks, Brian! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brianblackberry Posted June 23, 2012 Report Share Posted June 23, 2012 For Great Justice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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