AlisonRose

Apple Bumpkin let out a soft giggle as she looked at the two, they did look absolutly adorable together and it sure made her smile to see her elder sister happy. [colour=#a52a2a]"Well now that introductions are over, Sister you asked me who I had invited?"[/colour] She giggled and flicked her tail about. [colour=#a52a2a]"That, I can not reveal at this time, if I did tell you that then it would ruin the surprise!"[/colour] She flicked her tail some more as she leaned close to her sister and booped her in the nose with another giggle. Bumpkin was sure as all get out excited and knew that today was going to be AMAZING and PERFECT. Her grin only widened as she strutted back up-stairs to her room and started to sing as she flopped on her bed, surely that her sister could hear but she didn't really mind as she hummed about in her peaceful bliss. Her mind was filled with her hopeful special somepony as she flipped her mane about now as well and closed her eyes.

Misty nodded her head a few times as she listened to their talk about her in her suit. [colour=#00ffff]"Well no we don't wear anything underneath. I was amazed that I could even fit into it, but when I got it on it wasn't still frozen but it sure was still cold."[/colour] She giggled as she put a hoof to her chin and tried to remember exactly how the story went with Rarity. [colour=#00ffff]"Yes she is also a hero of Equestria, she is a white Unicorn Mare who has an impeccable taste for fashion and the like. We were at the young flyers competition, the Wonderbolts and I, Rarity had these really strange looking wings that reminded me of a butterfly's but the real magic happened when she flew up decently high and let the light shine through them and made a dazzling spectacle However soon her wings started to burn up due to the heat and she began to plummet down towards the ground. Surely as you can bet I tried to dive as fast as I could to catch her as my fellow Wonderbolts did as well, as we were nearing her she flailed about as she was clearly scared but without warning a hoof came my way and made my world fade out to black for a moment." [/colour]She took a deep breath now that she realized she had just given the entire summary in one sitting and licked her lips as she remembered her Lemon Water had been refilled by the very kind and stunning Martini. With a smile and a nod to her she sipped on the Lemon Water some more trying to still quench her thirst. [colour=#00ffff]"Most of my stories are simple yet funny I guess, most of the time involving that I somehow end up at a loss for something. In the first case I had a loss of heat, and the other I had a loss of consciousness."[/colour] She nodded her head again and then giggled as she semi-forced a smile to them all.

Well now that all that has been taken care of, the app looks pretty good to me =) I'll pass it on.

As Fiddlesticks' previous (and hopefully soon to be again) player she isn't an Apple pony but merely stops by to hang with the Apple Family for reunions and Barn raising and the such.

Dearest member, Please post here if you have any questions and I personally will respond to you here with the most current and up to date information and answers you seek. Thank you, Alison (PS: I will post a review of this app should you request one as the app is a WIP and not actually ready for review.)

Before I review this app can you please take all the colour out of the app and I must also inform you that an app has to be written in third person by you not with context from your pony. How ever if you wish to have your pony still state that small bit please put it into a spoiler using the spoiler tags. Thank you, Alison. As for the review of the app I would like to point out that we do not ask for any information about your relationship and/or orientation. Please remove the sentence at the end of the app "[colour=#282828]And, finally, he is an absolute [/colour]idiot [colour=#282828]when it comes to crushes that he has. Nopony knows why, but he spends more time fretting and worrying about it than the most dramatic mares in all of Equestria! (Well, maybe bar a couple.)" as it is right against these rules. if you wish to develop a relationship please do so in the actual RP and not by stating facts such as this in your app.[/colour] [colour=#282828]Secondly I notice that you talk a lot using parenthesis, is there anyway that you can take the words you have in those and work them into the app as part of the information rather then a side note?[/colour]

Apple Bumpkin nodded her head as Cheerilee talked, she could hear a hint of hesitation in her voice and knew that she had picked most likely the worst time ever to ask her this. [colour=#a52a2a]" 'Ah, uh...erm... 'Ah just wanted ta let ya'll know so that ya could think on it is all."[/colour] She let her voice trail off as she thought about everything Cheerilee was saying. [colour=#a52a2a]" 'Ah understand that the foals mean a lot to you,but 'Ah just wanted to take a hint of time away to speak my mind before we had to go back and deal with it. 'Ah honestly wasn't wanting a yes or a no right nah but 'Ah more or less just wanted to tell you. 'Ah couldn't keep it ta myself anymore."[/colour] She blushed even more now as she figured she looked like a babbling dolt now. [colour=#a52a2a]"Well, let us'n go back and see what damage the foals have caused then 'eh?"[/colour] Of course she was joking, she knew that there was only a few of the foals she had to watch out for such as that small rust coloured one, and the one that kept falling asleep. Bumpkin turned and flipped her mane out of her face and slowly trotted back to the door and opened it as she walked back into the main room of the building.

With a nod of her head she flipped her mane out of her face. Misty wasn't sure if it was even close to her very styled mane that she normally wears but who was she to care since they did it for free and it felt actually quite nice. [colour=#40e0d0]"Thank you very much Mr. PocketChange, and to you Madame Paradise."[/colour] She attempted to curtsy to them from her sitting position on the bar stool and with a slight giggle almost fell off, she was still oh so weak from battling the storm, not to mention her dehydration she was also dealing with. She was so nervous this morning she even forgot to eat breakfast, lunch, and now that the storm was over she realized that she had also missed dinner. Ugh what was a girl to do. Her stomach rumbled in agreement as she recalled the last thing she ate as being a Summer Salad the night before, however this pie sure did taste delicious. [colour=#40e0d0]"What sort of story would you like to hear about? Perhaps one where the team froze my uniform in ice and then didn't tell me so as I was flying I was utterly cold and very immobile. It gave the audience quite the thrill though to see me spiral out of control only to recover and make it look like part of the act. Or maybe a story about the day I met Rainbow Dash over there and her friend Rarity kicked me in the face and knocked me out, that one is always a classic."[/colour] She giggled as she now happily stuffed her face with more pie and sipped on her lemon water.

Apple Bumpkin coughed and then waved her hoof at Breaburn. [colour=#a52a2a]"Her name is CHEERILEE."[/colour] She emphasized and yelled it this time to make sure he heard her properly. [colour=#a52a2a]"And she is a teacher at the school Apple Bloom goes to..." [/colour]She trailed off knowing that surely that was going to spark some sort of thoughts in the minds of those around her. She took another bite of the food on her plate and swallowed it down with some Lemon Water. She was trying her best to not just spill everything that she loved about the teacher pony as it was only very recently that she had even asked her to go on a date, but that was a story for a different day. [colour=#a52a2a]" 'Ah just hope she ends up likin' me as much as 'Ah like her."[/colour] She now started to pout a hint as her thoughts ran rampant in her mind. Apple Pie simply stared at her cousin and let her mouth fall agape. [colour=#00ff00]"Well she had informed me that I do have a significant other pony but I just have to find him or her and make sure they are the one but to not rush into anything as it might end being a bad style of relationship and leave me broken and scared. I am just upset at the fact that no matter how much I prodded her she would not give me either gender or a time frame to look for them and instead she simply sung to me in this very high-pitched almost squeaking voice. To top it off it was clear she was making the baby in her care very ill by feeding it nothing but pies and the like of sugar items." [/colour]There, that wasn't so hard to say now was it? She had given Apple Bloom a lot to think about so she was sure to give her proper pause and consideration before she would speak again.

As Bumpkin followed Cheerilee into the side room the thoughts came even heavier in her head and made it almost hard to breathe. [colour=#a52a2a]"Um....Miss Cheerilee...I um..."[/colour] She was still oh so nervous about it but wanted to at least ask her. [colour=#a52a2a]"Would you go on a date with me."[/colour] She said and as soon as she finished the thought her eyes went wide and she simply stared at Cheerilee as if the answer would just suddenly sputter out of her mouth. [colour=#a52a2a]"I mean, that is if you would, please, you are a very fantastic mare and I would love to take you out to dinner with me one day and it can be payment for all of the damages and if it becomes anything more we can go with it ok?"[/colour] Bumpkin was sure now that the teacher pony would say no since she sounded so creepy right now but she kept at it hoping to influence the teacher to accept. [colour=#a52a2a]"I...I dunno what else ta say to ya other then I think it'd be swell to have a special somepony like you since its so very lonely here on the farm and 'Ah know that you get lonely a lot too down there in Ponyville so 'Ah could come visit you and all of that other stuff." [/colour]Bumpkin now started to grin ear to ear as her thoughts became laid bare before the teacher. She hoped that with reason Cheerilee would at least accept the date and eventually share the same feelings that Bumpkin had for her.

Bumpkin still hung over the edge of the machine and looked at Cheerilee. [colour=#a52a2a]"Well if'n a foal wants to take mah spot that'd be darn peachy since 'Ah think nah would be the best time for our little talk'n there Cheerilee." [/colour]She said before finding her way down and sliding herself in right next to Cheerilee so that they could have a very quiet talk and not disrupt the foals. [colour=#a52a2a]"That is if'n you have the time now."[/colour] She spoke slowly and quietly now, a hint of uncertainty in her voice as the words traveled through the air. [colour=#a52a2a]"It will only be a quick talk 'Ah promise."[/colour] She nodded her head and tried to smile but her lips quivered and sent her back to her seemingly normal half-smile as she looked over at the mare standing next to her. Bumpkin swished her tail about, she had never ever had such an urge to talk to somepony and ask them a very certain set of questions but she felt that now was as good of a time as any to do so.

Apple Pie nodded her head a few times and gathered the needed blankets for their most amazing of forts.With a quick but careful trot she navigated her way to the kitchen and scouted out the best possible location for each of the blankets to be when they would make the fort. Mind you Apple Pie had no real knowledge of Architectural design but she knew enough that she could map out the fort for Pinchy hoping that she wasn't using the entire kitchen and just the kitchen table. [colour=#00ff00]"Ah here should be a suitable location should it not?" [/colour]She asked Pinchy just to make sure that she was correct in her previous assumption. Maybe even Berry would be willing to help them, and cut up one of the pies while she was at it. All this plotting and planning had to make a little filly hungry and warn out, not to mention the long walk from Appleoosa.

With a look of complete bewilderment as to her cousin's choice of words Apple Bumpkin simply looked on at Braeburn. [colour=#a52a2a]"Well, um, yes, I would like to talk about her but I don't rightly know if she has the same sort of feelings for me that I have for her..." [/colour]She let out a soft sigh and inhaled a lot before she let out a flurry of words at Braeburn. [colour=#a52a2a]"HernameisCheerileenadIthinkthatsheisthemostamazingmareintheworld.Hermaneisgorgeousandsheisaschoolteacheraswellaseasyontheeyes. Sheiseasygoingandwellmaneredanddoesn'tseemtogetmadeasyaswellassheevenbringsherclasswithherforfieldtripsandletshtemexploreandventurearound. OH and if I didn't mention it, she is cute too..."[/colour] Bumpkin let out a sigh after she finished her small rant her ears pinning themselves back as she now just blathered her entire secret to her cousin Braeburn who could no easily tell every single Apple. Bumpkin let out a small giggle as she replayed her words that she just machine gunned at Braeburn and then went wide-eyed as blush struck hard across her face. Had she really just admitted that she found Cheerilee Cute, Adorable, Amazing, Fantastic, Irresistible, and even Entrancing? (The rant spaced out if you couldn't read it: Her name is Cheerilee and I thinks he is the most amazing mare in the world. Her mane is gorgeous and she is a school teacher as well as easy on the eyes. She is easygoing and well mannered and doesn't seem to get mad as well as she even brings her class with her for field trips and lets them explore and venture around.)

Yes almost exactly as Spikes position.

Nodding her head a few times she put the bit purse away and sighed she was really thirsty and she could tell that it was showing. She took the glass of lemon water and drained it down her throat as she didn't even seem to swallow it. Once she had finished the glass her ears perked up a bit however she was still thirsty but she was ready to tell the barmare some stories. [colour=#00ffff]"Well it is nice to meet you Martini Paradise, I am Misty Morning."[/colour] She tried to lift her head up a little bit to smile at the barmare and then found herself sitting up, well at least as up as she was going to get for now. That storm sure had taken its toll on Misty and her stamina. [colour=#00ffff]"What sort of a story do you want to hear about? Perhaps one about the Wonderbolts or even some sort of story about myself?"[/colour] She wanted to know before she just started to ramble on and on about things to the barmare as she seldom had somepony who would actually sit and listen to her as she talked. Misty then looked to Pocket Change, she had heard somepony else talking to her but didn't notice until a moment later it was him. [colour=#00ffff]"Oh hello,"[/colour] She started out adding in a soft sigh not really in the mood to do much still.[colour=#00ffff] "Sure if you wish to dry me off, but if you do that for me however am I supposed to repay you?"[/colour] She let out a soft giggle as she sipped more of her lemon water.[colour=#00ffff] "My name is Misty, Misty Morning, by the way."[/colour] She held out her hoof for him to shake. She then nods towards Wind Rider, [colour=#00ffff]"Yes I am a bit more worse for wear but that is nothing that has stopped me before."[/colour] She let out as weak of a giggle as she could possibly muster followed by a sigh and a small whimper. The storm was not kind to her that was for sure.

With a small grin and a shy giggle Apple Pie watched all of the blankets flop down upon her friend and listened carefully to the adults words about being safe and asking her if there is something they couldn't reach. While that was a good idea in theory it would be hard for some of the things that they had planned it would be strange to ask the adult to find them per say two gallons of chocolate milk and some white chocolate cookies. [colour=#00ff00]"Well thank you for your consideration miss Berry Punch."[/colour] Apple Pie said before she began to dig her friend out of the blankets as she simultaneously sorted them by colour and size. It made no sense to leave such a big mess for Berry to have to clean up after they were done fooling around so she only took a few of the blankets and sheets and set them aside knowing that they will most likely not need them all. [colour=#00ff00]"Pinchy, about how many of these and what sizes should we take for the fort?"[/colour] She couldn't help but want to do laundry after seeing how wrinkled some of these sheets had gotten from them simply falling out of the closet.

Looking at her sister and her coltfriend she slightly giggled and waved a hoof to her sister. [colour=#ff8c00]"OH but if I told you who was coming for me then it wouldn't be as good of a surpirse!"[/colour] She let out another of her soft giggles before she stared at Muggo' Ale right in the eyes and unflinchingly stated: [colour=#ff8c00]"Hello, my name is Apple Bumpkin, and this is my big sister Caramel Apple she is really interested in you and you make her happy so I approve of you." [/colour]She took a shallow breath before she pushed on past Muggo' completly ignoring his outstretched hoof, not that she had intended to be rude or unkind it was more of a situation that she had more on her mind at the current moment then her body would let her express. She let out a sigh and then flipped her mane out of her face and tried to smile. She kept facing forward and looking out at the farm as it seemed she lost track of where she was or what she was thinking and then turned around to Muggo' Ale and giggled shaking his hoof now. [colour=#ff8c00]"Nice to meet you Muggo' Ale!"[/colour] She was now grinning ear from ear as it seemed all of the thick thoughts in her head had passed for now.

Its not a high-responsibly job it is just when she has the time to stop in and she feels like making something. It wasn't until after she got her cutie mark that she started to actually work there more.

Roleplay Type: Mane RP Name: Loom 'Mittens' Silk Sex: Mare Age: Filly Species: Earth Pony Origin/Residence: Mittens currently lives and works in Canterlot. Eye colour: Her eyes are a soft pink colour. Coat colour: Her coat is a strange yet stunning faded brown. Mane/Tail: Her mane is always very well kept and is a stunning snow white with slight pink hints at the tips and her mane accessories. Her tail is always kept short so that it doesn't get in her way as she works but it is also the same style of snow white with pink hints at the tips. Physique: Mittens is a very average pony when it comes to her Physique but she also has a high metabolism and is often found eating almost constantly. Occupation: Mittens is a student by day and a seamstress by night. Cutie Mark: Her Cutie Mark is a red ball of yarn. Cutie Mark Story: It happened on a day like any other, the shop that Mittens worked had almost ran out of material to craft their sweaters and other fine winter wears such as scarfs. But instead of giving up and waiting for the next shipment of cloths and such to arrive she used bits that she had earned by selling her crafted items on the side to buy more yarn that she then turned into booties that were sold to Ponyville for the Winter Wrap Up, after she started to receive letters back from satisfied customers she kept making and selling the booties even around Canterlot and within a few days of getting her art down she got a cutie mark of a red ball of yarn to symbolize how she was destined to be a seamstress. History: Born to a mother and father who were very supporting of their young daughter who wanted to explore the world of crafts rather then settle for a life of business as they did. Her parents went to all of the lengths they could to make sure that their daughter had everything she needed when she needed it. But instead of making her a spoiled brat it made her always give to the less fortunate as she had everything given to her and it made her feel that it was the right thing to do was to pass on her good luck and graciousness. It wasn't long until she was entered into a art school where she found her niche in weaving and crafting things from yarn. Soon her parents saw her kindness and decided to give her a gift of a small weaving shop to call her own and to sell her wears out of and let their daughter enjoy herself as she also made some bits. Character Summary: Parents: Mittens' parents were the typical rich elite of the Canterlot life and it only made her appear to be like them, it wasn't so much that she didn't want to be like them but she wanted to have her own hold on life and not have to be in her parents shadow the whole of her life. Flaws: Mittens tries not to talk much, not that she is shy but more to the effect that she just doesn't like to talk. She prefers to go by the saying: Let your work do the talking. Mittens can be very thick headed when it comes to certain things and sometimes will even argue that she is right even when she knows she is wrong, or she will try and twist the words to make herself right. Personality: Mittens is a very kind and giving filly but she knows the meaning of a hard days work, she doesn't often have spare time as she is constantly either running from the school to the shop for work or vice versa. Mittens has a problem with sleeping on occasion but she attunes that to her lack of fun and to her constant high-level of sugar in her system. She often eats large amounts of sugar but thanks to her busy schedule and her high metabolism she can eat nonstop and still not gain any weight. Motivation: Mittens just wants to make the world a warm and cuddly place through her use of clothing items. Likes: Mittens doesn't have many things that she likes, but she does have some things that she absolutely LOVES: Designing winter apparel, crafting clothes, working hard, learning new things from the design school. Dislikes: It is hard for things to fall into her Dislikes list as Mittens will always give things a second or third chance and is always very forgiving even if somepony wronged her. Below is a stand-in picture of Mittens until I have time to get a fully drawn version of her.

After much deliberation Apple Pie came to a complete blank. She looked off into the distance for a few minutes before recollecting herself and shaking her head. [colour=#00ff00]"Well I was in town for the weekend visiting Pinchy, she and I have become great friends and I was even invited to a sleepover that was amazingly fun. If that is even allowably possible."[/colour] She pondered that for a moment not sure if she was actually allowed to have fun or if she broke some hard and fast Apple Family rules about Family Comes First Then Work. She let out a soft sigh and attempted to refocus herself yet again. [colour=#00ff00]"In any other sort of event I would have stopped over but I was too busy making sure that she didn't burn the world down or somehow cause a rare species of spider to take over Ponyville."[/colour] She let out a soft sigh and extended her hoof out to Apple Bloom.[colour=#00ff00] "How about we make some sort of agreement that we will never put a colt between us or what have you since we are most likely the best cousin pairing there ever has been!"[/colour] She said in a sort of excited tone trying to make Apple Bloom get excited too for what reason that Pie had no knowledge of either, it just seemed like a good plan for now.

Bumpkin was in all sorts of a frenzy as she threw her saddle on and quickly brushed her mane back using her expert skill to dodge all of her snarls and curls. Leaving her hoofkerchief on she looked in the mirror and applied a bit of 'Southern Grace' to herself as she shook her mane back to its normal position and swished all of the days work off of her body. With a sigh and a last once over of herself she grabbed a set of small green boots with yellow trim to match her saddle and her hookerchief she quickly pounced into them. [colour=#a52a2a]"I will be right there dearest sister!"[/colour] Bumpkin shouted down to her ever-loving sister who always seemed to be calm and collected at all times even when the farm was on fire, ok well...it was one tree, but still that was some crazy stuff! [colour=#a52a2a]"Is your Coltfriend here yet?"[/colour] She asked not even sure if she was supposed to be rushing or if her sister was just being preemptive. Bumpkin herself was never really cold and that is why during the Winter Wrap Up of last year she helped clear the fields of snow with her cousin Apple Bloom without even a jacket on. It was too much fun being cold as it kept her more awake and attentive then she normally was. Summer being all hot and dreary never really lead to a productive Bumpkin until it hit Apple Harvesting Season, then the foal-boots were off and she was all in. It didn't take her long to finish getting ready as there wasn't much for her to even get ready with. She quickly brushed her teeth and rinsed to make sure that her breath would be 'Minty Fresh' when or if she happened to get that lucky kiss on that lucky special-somepony of hers. She quickly trotted down the stairs from her room and stopped to a dead halt right next to her sister and as if on que she grinned and spoke. [colour=#a52a2a]"I can only imagine how amazing today is going to be!"[/colour] It was true that she was overly excited but she had every right to be.

Leaning over the edge of the top of the contraption she smiled at Cheerilee. [colour=#a52a2a]"See, at least she is remorseful, there is nothing to worry about now since everypony is safe and unharmed right?"[/colour] She looked at the group of foals trying to make sure that she was right that they were all safe. Her own wet mane now more accentuated by her hoofkerchief she used as a hair tie to keep it out of her face as they worked. She looked over to Zecora and put a hoof to her chin pondering what this zebra would be willing to, surely it wouldn't be running, perhaps sorting? Cheerilee had most likely done enough sorting when she had to grade papers so she was sure that Cheerilee would either join her in smashing apples to get her frustration out or even running with some of the foals to fuel the machine. It was hard to believe that Apple Bumpkin had figured out a way to do this whole machine with just her and her sister and they did it pretty efficiently. With a giggle she attempted to pose a question to the Zebra. [colour=#a52a2a]"So ponder me this dearest Zecora, what are ya gunna do with the foals ta help them make the Apple Juice?." [/colour]She hoped that her accent wasn't too thick or she had said her question in a way that the Zebra would understand her. Surely they would get underway here soon and be able to make lots of Apple Juice for all the foals to drink, she just had to make sure that they didn't drink too much and get sick. With a smile and a wink to both Cheerilee and Zecora, Bumpkin rolled over onto her back and let her mane hang-dry for lack of a better term.

With a look of pure blah Misty looked at Martini and opened her mouth to attempt to speak but rethought the idea and plastered her muzzle back to the counter top. [colour=#00ffff]"Yes, Pie will do. Thank you, how much do I owe you for this?"[/colour] She put her bit purse on the counter top and stretched her wings out before she put them away.[colour=#00ffff] "As you can see I don't have very good vision without my goggles on so you'll have to pardon me."[/colour] She sighed and just slid the whole bit purse to Martini and let her take the whole thing not even caring at this point. She heard some of the other ponies talking about Rainbow Dash and even that she and Soarin were dating. Misty let out a soft giggle at that knowing it was odd for Soarin to have a special somepony other then Pie, he loved his pie too much to have time for a real pony. Letting out another sigh she reached up and started to sip from her glass of Lemon Water and kept listening to the conversations at hoof. [colour=#00ffff]"Would you perhaps be wanting to talk with us barkeep? I am sure that I can tell you some funny stories if you wish to listen."[/colour] She started smile, if there was one thing she loved to talk about it was the Wonderbolts and her own self. It was often silly stories about how she runs into things all the time or even about how she recently got her wings combed and got her mane straightened for a week hoping it would make her faster.