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neat. I would love to do an RP with him sometime. -
Ah interesting Though how would his fake wings work? Would they act as gliders or did a unicorn use a spell to make them work?
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Needs more desu.desu I kid i kid he looks really interesting the heterochromia is a bit odd but the mechanical wings seem cool. ( Is he an earth pony that wants to be like a Pegasus?)
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So I was reading through the Science/technology of ponies in the RP section when I was reading up on the trains when I noticed that it said that the trains run on steam/water. However when you go and look at Mystery on the Pony Express episode the pony conductor/Shutterfly is shoveling coal. Should this be changed or are we just going to leave it as steam?
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Meh already read through Battle Royal so I will probably skip it. Besides didn't exactly like the characters from what I read about them.
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I bring up because it just feels like to much is going to be going on. Like it will be clustered. Still I respect your decision. Maybe once it is cleaned up a bit it will look a bit better. -
Go with less. Maybe a simple symbol in the middle or a few detail lines but not that much. Here take a look at a screen shot of some of the armor worn by guards. http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120425132023/mlp/images/thumb/8/84/S2E25_-_The_Captain.PNG/799px-S2E25_-_The_Captain.PNG The armor is less detailed especially on the hoof and chest. At most there is a few small symbols and detail lines but not much. So basically go with the idea of "less is more". Also I recommend looking up Trotsworth art work on Deviantart and his picture of Lord Solaris it will really help out with that idea.
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mmmm he's getting there. His leg seems a bit small and effeminate for a male so you might want to change that up a bit. Generally MLP males tend to be based of draft horses which are big horses. Like Big Big horses. The chest plat seems a bit flashy at the moment but I could maybe see it working.
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yes I think that a cornucopia would be a wonderful cutie mark for showing that he has power over the plants that lead to the eventual harvests around the world. *edit* well I did think of something that might be interesting. On his Yolk perhaps you could include nordic runes or have a germanic calendar running around it.
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Well it is an interesting enough now that it is explained a bit better. So from what I am getting he has the ability to shape lands and make plants go in and out of hibernation. I personally would only go with one or the other because to many talents will make him seem like he has a Mary Sue like quality. As for him being all powerful and needing to keep his power in check is kind of a warning bell at Mary Sue description. Celestia has the power to move the sun which is basically the most powerful thing in the universe and she has trouble dealing with other creatures like Chrysalis and Discord so it is a bit over done to say that he is some super dangerous being if angered. Anyways with the description I think that maybe a change in color scheme might also be needed because both jobs seem to have something to do with earth so earthy colors might suite him better. (maybe have his mane be a leaf read and maybe have his coat be a light natural green/brown mix?) As for his cutie mark I would still say it needs a change maybe instead of a planet maybe make it mountains or vegetables.
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sleeps commented on NeilWacaster's gallery image in Canterlot Community Art
I love his expression. the goatee is a nice touch too. -
eeeeehhhh he needs some work because right now he looks like a badly redrawn Celestia. ( Yes I read he is her uncle in the description but there can be some verity in how rulers look.) I think the first thing that needs to be redone is his cutie mark/job description. I say this because his marking contradicts what has already been shown in the show. If Celestia brings up the sun each day then there would be no need for the Planet to spin because it would be geocentric universe instead of a heliocentric. Also Winter wrap up stated that magic is what brings the seasons so that also contradicts his cutie mark. Perhaps his can be that he moves the stars across the night sky? or maybe he is in control of the tides of the oceans? (Though this might be a dangerous line to cross because that might fall under Luna's job) The next thing is the shoes and crown. Maybe have him wearing a helmet/or a male crown and a cape or something instead? As for the shoes, make them smaller more war like or have him have fetlocks. The yolk is some what interesting but could use a bit of a touch up. Finally the hair has got to go. I know that the wavy hair is a signature of the "Royal pony family" but It just does not work with his color scheme. If you are insisting on long hair then go with Prince blue blood style. Sorry if this is harsh but I figured it would be better to be honest then anything else. You might want to take a look at Italian king portraits to get a feel of what might work.
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I too would like to see humanized Dusty. ( Mainly because I love his vest....that an the first time I saw him before reading his avatar I was like "War Vet Pony!!!" even though now I know he isn't.)
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Sheesh it is like whenever I see or read something about soarburn the song "My bittersweet Puzzle" comes on. Maybe it is a sign from the universe........Overall I like the picture really captures my head cannon of them. -
Yes indeed this showed up in my inbox right after reading the ending to winding roads. -
aahhh It's you! I've seen you on DA!
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I really like the way he looks. he really does pull off the hero look really well.
