Mojo

The sudden appearance of Gerrard truly scared Ms. Harshwhinney. Letting out a scream, the orange pelted Earth Pony ducked behind Professor Krashkop, shaking like a leaf. [colour=#FF0000]"HELP! SAVE ME!" [/colour]she whined. [colour=#008000]"Stop acting so RUDE, fraulien!" [/colour]Professor Krashkop neighed, purposely sidestepping away from the blonde blazer wearing mare. [colour=#008000]"I tried to tell you Gerrard vas a griffon. I have known him for many years!"[/colour] The gray maned Pegasus then walked up to Gerrard and offered his hoof to shake. [colour=#008000]"Gut morgan, herr Gerrard! It is vonderba to see you again! You are looking vell. Perhaps later on, vee can dine at Gustav LeGrande's restaurant, I vill buy, of course!" [/colour] [colour=#FF0000]"You, you, KNOW this, creature?"[/colour] [colour=#008000]"You need to apologize for your rudeness, fraulein!" [/colour]the Professor scoulded. [colour=#008000]"I fail to believe somevone like YOU who has lived in Canterlot for a long time vould not recognize vone of dis city's leading citizens!"[/colour] [colour=#FF0000]"You mean, Gerrard is a, citizen of Canterlot?"[/colour] [colour=#008000]"Javol! Now you VILL apologize for your remarks. SNELL!"[/colour] [colour=#FF0000]"Oh dear," [/colour]Ms. Harshwhinney said as she got back on her four hooves and slowly approach the griffon. [colour=#FF0000]"Er, Mr. Gerrard, I do offer my sincerest apologies for my behavior. I've never worked so closely with, well, a griffon before. But nonetheless, we should begin our work here, yes?"[/colour]

Professor Clyde Krashkp Ms. Harshwhinney Standing in front of a vacant lot in downtown Canterlot was a large pitched tent that had a sign 'CAUTION, CONSTRUCTION AREA' out in front of it. Emerging from the tent were two ponies, an orange pelted blonde Earth mare dressed in a blue blazer. Beside her was a green furred elderly Pegasus who wore glasses. "Where is he? Where is this great architect you kept bragging to be about, Professor Krashkop?" Ms. Harshwhinney snorted. "Please fraulien, calm yourself! He vill be here! Gerrard comes highly recommended und I vill personally vouch for his skill! He is dee perfect choice to design dis new office building to house dee Equestria Games offices!" "Well, this Gerrard will have to convince ME he is up to this task. After all, I have been put in charge of this project, and I intend to see that this new office building comes in under budget and on time! Now where is he? Is he taking a taxi to get here?" "I don't tink he vill be travel day vay, he vill fly in!" "OH? He's NOT a unicorn? He's a Pegasus?" "Nein, not exactly, he is more of a.." "Oh nevermind Professor. I'm sure I will know him when I see him, WHENEVER he decides to show up for our meeting!" the mare neighed, looking down at her legwatch.

[colour=#0000ff]"Aw shucks, Miss Carrot Top," [/colour]Hayseed said shyly, [colour=#0000ff]"I'd like that a lot too! It's been a downright pleasure jist being with ya!"[/colour] Dr Stable, Mr. Waddle and Flam had made their way through the checkout lines and had their free Zap Apple Jam moments before Filthy Rich made the announcement that the store had run out. Hayseed felt bad for Carrot Top, but the truth be known, the brown pelted country stallion was happy to have met such a wonderful mare! He just had to do something very special for her! Meanwhile, the announcement caused his older sister, Haymaker, to go into panic mode. [colour=#800080]"NNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" [/colour]the red maned mare shouted. [colour=#800080]"We lost out! No Zap Apple jam for us!"[/colour] [colour=#b22222]"But sis, I got somethin' ta tell ya," [/colour]little Haywire said. [colour=#800080]"Not NOW, Haywire! I lost out on Zap Apple jam! It's all because on that durn Doctor and his pills! Wait till I git mah hooves on HIM! He's gonna need a DOCTOR when I punch'm!" [/colour] [colour=#b22222]"BUT SIS! LISTEN TA ME!"[/colour] [colour=#800080]"Stow it, kid! I'm gonna git that Doctor!"[/colour] [colour=#b22222]"STOP IT NOW!" [/colour]Haywire shouted, [colour=#b22222]"I'm tryin' ta tell ya, I done got a jar of Zap Apple jar fer us!"[/colour] [colour=#800080]"I see him! I ain't gonna let'm get away... er... what did ya say?"[/colour] [colour=#b22222]"I said, I got a jar of jam fer us! I done bought a buncha stuff and got the jar already! I know how much ya love Zap Apple jam, so I.."[/colour] Without another word spoken, Haymaker threw her front legs around her little sister to give her a big hug. [colour=#800080]"Thank ya, sis! I love ya!"[/colour] [colour=#b22222]"An I love ya too," [/colour]Haywire replied as Hayseed and Carrot Top walked by them. [colour=#0000ff]"Look at that! It's a rare sight, mah sisters gitt'n along with each other! Jist wish if'd last."[/colour]

Mojo & Jubilee Flyer Walking into the cafeteria was Jubilee Flyer, aspiring actress and singer, next to her flamboyantly dressed brother, Mojo. [colour=#8B4513]"Yeah baby! Time for chow, that's groovy, really happenin'!" [/colour]Mojo said in his slight British accent. [colour=#0000FF]"Would you at least TRY to not embarrass me today, brother?" [/colour]Jubilee asked in a whisper as the two siblings got their trays and moved into the serving line. [colour=#8B4513]"Aww! There ya go with those bad vibes agin', sis. I gotta be me, y'know."[/colour] [colour=#0000FF]"Yes, and that's the problem." [/colour]Julibee quipped as the food was plopped on her plate by a smiling, green skinned elderly cafeteria lady. [colour=#8B4513]"Problem? It's all in me charm! Watch this!" [/colour]Mojo said, turning and flashing his trademark smile at the cafeteria lady. [colour=#8B4513]"Good afternoon, love! Yur sure lookin' chirper today, babe!"[/colour] Mojo grinned at his sister as he received an extra big mound of mashed potatoes and an extra brownie on his plate. [colour=#8B4513]"Stay cool, sweetie," [/colour]the loudly dressed guy responded with a wink before his angry sister pulled him away from the line. [colour=#0000FF]"Stop it! Someday that, charm, of yours is going to get you in trouble. Now I'm going to eat with my fellow drama friends, YOU stay far away from me.:"[/colour] [colour=#8B4513]"Gotcha sis, besides, I wanna scope out all the chicks in the cafeteria. Need ta fetch me a date for tonight, after all."[/colour] [colour=#0000FF]"Whatever," [/colour]Julibee sighed as she walked over towards the Drama table where she saw Honeydew already seated. [colour=#0000FF]"Hi there! I'm Jubilee Flyer, don't we have a couple of classes together? May I join you?" [/colour]the blonde girl asked. Meanwhile, Mojo was walking around with his tray, randomly waving and 'greeting' all the girls in the room he recognized. [colour=#8B4513]"Yo Vinyl Scratch! Rock on, chickie baby! Hey there Quicklime! How's me favorite bookworm and.. " [/colour]Instantly, Mojo stopped talking, spotting Sunrise Shimmer addressing her. Slowly, the brown haired Brit backed away from that table, realizing he wanted nothing to do with the school bully, even if she was a 'babe.'. As he was backpedaling, he bumped into the table where Asteria was seated. When he turned and spotted the beautiful lady seated there, Mojo returned to 'cool' mode. [colour=#8B4513]"Yeah baby! I meant, greetings there love. Mojo's me name, mind if I dine with ya?"[/colour] Haywire Sneaking carefully into the cafeteria trying to remain unnoticed was freshman girl Haywire. The rust coloured blonde country girl tried to look casual as she made her way to the serving line, her slingshot sticking out of her back pocket. She had had a very busy morning and so far, her luck was holding out. No one figured out that it was her who placed that whippie cushion under Vice Principal Luna's seat when she sat down during the morning staff meeting. She had also successfully pranked a boy with the old 'spring loaded stick of chewing gum' routine. Haywire wanted to stay clear of that boy for the next few days. Looking all 'sweet and innocent' as she got her tray of food, the happy bow wearing girl spotted the table where Vinyl Scratch was sitting. Excited, she rushed right over to her. [colour=#B22222]"Hey Vinyl Scratch! I'm Haywire and I'm a big fan of yur DJ'n! Might I sit a spell with ya and eat?"[/colour]

Well, to quote Pinkie Pie from the EQG movie, I'm "nervouscited" about these developments. Anyway, I will echo the sediments from others who have already given thanks to Autumn and Manestream for all they've done for this website! I have full faith and confidence in Rosewind and Dio in their new positions at Canterlot.com. Congratulations to them for their promotions!

WOW! Thank you for your prompt attention on this app! Excellent change to the Character Summary section! Well done!

The blue stallion was sad too. This beautiful, elegant mare had invoked emotions inside of the him he never realized he had before! [colour=#0000ff]"Farewell, Miss Stillheart!" [/colour]Saddlesore called out to the departing unicorn mare. He knew having a friendship with Asteria would be challenging, due to the very unemtional nature of her personality, but still, Saddlesore had few true friends and even fewer (if any) female companions. For once in his life, Saddlesore felt happy, excited, and warm inside. Was it love? Was it friendship? Was it something in between? He had no idea, but there was one thing Saddlesore was certain of. He did want to see her again. Maybe he could take a trip to Canterlot someday... (exit Saddlesore --- end of RP)

Hi Alanoth! I'll be the RPH evaluating your app! This app is very well written, all of the required fields are filled, and although I can see you did follow the RP Guidelines with the Character Summary, the RP Staff here is looking for more of a paragraph form in addressing those questions rather than a simple list. You have the info there, it just needs to be worked into a readable paragraph form. Other than that, I see no major issues with this app! You have a very good start here! Just needs a bit more refinement.

Mojo was very surprised at Flax Seed's reaction to discovering one of his own best friends was a unicorn. Though this hurt the Paint stallion a little, he could understand his new friend's reasoning. But still, Mojo needed to have his say on the matter. [colour=#8b4513]"Whoa there, chum!" [/colour]the hippie brony began to speak, [colour=#8b4513]"I do dig where yur comin' from on magic, but why are ya so down on unicorns?. Ponies are ponies, even if they happen ta have horns or wings. I'm with ya on not wantin' ta use magic and all, but why would ya think all ponies with horns are squares?. Maybe if ya met me pal Starflower and got ta know her, you'd see things different. I'm not gonna diss a pony cause they were born with a horn, and besides that, if ya wanna sell yur products ta all ponies, havin' an anti-horn attitude will cost ya some sales. Most unicorns got plenty of bread ta spend, ya dig me?"[/colour] Then when he heard Flax Seed's comments about coffee, Mojo smiled widely. [colour=#8b4513]"Bummer! Figures some brainy pony already came up with the drink before I could. I'm more of a tea drinker meself, and speakin' of tea, could I offer ya some? Got plenty of it over at me wagon, could brew some up for ya in a jiffy! It's all natural, no magic on me family's farm!"[/colour]

Well, the History section is brief, and you could expand a bit more on her personality, if you wanted to. It's up to you, but what I'm saying is as this app stands now, since it is FFA, I believe it will pass Senior Role Play Staff guidelines.

Hi kinkamina! For a FFA app, this looks very, very good! All the required fields are filled, but it is very brief in some places. Still, since this is a FFA app, that may not matter so much. I like what I see here!

Granny Smith smiles when Valen asks her what's going on. [colour=#00ff00]"Well Valen, me and Apple Strudel here's been helpin' AppleJack all day with this here big Apple sale! We've had a lot of famous visitors, like Princess Luna and Fancy Pants and.."[/colour] [colour=#006400]"But mein sister, dat Fancy Pants guy turned out to be a fraud!" [/colour]Uncle Apple Strudel chimed in, [colour=#006400]"It vas dat evil svinehoit Flam!"[/colour] [colour=#00ff00]"What? Oh yeah! That Flam feller! Ya shoudda seen me, Valen! Why I reared back an' kicked that crazy galoot up ta the moon pertin' near! I ain't kicked nuttin that hard in decades! And his no good brother Flim showed up here too! Them two bamboozlers make me SO mad I wanna SCREAM!"[/colour] [colour=#006400]"Nein! Calm down, mein sister," [/colour]the bearded stallion pleaded as the elderly mare shook in anger. Noticing her distress, Mojo broke out in a slow lullaby song that slowly brought peace to the Apple Matriarch. [colour=#8b4513]"There now, love, ya feelin' chilled out?" [/colour]Mojo asked after his short song was done. [colour=#006400]"Vunderba! Granny Smith is smiling again! Danka herr Mojo!"[/colour] [colour=#00ff00]"That was some jim dandy singin', Mojo. Why don't ya sing ta AppleJack oncest yur turn comes up in line?"[/colour] [colour=#8b4513]"Sing ta AppleJack? I don't know if she digs my singin', Granny."[/colour] [colour=#00ff00]"Sure! My AppleJack loves yur singin', betcha y'all could sweep her off her feet with it!"[/colour] [colour=#8b4513]"Say what?"[/colour] [colour=#006400]"VHAT!!!"[/colour] [colour=#00ff00]"Never ya mind, young feller, you jist git up thar in line and git ready ta sing!" [/colour]Granny neighed, using her front hooves to try to push the Paint stallion closer up the line. [colour=#006400]"Stop dat, Granny! I don't tink AppleJack vould like all dis dat you are sayin' ta..." [/colour]Uncle Apple Strudel's words stopped when Granny shoved an apple into his open mouth. [colour=#00ff00]"Hush now, Strudel," [/colour]she whispered, [colour=#00ff00]"maybe I kin git dat hippie feller ta start sparkin' with AJ. Hush up and let nature take it's course..."[/colour]

Here could be a VERY unpopular pony opinion: Could the reason for the LONG delay in the start of S4 is that Hasbro is secretly having all the VA's working on the first season of a Equestrian Girls spinoff cartoon also?

Thanks! I just wanted to be 100% sure!

Hi FermataTheBasse! This app looks excellent! All of the required fields are filled (considering she's a griffon) and it is very well written. There is one question I must ask, though it might sound like a silly question. By 'typical' griffon, do you mean that she has the "half eagle - half lion' look like Gilda? The reason I'm asking is that in the past, we've had users app griffons with 'different' halves, such as half panther, etc. Just want to make sure what you are projecting as the overall 'species mix' of your griffon.

No, not yet. The next step is for your app to be evaluated by a member of Senior Role Play Helper staff, Only SRPH Staff can approve an app for WOE/Main RP. Please be patient. You're moving closer to approval with this app!

Hi Shinygear! This is an excellent effort for a first OC app! All of the required fields are filled and you've gone to great detail in many sections of it! Bravo! I have to admit, the cutie mark story does ramble a bit, but it does reach the desired conclusion, so I find it acceptable. There may be a problem with him living in Ponyville (please read the 'Residence' section of Rarity's Simply Fabulous Application Form). You might want to change this. Keep in mind that though a pony is free to travel, so even if Shinygear didn't live in Ponyville, he's certainly free to VISIT Ponyville as often as he likes! Otherwise, I believe this app is good to go for further evaluation.

Still panting hard, the daydream was finally clearing from Tilly Tome's mind. When she saw Ballad and Aloe and heard the spa pony calling out to her, the frightened Crystal Pony began to calm down. [colour=#800080]"Oh my stars and garters!' [/colour]she neighed, now fully aware of where she was and what she had just done, [colour=#800080]"I am so sorry for that, outburst. When I fell asleep in the mud pit, I saw..saw... him... again.... please forgive me, ladies. Seems that although King Sombra was defeated, Crystal Ponies like me still have bad nightmares about him. Oh my! I didn't mean to cause such a disturbance. I hope I didn't upset your customers. If you feel I should go, then I will leave willingly...."[/colour] Tilly Tome bowed her head sadly, deeply ashamed of her actions.

Mojo was now excited! He seemed to be 'reaching' Flax Seed and (hopefully) demostrating his friendship and calm to him. [colour=#8B4513]"Wasn't far in the sticks when I found'm, pal," [/colour]the Paint stallion began to explain, [colour=#8B4513]"kinda noticed a few of the wild animals actin' real funky and far out after they munched on the funny beans. That's when it hit me, if those cool critters could eat'm, then ponies could too! So I ground up the beans, cooked'm in boil'in water and presto! Instant hot drink that'll keep ya movin! Tryin' ta come up with a name for it, whittled it down ta two choices, 'Coffee' or 'Mojo's Amazin' Funky Fresh Pep Drink!' Oh well, still workin' on it."[/colour] The hippie brony smiled as he took a deep breath to begin telling Flax about his older traveling companion. [colour=#8B4513]"Ah, Nurse Starflower. Well dude, for starters, she's a unicorn and we first met durin' an emergency on me first trip out in my peddler's wagon. Me and Wings were just groovin' on down the road when we saw a tired Pegasus filly fallin' from the sky. A real bad scene! She was only, like, super tired, but ol' Wings and I didn't know that. When we got to where she was, I sent Wings over ta Trottin'ham while I did me best to make the poor gal comfortable. Jubilee said she hovered over the town shoutin' out for help. Lucky for us, Miss Starflower was on holiday there and followed Wings back ta me wagon. Ol' Star knew exactly what ta do, she's quite a brainy chick! Anyway, startin' gettin' dark and rainy, so all of us spent the night in me wagon. Good thing I had plenty of me hoofmade hammocks for all us ta sleep in while it was stormin' outside! Long story short, ol' Starflower really hit it off with me'n Wings! That Nurse chick's really groovy, for an older gal that is. I think you'd like'r too, Flax! She's got quite a few natural remedies herself!"[/colour]

As the Apple matriarch began to daydream about doing some 'matchmaking,' she happened to glance to the front of the line as Sugar Rush placed his bits on the top of the apple stand. As she collected the bits, the elderly lime green mare heard every word of the conversation between him and Applejack. The longer she listened, the angrier Granny Smith got with the purple maned stallion. [colour=#00FF00]"NOW SEE HERE, SONNY!" [/colour]Granny Smith managed to blurt out before Uncle Apple Strudel pull her away from the apple stand. [colour=#006400]"Nein! Don't do dis, mein sister," [/colour]the bearded stallion said in hushed tones. [colour=#006400]"Vee cannot sell dees extra apple if you get combative vith our customers."[/colour] [colour=#00FF00]"Ya heard how that young feller was insultin' my granddaughter! Let me go so I kin giv'm a piece o' my mind!"[/colour] [colour=#006400]"Please Granny Smith, refrain for dis course of action! You could scare off all dee other ponies vaiting in line!"[/colour] [colour=#00FF00]"Nutin' doin' Strudel! I'ma gonna knock some sense inta that whippersnapper's noggin! Ain't nuttin' y'all kin say is gonna stop me!"[/colour] As the two elderly sibling Earth ponies struggled together, Mojo moved up closer in line as Sugar Rush departed. [colour=#8B4513]"Hay Granny Smith!" [/colour]the Paint Earth stallion called out, [colour=#8B4513]"fancy meetin' ya here, doll!"[/colour] Hearing the soothing voice of the Pony of Peace instantly quelled Granny Smith's rage. The elderly mare bolted loose from her brother's grip and rushed up beside him, knocking Uncle Apple Strudel down to the grass in the process. [colour=#00FF00]"Howdy agin, Mojo! Good ta see ya! You orta come by here more often, an' bring that thar fancy guitar with ya too!"[/colour] [colour=#8B4513]"Sounds groovy, chicky baby! Wish I could crash a while at yur pad, but I gotta split as soon as I lay down mah bread an' pack me apples with me, you dig?"[/colour] [colour=#00FF00]"What's that, sonny?" [/colour]Granny Smith asked with a very confused look on her face as her brother walked up to them. [colour=#006400]"I tink vhat Herr Mojo is saying is dat he cannot stay und vill be leaving after he buys his apples, ja?"[/colour] [colour=#8B4513]"Far out! The bearded daddy-o gets it!" [/colour]Mojo neighed. [colour=#00FF00]"Well, that's jist too bad, young feller, cause there's a certain mare who'd LOVE ta spend more time with ya and..."[/colour] Granny muttered until Apple Strudel interrupted her. [colour=#006400]"Und vee are all very pleased to see you here at Sveet Apple Acres! Mein name is Uncle Apple Strudel! Vonderba! You are next in line!"[/colour] [colour=#8B4513]"Right-o cool cat, catch ya on the flipside, Unck!" [/colour]Mojo neighed, exchanging a 'high hoof' with the bearded stallion before stepping back in line. A furious Granny Smith bonked her brother over the head with her left front hoof. [colour=#00FF00]"Why'd ya interrupt me like that, brother! I was tryin' ta sell that fancy singin' goomer ta Applejack!"[/colour] [colour=#006400]"Und dat is vhy I did stop you! If dose two are meant to be together, it vill happen on it's own. If you try to force dem into romance, it vill end in disaster! You know I'm right, mein sister."[/colour] [colour=#00FF00]"Enough Strudel, ya gotta stop confusin' me with the facts, ok?" [/colour]Granny said as she spotted Valen and waved to him. [colour=#00FF00]"Howdy Valen! Good ta see ya agin! How ya been since last I saw ya?"[/colour]

Saddlesore smiles as he looked up into the eyes of Asteria. [colour=#0000FF]"I understand, Miss Stillheart. As wonderful as this night with you has been, nothing can last forever. I would enjoy meeting up with you again soon. Perhaps I can look you up the next time I'm Canterlot. Thank you for sharing this time with me. I will treasure it for the rest of my life."[/colour] Saddlesore couldn't help but smile, the blue Earth stallion has been this happy in his entire life. This is a night he'll never forget.

I have heard that eventually, the rest of the Mane 6 will become Princesses (complete with horns and wings). The last time I expressed THIS opinion in a chat, I had to duck for cover!

Good job! Nicely done!

Is this a record for this website?

Thank you for finishing this app. Somehow, your font seems to have enlarged itself again. As I stated earlier, a size 14 font will be fine. You did fix many of the grammatical errors in your text. I have consulted with the resident 'chef' on the Staff, and she says that it is possible to 'churn' ice cream with a whisk IF you use a chilled bowl and could manage to keep it chilled during the mixing process. Though our 'chef' did also add it would be much easier to use a crank-churn, it is possible to create ice cream with a whisk. This app is very close to acceptable, so if you'd kindly make these changes, it should work.