NeoExlucky

[colour=#000080]"Oh yeah! Hang on." [/colour][colour=#000000]A hole opened in the roof and a small circular machine on a stick came out [/colour][colour=#000080]"Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Digi and I am the training core of the orange portal!"[/colour]

[colour=#0000cd]"You guys suck at this!" [/colour][colour=#000000]A voice said from the roof. It wasn't that of the one watching but a different voice. [/colour][colour=#000080]"You know what you need? Some portals!"[/colour][colour=#000000] It called.[/colour]

Time Spinner saw the stallion enter Twilight's house and she followed. Time went to the window and looked through it to see the two.

Time spinner: Time ran away from the town hall. Away from everything that was there. He wanted to be alone. He was right. There was no pony for him anymore. He kept running until he smacked into a wall and fell to the ground. [colour=#696969]"I knew it..."[/colour] He said with a mixture of anger and Sadness. [colour=#696969]"There is no Pony for a guy like me..." [/colour][colour=#000000]He said with tears about to stream from his eyes.[/colour] [colour=#ffa500]"Oh look he's crying!"[/colour][colour=#000000] A voice said behind him. Time Spinner turned to see a muscular, blue earth pony behind him. [/colour][colour=#ffa500]"What's wrong, got your heart broken?"[/colour] [colour=#000000]Time spinner stood up and faced the stallion. As it turns out there was about five more behind him. Time's horn lit and his pocket watch started to move it's hands. He stared at the stallion with anger taking control of him. Time Spinner hated above all things a Bully. The stallion was picked up and thrown into the wall with extreme Velocity. [/colour][colour=#696969]"No but you will be." [/colour][colour=#000000]Time finally answered his question. He lifted the stallion into the sky now along with all of his friends and threw them far into a lake somewhere outside of ponyville. Time's horn unlit but the pocket watch's hands still moved. He collapsed back on the ground again. He was sick of the world.[/colour]

Time Spinner gave her a funny look for a second. [colour=#696969]Did she just ignore... Nevermind. [/colour][colour=#000000]He thought to himself[/colour] [colour=#696969]"I'm from canterlot. I came here to bury something from my past and perhaps watch the hearts and hooves day dance. I was there last year but the mare I went with was...not what she appeared to be." [/colour][colour=#000000]He told her still entranced by a mysterious force. It only happened when he looked at her though, Into her beautiful eyes. Time pondered what it could be.[/colour]

I enjoyed the episode very much. I did notice a rush but other than that I thought it was very well done. During some parts it did give me flashbacks to my entire bronyhood and I liked that. One thing that would have been cool is if Twilight got to have a one on one with all the really powerful people on her side instead of just Celestia. Like if Luna would have talked about her time as Nightmare moon, Discord could have talked about the chaos this was wreaking, and Cadence could have talked about love and that was how she learned how to fight the spell. Though the way they presented the episode made me think of either a series finale or they are going to cast a new mane 6 next season but I doubt that. Not to mention we did get a lot of things they witholding from us in this season like Derpy and Lyra/bonbon (Not to mention vinyl scratch.) Though I really wanted to see Octavia again but oh well. I give the episode a 9/10.

[colour=#ff0000]"A training core?" [/colour][colour=#000000]Echo asked[/colour] [colour=#00ffff]"Oh yes! You see just like their are intelligence cores and emotion cores there are also training cores. I am the training core of the blue portal!"[/colour] [colour=#ff0000]"Wait there are more of you?"[/colour] [colour=#00ffff]"Yes! There's Shadow, and digi, and edge, and static, and pocket, and dect, and Time but I think Time and the others got destroyed at some point. I know Digi and Shadow are still online though!"[/colour] [colour=#ff0000]"Well first where am I?"[/colour] [colour=#00ffff]"Your in the aperture science testing facility!"[/colour] [colour=#ff0000]"Testing! I'm a guinea pig?[/colour][colour=#00ffff]"[/colour] [colour=#00ffff]"Yep!"[/colour] [colour=#ff0000]"Well can I just quit?"[/colour] [colour=#00ffff]"Nope. You have to go through all the tests first."[/colour] [colour=#ff0000]"How do I do that?"[/colour] [colour=#00ffff]"You're going to need a portal gun."[/colour]

(Come to think of it The missing filly idea could have a lot of results with the characters. Can I change my vote to that?)

I kind of want to do a Phoenix wright Crossover. I think that might be kind of interesting.

Time Spinner walked to the entrance but not outside with Pocket watch. Careful not to step on flashbomb or applejack lying on the ground. Once nopony else could hear them he began to tell her. [colour=#696969]"You've noticed the pocket watch I wear, Right?" [/colour][colour=#000000]Pocket nodded. [/colour][colour=#696969]"Well...I got this pocket Watch from Luna and Celestia, about 2000 years ago. " [/colour][colour=#000000]He awaited to hear her response.[/colour] [colour=#800080]"So your over 2000 years old?" [/colour][colour=#000000]She asked[/colour] [colour=#696969]"Yes and no...I was thrown 2000 years into the future. So I guess you could say that..."[/colour] [colour=#800080]"Why are you telling me this?" [/colour][colour=#000000]She asked[/colour] [colour=#696969]"I...don't know." [/colour][colour=#000000] He said [/colour][colour=#696969]"Maybe because I want to show that I care." [/colour][colour=#000000]Time said looking at his hooves.[/colour] [colour=#000000]Pocket would have said something but she noticed a stallion a few feet from where Applejack was. He was a blue pegasus. [/colour][colour=#800080]"Excuse me, I'll be right back." [/colour][colour=#000000]She said walking to him.[/colour] [colour=#800080]"Where is the ring?" [/colour][colour=#000000]She demanded. The blue pegasus looked at Pocket and Smiled. He got closer to her and kissed her. Time Spinner was horrified at the sight of this and ran outside into the night.[/colour]

While all this happened Time Spinner sat in his house sipping at a glass of orange juice and playing a game of chess with his friend Echo. [colour=#696969]"Check!" [/colour][colour=#000000]Time called.[/colour] [colour=#000000]Echo moved one of his pieces around. [/colour][colour=#ff0000]"Oh wait..."[/colour][colour=#000000] He said as Time moved his piece and captured his king.[/colour] [colour=#696969]"Checkmate!"[/colour][colour=#000000] Time said picking all the pieces up and putting them in a box with the board. "Well that was interesting." He walked back to the fridge and opened it. (Are fridges canon?) He gasped "We're out of orange juice!" He said as he levitated his coin purse over to him. "I have to go to the market, echo!" He called to his pegasus friend heading out the door. He walked through the market looking for juice when he looked forward and saw a friend of his. It was Twilight Sparkle with a new colt but there was something about Twilight's eyes, that Time couldn't put his hoof on. It didn't take long for him realize and when he did he practically squeed.[/colour] [colour=#696969]"She's in love!"[/colour] [colour=#000000]Time said quietly. Time Spinner was a historian but he was also a sucker for romance in other ponies lives. He always loved reading books that had romance in them. He hid behind one of the stands and watched as the event unfolded.[/colour]

(I like portal with ponies, and cake...IF IT WASN'T A LIE! ahm, I will throw my hat in the ring.) Echo looked up at a light ceiling. His eyes hurt and he felt like he had a headache. He looked up and came face to face with a turret. [colour=#008000]"Hello Friend!"[/colour] [colour=#000000]It said. Echo who was scared rolled to the side and got on his hooves. The turret started to shoot at him. He flew towards a wall and was cornered. Just as the turret started to fire a Blue portal opened to the side of echo. He had no choice and flew into it which closed as soon as he was out.[/colour] [colour=#ff0000]"This is... weird..."[/colour] [colour=#000000]Echo said[/colour] [colour=#00ffff]"Oh! Hello!"[/colour] said a feminine voice in the wall. (Hope I can do this.) [colour=#00ffff]"It's nice to hear a pony who isn't dead! Your not dead right?"[/colour] [colour=#ff0000]"No..."[/colour] Echo said confused [colour=#ff0000]"Who are you?"[/colour] [colour=#40e0d0]"Ah I am the training core, Diamond Dust! You can call me Diamond."[/colour]

Time shook her hoof. [colour=#696969]"A pleasure to meet you Miss Rarity! My name is Time Spinner!" [/colour][colour=#000000]Time said entranced by...something?[/colour][colour=#696969] "This boutique looks amazing! Not surprising from somepony as charming and beautiful as yourself..." [/colour][colour=#000000]Time said with a smile.[/colour]

(Omygosh, omygosh, omygosh! I am so excited!) Name: Time Spinner Unicorn Male Reference: http://www.canterlot...dy/#entry334516 Ideas: The OC's all enter X-place (Perhaps Canterlot) and go to a holiday parade of some sort. When the parade begins to fail the OC's have to work together in order to get it back on track. (I like gearlocks Idea of trying to find something for Luna due to my OC's backstory ending with an odd relationship with Luna.)

I think I know which OC im going to use, Then I can actually go by his real backstory instead of making it up as I go. XD

[colour=#696969]"Well..." [/colour][colour=#000000]Time said [/colour] Is that how everypony treats each other in this time? That is quite...sad actually. Time thought Then stopped himself [colour=#696969]No culture shock Time! You'll need to wait for Echo to do that.[/colour]

(Whoa I leave for a few hours and everyone is making lotr jokes...) Time Spinner held Pocket Watch close to him. The couple had finally found each other and sat down near the side of the town hall. [colour=#800080]"You know I haven't seen Echo in a while..." [/colour][colour=#000000]She told him.[/colour] [colour=#696969]"Don't worry about him. He can take care of himself."[/colour][colour=#000000] Time told her looking into her eyes. [/colour][colour=#696969]"You should be more concerned with the colt in your arms. I'm concerned about the mare in mine." The two met in a long kiss. Time pulled away to speak. "Pocket you know, I haven't felt this way about another pony in a very long time. We all had some crazy events happen to us and while it all happened and may have hurt some ponies, I'm glad it brought me to you. If I didn't ask Echo what happened to day I may have never met you. What I'm trying to say is, I care about you, and I know we just met but I feel like we've known each other forever. I-I don't know what I want to say to you. Before we continue I do think you should know a few things..." [/colour][colour=#000000]Time said grabbing his pocket Watch and preparing for a long story to tell.[/colour] [colour=#000000] [/colour]

[colour=#696969]"What is wrong with you? Face me like a true warrior or are you just a petty coward! I've fought Cat's tougher than you Flashfire!"[/colour] [colour=#000000]Time insulted. He looked towards the Alicorn. [/colour][colour=#696969]"Are you hurt Dawn?"[/colour][colour=#000000] He called[/colour]

Time looked at pawn with confusion "You- your a-" He stopped himself there as he felt a culture shock moment would happen. He shook his head and forgot about it. He awaited for Light's return. Time jumped and looked at his pocket watch necklace. The wasn't much time before the dance would start. [colour=#696969]"Light you need to hurry.if you got a mare waiting." [/colour][colour=#000000] He thought.[/colour]

Time Spinner awoke in a nice and strong tree. From the fruit in it he'd say a pear tree. [colour=#696969]"I hate pears..."[/colour] He said. He tried to stand but fell out of the tree. When he fell he rubbed his head. Wait...something wasn't right. Time's mane felt different. In fact so did his hooves. He looked at them with sheer terror. His hooves were now hands and feet. He ran for a pond that was close to the area. He looked at his reflection in the pond. He had a small nose and a pale coat...no this was skin. He backed up into the tree he fell out of and gave a loud shriek. [colour=#696969]"WHAT HAPPENED TO ME?!?"[/colour] [colour=#696969](Now I play the waiting game...)[/colour]

(I know you don't have one just there is one around...) Time slashed forward at Flashfire trying to cause as much damage as possible.

Time Spinner sat in the tavern twirling and playing with his Pocket Watch. On the out side he looked like a normal Pony sitting there. On the inside of his Mind he and seasona talked [colour=#000080]"She seems nice enough!" Seasona told him. "With some training She could learn to control Nightmare moon."[/colour] [colour=#696969]"How can we sit here? We both know whats happening outside. He is burning everything!" [/colour][colour=#000000]Time told her[/colour] [colour=#000080]"Well...what are you suggesting?"[/colour] [colour=#696969]"What if I...let you out. Just this one time."[/colour] [colour=#000080]"I don't know if I could give up your body or even your magic. You sure you want to do this?"[/colour] [colour=#000000]Time nodded. [/colour][colour=#696969]"Yes."[/colour] [colour=#000080]"Alright...If you get us there, I can help them, but just remember...We're close to the Locket of flames... You know what happens then."[/colour] [colour=#696969]"I know." [/colour][colour=#000000]Time sighed[/colour] [colour=#000080]"Okay, Open the pocket Watch and charge a time travel spell."[/colour] Time looked to the real world and teleported himself to the energy of the fire. He arrived in time to hear "Talonwing! Take off her amulet!" Time Spinner looked at Flashfire and said[colour=#696969] "Hiding behind your puppet are we? Let's see what happens when you meet a real clarion!"[/colour] Time's horn charged purple and blue. The hands on the pocket watch started to spin and when they hit Twelve, Time was covered in a purple veil and a sword appeared in his hoof. He pulled to the ready and said [colour=#696969]"FACE ME COWARD!"[/colour]

( Actually Seasona and Time like Dawn. So I don't think they will kill her. XD Or were you talking to someone else...)

[colour=#000080]"You believe I'm..." [/colour][colour=#000000]The voice simply laughed [/colour][colour=#000080]"Time Spinner is the unicorn wearing the Pocket Watch. I am in the Pocket Watch. My name is Seasona, I was the clarion of Time. In any case what do you mean by Dead dead. Is he perhaps in an artifact replica?"[/colour]

[colour=#000080]"In any case the matter still stands with the spirit...this nightmare moon character of yours, she seems rather evil. While that means nothing I remember allowing my self to speak through my holder but never to turn into me or allow me to control him. Your brother never learned that ability. Still for a normal your brother did superb work."[/colour]