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[Nasty]

No one loves Sheen.

[Noedig]

oh, I think that's posted somewhere in the topic "the brony playlist".

It is in that topic!! Thank you Angie!

[Conor Colton]

Oh please God no!

Don't turn this into a Sheen thread!

I swear if you do, the results will be dire >:3

[Fawkes]

No one loves Sheen.

This is a clear and blatant lie.

IT IS ALSO HERESY

[Nasty]

I was saying it in sadness. Interwebs and their tone-proofness. Damn it all.

[Conor Colton]

Uh guys, quick question?

Would you guys be willing to hear me out on an idea I had?

Edit: Actually nevermind, it's not important

[Noedig]

What is it?

[Nasty]

Sure. I have no ideas for I'm having a writers block. For the past month. I feel as though people are counting on me to update the story, but I didn't really have any feedback. Possibly your idea on whatever would help me come up with something.

[Fawkes]

Uh guys, quick question?

Would you guys be willing to hear me out on an idea I had?

Edit: Actually nevermind, it's not important

Tell us Conor.

TELL US NAO.

[Nasty]

You saying that entices us to know what it is.

[Conor Colton]

Well I was going to suggest a holiday orientated idea, you know to keep in the spirit of things.

But it's really not important anymore, I have other things to worry about and I just don't feel motivated to that o much else anymore.

So don't worry about it.

Edit: I just thought that I needed something to motivate me to write again, since I've been kinda depressed in that regard, but now that I think about it, I don't think I have the time anymore.

[Nasty]

Depression is a writer's worst nightmare. That, and homework.

[Noedig]

That sounded like a good idea!

[Conor Colton]

I really wish I could follow that through.

But I always get depressed after I write something, I think I have this attitude where I always assume the worst and when I get negative feedback, it literally crushes me

And that's why I don't feel motivated to write because I see no point in it anymore, even though I want to

[Nasty]

Well you know what you must do? Link me, for, 1. I'm much too lazy to find it myself (sawwy) 2. I must give you some feedback. Also, when it comes to feedback, there's a way to go about it. If it's constructive criticism, it can be tough, but literally take what they said was wrong with it, and implement it. Unless it's something like "need moar dragons." As for proofreading, I cannot proofread my own work. I will never notice the mistakes. However, I can proofread someone else's. So. Link. Nao.

[Fawkes]

I really wish I could follow that through.

But I always get depressed after I write something, I think I have this attitude where I always assume the worst and when I get negative feedback, it literally crushes me

And that's why I don't feel motivated to write because I see no point in it anymore, even though I want to

Youuuuu and I are VERY similar ponies, my dear Conor~ :3

[Conor Colton]

Okay......

Here's a link nastymann :https://docs.google....ofccPLA9bU/edit

Edit: You guys are free to look too.

[Nasty]

Thank you. What would you like me to critique? I can fix up grammar, plot, or anything else. of course, along with that, every critic should remember to say what's good about it. From the first few paragraphs it's already rather nice. I love the idea.

[Sulvuss]

I really wish I could follow that through.

But I always get depressed after I write something, I think I have this attitude where I always assume the worst and when I get negative feedback, it literally crushes me

And that's why I don't feel motivated to write because I see no point in it anymore, even though I want to

I normally give out reviews my dear, Conor. If you simply ask I am more than willing to give you feed back on both the good qualities and lacking areas. Theres normally not many writers that can be really considered bad, it all really depends on writing style and how you work your "filming"(entrance, focus points, levels of detail and timing) that really counts in your work. I don't think I have ever seen writing I would call bad, except for notorious fanfics and generally English hindered pre teens.

I'll even help you write each page if you like and review it if you feel worried about it being bad.

[Sulvuss]

NInja'd....

[Conor Colton]

I'm pretty sure the grammars fine Nasty, I had it proof read, I honestly don't care what you comment on, just work away.

Edit: And Sulvuss, work away on the link if you want.

[Noedig]

So Sulvuss, how's your time reading my story?

[Angie Cakes]

so, I'm at my aunt's atm. she really wants to watch Twilight. so right now I'm making plush doghnuts whilst listening to Twilight, my uncle calling my aunt a "twit" and my cousin saying he feels gay. I just have to keep telling myself that gay isn't a derogitory term and that Twilight's sexual orientation hasn't been determined in the show as of yet.

[Brony-Vas-Normandy]

This thread...

Wars, bombs, dragons...

And now it's a book club.

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I really need to read Inheritance. It's been sitting on my shelf since the tenth, but I didn't want to start it. Skyrim and all that.

[Fawkes]

I really need to read Inheritance. It's been sitting on my shelf since the tenth, but I didn't want to start it. Skyrim and all that.

I still haven't gotten to Brisingr... : |