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{WonderBolt} Gale Flurry(Final)


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Roleplay Type:Mane Roleplay

Name: Gale Flurry

Sex: Male

Age:Stallion

Species: Pegasus

Eye Color: Deep Sapphire Blue framed by a pair of thin dark blue glasses

Coat Color:Sky Blue

Mane/Tail/Markings Color & Style: Mane is long and wind blown with deep ocean blue on the outside and midnight blue on the inside, his tai; is Deep Ocean Blue and long with a band of midnight blue around the top.

Physique: Average build with slim muscles in his legs and thighs with strong wings.

Cutie Mark: A Black cloud with flashes of thunder rippling through it and three lightning bolts flashing downwards.

Origin/Residence: Cloudsdale

Occupation: WonderBolt

Motivation: His motivation used to be to become a Wonderbolt, his goal now is to just be the best! To fly and swoop and dive and soar with the very best!

Likes: Storms, strong wind, lightning, rain, bright sun shine

Dislikes: Dull grey weather, burnt muffins, PEARS, and crabapples.

Character Summary: Gale always knew that he was destined to be a WonderBolt, it was what his parents wanted for him since it was a goal they had both wanted and never fully achieved…and while most kids didn’t enjoy having goals in life picked out for them Gale was all for it! Starting training as soon as his wings were strong enough to fly. Gale knew there was more to a WB than fast flying, you had to be smart, and charming, and show good sportsmanship, things he worked on while going to flight school and because of his natural charm and warm personality he was able to get pretty popular.

He got his cutie mark while on a field trip with his flight class and ended up getting separated from them in a rather harsh storm, but due to constant practice and a smart head on his shoulders despite nasty biting winds and scary lightning flashes he was able to navigate the tricky weather only suffering a few singed feathers, when he caught up with his flight class he was tired so one of the teachers carried him on his back for the rest of the trip, the embarrassment of being carried was dulled by the glow from his flank as his cutie mark appeared.

As he grew older he continued to practice, becoming team captain of their flight class and graduated as ONE of the top fliers…and was disappointed he wasn’t #1 but he got over it and just used it as motivation to practice harder. His wings grew strong, his limbs nimble, and his mind sharp, but that spark was starting to feel like it was never going to be within reach… Finally all of the hard work paid off as he was allowed to audition for the WonderBolts! He was a strong flier and due to being a team captain knew how to work well with a team but was still hoof biting nervous as he waited for the results.

When he got handed his uniform and goggles he nearly fainted with joy ! But didn’t let himself slack off, those goggles and that blue and yellow uniform were a symbol of hard work, dedication, and showmanship.

Gale is a really great guy but with fame comes ego, so he has one and boy doesn’t he know it? All for the spotlight and the thrills of being seen, but isn’t arrogant. He doesn’t cut in line or expect free things for his fame.

He loves performing with his group and feels a giant sense of pride when they pull off a great show and someone comments on how great they flew together, stunts are his favorite part, the trickier they are the BETTER!

The parts he doesn’t care for is when you have to go deal with monsters…but it comes with the job and he is always happy to live up to the WonderBolt name.

The only thing that Gale loves a little bit more than being a WonderBolt is the weather and when he’s not practicing , performing, and other things he’s off by himself finding a strong wind or a thunderstorm to fly in because he loves them so much.

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Hiya, nice to meet you :)

Here are my questions, comments, and suggestions

Your title definitely needs some work. Why not just "Gale Flurry [Final]"? Not only is it hard to read, it's very confusing! Sorry to say, but it probably will not be accepted as an RP character with that title. Don't worry, that's an easy fix.

It's my understanding that you can't have relationships with canon characters, and I think the Wonder Bolts count. :sleep: You could always create your own team of flyers, or ask some moderators if being a Wonder Bolt is an acceptable career.

Your character summary and cutie mark stories are very strong! I enjoyed reading them. ;-)

I also liked all of the proper grammar and spelling. What a treat!

Keep up the good work! :D

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