hinata2000100 Posted May 25, 2012 Report Share Posted May 25, 2012 I have permission from SaucySpider to have him listed as my brother. Roleplay Type: World of EquestriaName: Twilight ShineSex: Mare/FemaleAge: Foal (about the age of Scootaloo or Sweetie Belle.)Species: UnicornEye Color: Light PinkCoat Color: Dark BlueMane/Tail/Markings Color and Style: Red with blue stripes. Her tail is curly, like Pinkie Pie's, but really long likeFluttershy's.Physique: Short and skinny.Cutie Mark: Blank FlankOrigin/Residence: She was born in Fillydelphia.Occupation: StudentMotivation: The things that motivate her are the fact that, like the cutie mark crusaders, she wants to get her cutie mark as soon as possible. She also gets up early on school days to make sure she gets there in time.Character Summary:History: Twilight Shine was born in a middle class family in Fillydelphia. She hasn't left Fillydelphia, and doesn't know much about the world outside of it, not counting the night sky. She became interested in the sky at a very young age. Because of that, she was also interested in Princess Luna.Parents: Twilight's parents were quite smart. Her mother worked as a teacher, specifically teaching astronomy to ponies, including Twilight, and her father was an explorer, who made maps and studied geography. She also has a brother named Runner who now lives in Manehatten. Twilight's parents weren't around very often, because they were always traveling, so she mostly lived with her foal-sitter.Flaws: Due to bad experiences with her classmates, she has a habit of taking her time in trusting ponies. She doesn't have much knowledge on the world outside of her town, and she doesn't have much confidence because she's often teased for being a blank flank. Also, because she's very young, she doesn't have much magical skills, still barely able to levitate objects.Personality: Twilight, after learning to trust another pony, is very kind to them. She also is polite to ponies she knows, but will ignore ponies she doesn't like or trust. She is respectful and respectable, and has a great capacity for learning. She often underestimates her intellegince, but when talking about the night sky, she gets very proud about all that she knows. Anypony that she loves and/or trusts, she can get defensive of them. She hates seeing ponies bullied, and is willing to be bullied herself in place of her friends. She is shy when meeting new ponies, but after learning to trust them, starts acting like herself.This is what Twilight looks like:Um... Is this good enough...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightfall Posted May 25, 2012 Report Share Posted May 25, 2012 How about adding a Personality, history, flaws, etc and increase the length & detail a bit more?I somehow find long and descriptive apps the best ones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hinata2000100 Posted May 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2012 How about adding a Personality, history, flaws, etc and increase the length & detail a bit more?I somehow find long and descriptive apps the best ones. Sadly, I find long and descriptive apps too hard to think up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fireraven23 Posted May 25, 2012 Report Share Posted May 25, 2012 If you need any help, you can PM me. Long descriptive apps are all I can make Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hinata2000100 Posted May 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2012 If you need any help, you can PM me. Long descriptive apps are all I can make Um.... All right... Do you need some more detail on my character? Better yet, can you PM me with anything you might need? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hinata2000100 Posted May 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2012 So.... My pony isn't good enough? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SonicRainboomGirl Posted May 25, 2012 Report Share Posted May 25, 2012 Hmm...this seems to be a WiP. I think you have a nice start here, a charming little character with a lot of potential. Keep working on it, you can do it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hinata2000100 Posted May 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2012 Hmm...this seems to be a WiP. I think you have a nice start here, a charming little character with a lot of potential. Keep working on it, you can do it! Yay~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaucySpider Posted May 25, 2012 Report Share Posted May 25, 2012 I definitely feel like this is a promising app, just need some more detail If you want to change it to a WIP just edit it then use full editor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hinata2000100 Posted May 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2012 I definitely feel like this is a promising app, just need some more detail If you want to change it to a WIP just edit it then use full editor.Done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hinata2000100 Posted May 26, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2012 I added more detail to it, and hopefully it's acceptable now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaucySpider Posted May 27, 2012 Report Share Posted May 27, 2012 I approve of the preexisting relationship between Twilight Shine and Runner.(Had to make sure it was cool) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hinata2000100 Posted May 27, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2012 I approve of the preexisting relationship between Twilight Sine and Runner.(Had to make sure it was cool)So now mods have proof! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hinata2000100 Posted May 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2012 Call me crazy, but I think the mods are trying to ignore my app. It must not be good enough.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RarityDash Posted May 28, 2012 Report Share Posted May 28, 2012 Call me crazy, but I think the mods are trying to ignore my app. It must not be good enough....I wouldn't worry about it, the staff just has a lot of apps to go through. They will get to it eventually; just be patient. Also, I know some of the staff start from the bottom and go up from the top, so bumping the topic doesn't really help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hinata2000100 Posted May 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2012 I wouldn't worry about it, the staff just has a lot of apps to go through. They will get to it eventually; just be patient. Also, I know some of the staff start from the bottom and go up from the top, so bumping the topic doesn't really help.Oh, I wasn't trying to bump it. Whatever that means. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kilojoules Posted May 29, 2012 Report Share Posted May 29, 2012 Oh, I wasn't trying to bump it. Whatever that means.Heehee, when a Forum Post gets a reply (such as the one I am writing right now!) and it is posted (like it is now..) it brings that Topic to the top because it is the most recently active. Now you know;AND KNOWING IS HALF THE BATTLE! -insertcheesyGIJoepic- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hinata2000100 Posted May 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2012 Ohhhhhh..... Well, anyway, I updated this app. It now has a picture of Twilight Shine in it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brianblackberry Posted May 30, 2012 Report Share Posted May 30, 2012 Twilight's parents were quite smart. Her mother worked as a teacher, specifically teaching astrology to ponies, including Twilight, and her father was an explorer, who made maps and studied geography.Did you mean astronomy instead of astrology? The latter seems to be an odd subject to teach in school. My only other question is that does she have any particular interests that may hint at her future special talent, or is she just not sure of anything yet? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hinata2000100 Posted May 31, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2012 Did you mean astronomy instead of astrology? The latter seems to be an odd subject to teach in school. My only other question is that does she have any particular interests that may hint at her future special talent, or is she just not sure of anything yet?Oh... Yeah.... Sorry. I meant Astronomy. And no, she doesn't have any particular interests that may or may not hint at her talent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brianblackberry Posted May 31, 2012 Report Share Posted May 31, 2012 Oh... Yeah.... Sorry. I meant Astronomy. And no, she doesn't have any particular interests that may or may not hint at her talent. Alright, well there is no requirement that she should, it was just a question to ask in case she did. I would say just fix that astrology/astronomy word mix up in your application and it is pretty much good to go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted May 31, 2012 Report Share Posted May 31, 2012 You can also remove [unicorn] from the title since the topic tag is already there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hinata2000100 Posted May 31, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2012 You can also remove [unicorn] from the title since the topic tag is already there.All right then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hinata2000100 Posted May 31, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2012 Alright, well there is no requirement that she should, it was just a question to ask in case she did. I would say just fix that astrology/astronomy word mix up in your application and it is pretty much good to go. There, it's all fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brianblackberry Posted May 31, 2012 Report Share Posted May 31, 2012 Alrighty, for Great Justice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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