StarStorm

[colour=#800080]"Shade" Britches[/colour] [colour=#800080]"Pepperjack, there you are!!"[/colour] Shade smiled, finally finding somepony. [colour=#800080]"I guess that everyone must'a scattered when lunch started.. And I can't find Lightning anywhere! So how has you guyses lunch been?" [/colour]She acknowledged Sapphire. [colour=#800080]"I know we had class or whatever together, but we haven't officially met yet. I'm Shade."[/colour] She gave him a relaxed smile.

WAIT. So, Tales gets to pitch me a line and Weesh gets to interpret my drawing..? Oh my gosh!! This round is gonna be so magical!!

Hooray!! Another round!! I would like to do a drawing somewhere in the middle, please ^^

Thanks! I just think that its best to talk about things and have a plan that both parties are happy with. I mean, were just making a story here C:

This is looking really great! You did a great job with you revisions so far! The history is looking really fantastic, and I love the story in it C: One little thing that I've spotted is, when you say "and spent meany a day" in your cutie mark story, I think that what you mean is "many a day" ^^ Also, it would be really wonderous if you could elaborate on the cutie mark story some more. What got Snow interested in exploring? What does he love about it, and has he ever had any grand or interesting findings when he was out exploring? I'm super dooper excited to see what you can come up with!!

No, but you should pm Dusty and talk about how you two would like it to play out

TOTALLY! I'm sure that you'll be allowed in, but you'd best wait for the ok from Clair ^^ Er, Loopy I mean :3

Hai Spy! ^^ I'm not yet an rp helper, but trying out to be C: I really like Snow! He sounds kind if like I was in middle school, a cute little worry wart who loves to sleep ^^ Ik that he lived in Manehatten now, but where did he move from? Was he sad to go, or two little to remember? Did this also push him away from the idea of growing closer to ponies and forming friendships because he had to leave behind the ones that he had? This isn't anything big, but in your second paragraph in his history section, I found an inconsistacy in very tense. "It isn't the most well-paying or glamorous job in the big city, yet he got by" should either be "It isn't the best paying job in the city, but he gets by" or "It wasn't the best paying job in the city, but he got by" I would recommend maybe not having him turned away from friendship nowadays. Maybe he could have turned away for a time and is now a little bit socially awkward or shy. Usually in rp, I find it best to have characters who get along well with others and make friends and are willing to go do things with others without very much withdrawal. It just keeps things interesting, and lets rp's move in whatever direction they are heading without putting a halt on things This is really fantastic for a first app!! I love his tie and his fascination with it!! If you have any questions or need any help or anything, Ill be here all week

It seemed that everypony was surprised to see that an earth pony was part of the group, but Licorice had expected this. [colour=#008080]"I do brew my own potions, yes sir! Because of not having a horn, there isn't much else magical that I am able to do." [/colour]Licorice's ear perked up when she was offered the chance to learn more about the subject.[colour=#008080] "That would be wonderous, thank you!"[/colour] Licorice accepted the mentoring opportunity with a smile. [colour=#008080]"I've actually been brewing potions for a couple of years now, but there is still SO much that I could learn!"[/colour] There was something about heart healer that just drew licorice to her. She had a kind, loving aura about her, and so it didn't surprise Licorice at all when she had said that she had the gift of empathy. [colour=#008080]"Alright, Abbot! That's way rocking, dude, you do kinda what I do! Do you ever miss it in Itaily? I get homesick sometimes.. but its just so much fun to be out and about! Yeah, I'd love to learn from you! You seem like you'd be pretty boss at potion making. You and Razor both! Man, I'm so glad that I heard about this"[/colour] The young pony just couldn't seem to stop smiling! It wasn't that she often frowned, but she felt like she could really benefit from being there. She didn't think that she would be of much use in the guild at first, but licorice was really glad to have came. [colour=#008080]"WAITAMINUTE WAIT A MINUTE WAIT. A. MINUTE. Spirit, you were raised by a MANTICORE?! That's.. So intense!" [/colour]Licorice hoped that Spirit was just kidding, but she sounded sincere. Also, she had heard stories of the Ever free. It was allegedly a very dangerous place, but she heard that there were some rare ingredients there, such as phantom flower. [colour=#008080]"I really like how you said that, Gear! Anything is possible when you understand it."[/colour] Licorice considered magic a science, but a science that wasn't yet understood. She hoped to understand it one day, however. If what Gears said is true, understanding it would make it possible for her, and although just a mere dream for the time being, it made her insides smile. Licorice giggled at the pony. In her head, she was thinking [colour=#008080]What a fruit basket![/colour], but on the outside she just gave him a soft smile. She listened quietly. [colour=#008080]"Wow, you're an adventurer Pocket Change? Thats pretty awesome! Everypony has a story to tell, but I bet you have some really good ones if youve been questing and exploring and such! What kind of adventures do you have?"[/colour] [colour=#008080]An adventurer who's afraid to get dirty.. I love this guy already![/colour] Licorice watched as Moon dancer's lips moved, but she just couldn't seem to make out the words! Moondancer was a pretty pony, and Licorice soon found herself staring. [colour=#008080]Wait.. She's talking, so evrrypony is looking.. Whew, that could have been awkward[/colour]

Thank you Shy I'm glad that you enjoyed it so!

Miss Black [colour=#008080]"Cool beans! It'll be faster if we drive.. Is that okay?" [/colour]Licorice led the way to her little car not far outside the science room, and turned the key to start it. [colour=#FF8C00]"WAS THAT AN ECHO? OR AN ANSWER TO MY CALL? WILL I PERISH HERE? OR BE RESCUED AFTER ALL?" [/colour][colour=#008080]"SORRY!!"[/colour] Licorice quickly turned a knob, lowering the music's volume by at least 80 percent. [colour=#008080]"Sorry Lightning, I didn't mean to blast your eardrums out or anything! Hope you like Pretty and Sick.. I'm actually trying to learn this one on my viola right now. What kind of music do you usually listen to?"[/colour] *One short drive later* [colour=#008080]"Here we are! Littlegrove Market"[/colour] Licorice clicked the little seatbelt thingy and hopped out, almost forgetting to lock her car. She noticed the sign just outside the door. [colour=#008080]"A papaya sale..? Hmm.. How does papayas sound to you? I'm buyin!"[/colour]

Umm, I won't make a post that effects you, Dusty, but just something short to get back in the story real quick if that's okay..? I'm sorry, I started working on a post before I read that D:

GUYS, I'm back and I'm ready to be a big part of this again!!!! Welcome aboard, Pepperjack Iris! ^^

"'No more rainbows' was her decree! Equestria's ponies would pay this fee!" Sorry, the holy evil government, owned by Celestia, takes away your rainbow tank ^^

Have you been on any fun adventures lately? C:

No, Silvie... I was approving Iris, lordgecy's character. He just sent in an app XD But you are more than welcome to make one, and then I can stamp you, too! ^^

[colour=#0000cd]"That makes since.. Kind of like ponies almost!"[/colour] Star made a quick comparison in her head, thinking about how if everypony taught school, that we wouldn't have any chocolate milk, but if everypony made chocolate milk, we wouldn't have anypony to teach school! Everypony was different and important in their own way, like apples are, she guessed. [colour=#0000cd]Or, maybe she just means different ponies like different apples..[/colour] She smiled when Applejack patted her shoulder. It felt nice. It was the kind of pat that made her feel like she did something right. [colour=#0000cd]"Oh, well that's okay!"[/colour] Star Storm was grateful to get even one kiss from the mare, having been worried that her age might have made her ineligible for such a deal. [colour=#0000cd]"I'll take one bushel of the Fuji kind, please! They sound really radical. Perfect, even!"[/colour] She dug through her saddlebag and quickly counted out [colour=#0000cd]One.. two.. three...... four aaaand.. five bits! [/colour]After collecting the correct amount, she transferred the five bits from her hoof to that of the sales pony's. The little pony closed her eyes and tilted her head up. [colour=#0000cd]"I'm ready!"[/colour] Star was ready for some smoochin!