Pretzelparty

Welcome to canterlot! Im sure youll have a great time!

I intend to post tonight.

Pressy's mind was slowly getting clearer... althoguh she wouldn't have guessed that at first considering how the stallion's speech was so fragmented and glitchy. "uh nice ta meet ya too!" the mare went over to the older rusty and said,"Rusty... ya gotta take betta care o' yerself in the future... or tell yourself to do that now! seriously you look awesome!" she said with a chuckle before going over to the panel and looking at all the instruments. "So... uh Rusty number one, Rusty number two has some stuff to tell you!"

Pressy coughed and slowly pulled herself up,"uhh... rusty... I think I'm seein' double... accept one of you looks younger and not too bad lookin'" she said with a chuckle, her head still slightly foggy and her mind exhausted from fueling the machine. Her eyes fell upon Scrap and she tilted her head,"uh... are you "Scrap?"

Pressy was still out like a light. her breath was still and unmoving. In her mind she could hear Rusty's voice, calling to her. So much more to see and they'd only gotten started. He was right... how was she supposed to be the greatest artist in Equestria if she just stopped her story right here. Going back to a curmudgeon? that wouldn't do at all... she'd gotten to know Rusty and she felt him being cheerful worked a lot better for him. Soon Rusty would notice her chest rising and falling as she began to breath. Reaching a hoof up she laughed wryly and nigh breathlessly,"N-no' gonna 'appen on my watch..." she laughed a bit and smiled. "Now... Wot's with all the waterworks?" she asked playfully

Presteza paused a moment but nodded and went forward, nocking her horn into place and taking the fueling potion, then downing it quickly. Soon the mare's bright blue eyes lit up a fierce blue , she spoke without looking at rusty and said,"J-jus' 'old the door! Don' worry I'll be... er... well I'll be somethin'!"she said with that familiar cheesy grin on her face before shetook a deep breath and concentrated as much of her magical power into the machine as she could. Her horn already was already shining as bright as Celestia's sun as she channeled but soon the light in her eyes began to fade as the fueling potion began to wear off... seemed the machine needed more power than they had both thought. Pressy already looked thoroughly exhausted and like she could faint anny second but when she glanced at Rusty and remembered that his friend was waiting for them she felt she had to to keep going. Soon her horn light up brighter than before, flooding the time machine with a torrent of magical energy from the mare's horn and sending every bit of equipment in the machine whirring to life. "R-rusty... Let's go!" she said as she kept up her channeling. Once rusty put in the coordinates and set the time the mare began to shiver and as the machine began to power up and enter into the timestream, Pressy fell over ... she didn't seem to be moving at all....

The shields were dropping fast and the mare knew she had to work faster, she moved as fast as she could to the door and tried her hardest to hold. The whirring sound of the machinery and rusty fixing the machines filled the small time machine. "Shields at 20%" she pressed up against the door, hearing the pounding growing louder. "10%" said the alarm. Presteza closed her eyes and held tight as the felt the angry hooves of what must have been everypony in town pounding away at the doors. "Ho-How're those repairs goin' rusty?"

The unicorn went wide eyed as she was picked up in Rusty's aura and slammed into the machine. Tumbling into the transport she crashed into one of the metal walls of it she rubbed her head and got back to her hooves,"Oi, Rust. I know yer new to the whole magic thing.. but could ya be a bit more careful?! but yea... I'm fine..." Around the walls of the machine the duo could hear the sound of the hooves of the townsponies pounding on the shields in anger,"uh.... Rust, there anything I can do to speed this up?... I dunno how long the shields are gonna last..."

welcome to canterlot! I'm sure you'll have an awesome time here!

I managed to draw it myself=p

The mare blushed a bit and walked over to the large earth pony,"uh... yea... you guys haven't seen a paintbrush anywhere? or maybe some scrolls?" she asked trying her best to be civil and not yell at the ponies to stop staring at her. "Um... by the way um this place looks a bit different... uh wot happened here?"

THe mare laughed nervously and turned to Rusty,"don' think they'll believe us if we say our "Evil twins" came by and messed everythin' up do ya?" she asked with wry laugh.

Pressy gave a nod and smiled at Rusty,"I'll keep that in mind... hopefully he won't get into the innkeeper's territory" she chuckled. The mare still had a lot of excess energy but she could feel herself beginning to settle down. "Zalmixa's remedy sure does 'ave a lot o' kick to it" she said with laugh,"Maybe you should've gotten a sample?"

Welcome back to canterlot Im sure you'll have an awesome time!

The mare grinned brightly and nodded,"No kiddin'! I can hardly wait ta meet yer friend too, ya think he'll like me?" she said putting a hoof to her chin. she was still shaking a fair bit from the pent up energy. "oh and We should probably be careful around protoponyville in case they are angry at us..."

ah ok, Sorry Bellosh! I've made a few more changes and tried trimming down interactions a bit

Presteza looked to darkness,"Should I kick a light orb over there?"

Made a few alterations again! tell me what you think!