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The idea seems fair, since it's like a second ... hand/hoof opinion concerning your OC's. It somehow reminds me of request thread. Post your OC link here, have an in-depth or quick summarize of what others think about it.

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Ok...

since you already rated your own OC so low. I guess...3/5

Here I go:

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This is mostly just a design skecthe-most of my stuff is-he was originally meant to be an antagonist related to a hero in an RP but was rejected on the grounds of being too grimdark. To put it short, he was risen by his father-a well respected warrior-to take over his military reputation and bring forth more pride to the family already strong militarist legacy although as he grew more and more his father noticed that he was overly aggressive, cruel, insensitive and sometimes morally confused. He was later put into the Havoc squad-underground pyscho units let loose behind enemy lines to demoralize and strike fear into opposition-This of course was a secret but his father knew what was going on, he was never let out in public despite being one the most respected high ranking troops there was. So his father stopped teaching him one day and withdrew his approval, turning it to his little sister. In a fit of rage/disappointment and betrayal-his been trained for this since he was able to walk-he chose to release his sister and himself of families past and killed them both. His sister then envisioned him as a monster, he later comes back into her life when she old enough with a hidden agenda. Hes an actor-so he can assume a kind, good hearted pony like fluttershy then go mad in a heart beat-although they soon end up fighting when it become clear who is and she remember what he done-Not really surprised it got rejected. I had a good plot to follow this all up though.

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Danny The Doomed: One pure pony with no real talent working as a low ranking legal executive at the age of thirty. Bad luck always followed him and things haven't changed a bit .Despite being reasonably kind hearted and forcefully at time optimistic to keep his sanity if nothing else he take the abuse live hurl at him with a smile...then a bottle of vodka and a bunch of teas. While not alcoholic he does get drunk when he starts so he normally refrains from taking the first sip most nights. He tries to be joyful but everything he says has subtle, sad and depressing undertones. Bad luck, strange occurring and out night worrying dreams mixed with horrifying happenings in his home can't shake the feeling that hes been followed through out his life by something he... doesn't want to see...and he would be right. What he dosen't know is what..to why..and things are about to get very strange..very scary all very fast..because he going to change from a loser into perhaps the most important being there could be in such a tame universe.

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Brightbolt: An old pega god. He the most weakest god there is and there for considered a demi-god despite being full blood, While other ponies try to reach for rule, Brightbolt stands as a guardian of the skies when massive dragons and deadly beast still wandered, having the ability to turn into a bolt of lightning and being faster/stronger than a standard pony also helped. He was loyal, dependable, humble and always aimed at doing the right thing for mortals. Each week he would battle with an ancient dragon made of pure smoke, simulating a thunder storm when they fought. He would always win yet the rivalry always stood as it became a matter of pride more than killing ponies for food to the dragon. Eventually though, Brightbolt was stricken down by discord, he was tricked in a battle to go into a rod with two ends, forcing his lighting to split, making his yin and yang go into different directions. Before he realized and started to head back his darker side was meet by discord and easily corrupted, when the two returned as whole, Bright bolt was driven hopeless mad and eventually stood against the two sisters claiming that they standing idly as people die. Finally as punishment he was trapped in his lightning bolt form, forced to travel the skies forever without a way to touch the ground, yet despite this he still fought that ancient dragon whenever he appeared.

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