CloudShimmers Posted November 15, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2012 Sorry about that, I thought something else had happened with your wild and that you blasted me with water Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ironkau Posted November 15, 2012 Report Share Posted November 15, 2012 Uh, was my new dude accepted or not? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CloudShimmers Posted November 15, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2012 Not as a keyblades wielder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ciraxis Posted November 15, 2012 Report Share Posted November 15, 2012 Errr....I belive that Ironkau had this post in mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sleeps Posted November 15, 2012 Report Share Posted November 15, 2012 @CloudShimmmersI just noticed my error. ( I don't know why I thought Pegasus.) I'll go make that quick edit. Also try to keep OOC in the OOC area. I have this followed and I do check it so don't worry about me not noticing something.Edit:Alright fixed up that error on my last post. Changed Pegasus to Unicorn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ironkau Posted November 15, 2012 Report Share Posted November 15, 2012 Errr....I belive that Ironkau had this post in mind.Yeah that's what I meant, the Heartless Commander. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CloudShimmers Posted November 16, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2012 oh, yeah approved Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DreamySunday Posted November 16, 2012 Report Share Posted November 16, 2012 (proto character critisism wanted by all if possible!!!!)What are you?: NobodyName: Anxkivohdi (blame random number generator)Race: EarthGender: Third legAppearance: Dusty light grey coat, mane and tail look like sweetie belles during the talent show(colour and style), eye colour changes depending on the spell he is using, fezWeapon of Choice: bones (can combine to make virtually any shape)Personality: Analytical, Sarcastic, Stalky, manipulitive(when nessicary), smart ass, power hungry, can acknowledge an oponants power, honest, Cutie Mark: for the sake of the RP blankGoal: to harness Kingdom Hearts to cause outlandish destruction (someponies just want to watch the world burn) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sleeps Posted November 16, 2012 Report Share Posted November 16, 2012 (pro character criticism wanted by all if possible!!!!)What are you?: NobodyName: Anxkivohdi (blame random number generator)Race: EarthGender: Third legAppearance: Dusty light grey coat, sweetie belle,colors change depending on the spell he is usingWeapon of Choice: Scythe. the handle looks like its made of bone and the blade looks like its made of a flattened(from the side) dragon skull(without the jaw Personality: Cocky, dark, power hungry, can acknowledge an opponents power, honest, Cutie Mark: shrouded by cloak (honestly the cutie mark wouldn't make sense in a KH RP)Goal: to harness Kingdom HeartsI would recommend changing some things on him.To start I would change his weapon since we already have a scythe user. His personality is already done by quite a few rpers (Promontory, Reeves, Diamondheart, and even Vixrels) You should give him a cutie mark or just leave him a blank flank. As for his goal I think that is almost every nobodies/heartless goal or at least a part of it. Why does he want to rule kingdom hearts? if for power why does he need the power? Did something happen that made him power hunger? basically go deeper. The changing mane is not needed nor would it help him. (Actually it would extremely detrimental once somepony figured out what each colour stood for. kinda like the clock phantom from the first game) What does sweetie belle have to with your characters appearance? Does he have the same mane style/coat style as her? (I'm assuming it is the mane style since you mention his coat is grey) Going back and explain a bit more about your character would help better round him out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DreamySunday Posted November 16, 2012 Report Share Posted November 16, 2012 I would recommend changing some things on him.To start I would change his weapon since we already have a scythe user. His personality is already done by quite a few rpers (Promontory, Reeves, Diamondheart, and even Vixrels) You should give him a cutie mark or just leave him a blank flank. As for his goal I think that is almost every nobodies/heartless goal or at least a part of it. Why does he want to rule kingdom hearts? if for power why does he need the power? Did something happen that made him power hunger? basically go deeper. The changing mane is not needed nor would it help him. (Actually it would extremely detrimental once somepony figured out what each colour stood for. kinda like the clock phantom from the first game) What does sweetie belle have to with your characters appearance? Does he have the same mane style/coat style as her? (I'm assuming it is the mane style since you mention his coat is grey) Going back and explain a bit more about your character would help better round him out.thank you for the input as for the appearance that was a derp on my part Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ciraxis Posted November 16, 2012 Report Share Posted November 16, 2012 And we have two with scythes a weapons already. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aFlatmajor Posted November 16, 2012 Report Share Posted November 16, 2012 I should check the OOC more often Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalEcplise Posted November 16, 2012 Report Share Posted November 16, 2012 Ah dang, Vixrels bowed out for a moment.And cast stop on me, the cheeky prick. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aFlatmajor Posted November 16, 2012 Report Share Posted November 16, 2012 If you want me to, I can edit it. I was just doing what I was doing, and stepped out for a moment. Like all bosses do...Attack you, summon weaker enemies to attack you, drop out, come from nowhere, and repeat. Besides, you still have lesser nobodies attacking you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalEcplise Posted November 17, 2012 Report Share Posted November 17, 2012 Oh no, it's fine. I think that it's a decent idea, you probably shouldn't have told me though...Ya know to keep the surprise.Basically unless I call attention to a problem, I have no problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aFlatmajor Posted November 17, 2012 Report Share Posted November 17, 2012 I think you pointed it out just so you could figure out what I'm planning....Well played Eclipse....Well played... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ciraxis Posted November 17, 2012 Report Share Posted November 17, 2012 I kind off...updated entry of mine character. I hope this is acceptable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalEcplise Posted November 17, 2012 Report Share Posted November 17, 2012 I cant say I disagree, It was a good idea to include a list of spells. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ciraxis Posted November 17, 2012 Report Share Posted November 17, 2012 I also had some...thoughts about characters.First Nobodies. As we know strongest Nobodies all have their own elements theme. So if I can ask you SilverWisp...Trexcurn - Water/HolyShax - WindVixrels- Ice?And now about Heartless. It is well know that the stronger the willpower of the heart the more monstrous form their Heartless take. The only exception was Xehanort who give himself into darkness on his own free will, and as such kept human form. Since Heartless Commanders look relatively...normal, can we assume that they followed his steps and did exactly the same? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBritishBrony Posted November 17, 2012 Report Share Posted November 17, 2012 Laptop's back up, expect a post later tonight! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalEcplise Posted November 17, 2012 Report Share Posted November 17, 2012 Welcome back to the world of the posting TBB Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valencetiger Posted November 17, 2012 Report Share Posted November 17, 2012 And now about Heartless. It is well know that the stronger the willpower of the heart the more monstrous form their Heartless take. The only exception was Xehanort who give himself into darkness on his own free will, and as such kept human form. Since Heartless Commanders look relatively...normal, can we assume that they followed his steps and did exactly the same?Very good point...yes, we can assume that is what happened. Heartless Commanders and the other equine-like characters amongst the Heartless. It isn't unlikely to think that perhaps a part of a world's population could have willingly succumbed to the Darkness, right? I mean, there are always specific groups out there that do such things. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sleeps Posted November 17, 2012 Report Share Posted November 17, 2012 Well I just finished writing a term paper so I'll probably post in a little bit but first I have some more home work to do. (Though school may be out for fall break the work doesn't stop) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalEcplise Posted November 18, 2012 Report Share Posted November 18, 2012 Well I just finished writing a term paper so I'll probably post in a little bit but first I have some more home work to do. (Though school may be out for fall break the work doesn't stop)I know the feeling... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalEcplise Posted November 18, 2012 Report Share Posted November 18, 2012 Reeve's list of blue magic absolutely refuses to go under spoilers on the first page so I place them here.[colour=#282828]Angel Whisper[/colour][colour=#282828]Mighty Guard[/colour][colour=#282828]Frog Song[/colour][colour=#282828]White Wind[/colour][colour=#282828]Bad Breath[/colour][colour=#282828]Magic Hammer[/colour][colour=#282828]Aqua Breath[/colour][colour=#282828]Level ? Death[/colour][colour=#282828]Doom[/colour][colour=#282828]Roulette[/colour][colour=#282828]Matra Magic[/colour][colour=#282828]1000 Needles[/colour][colour=#282828]Blaster[/colour][colour=#282828]Flash[/colour][colour=#282828]Level ? Graviga[/colour][colour=#282828]Level ? Shadow Flare[/colour][colour=#282828]Death Claw[/colour][colour=#282828]Time Slip[/colour][colour=#282828]Moon Flute[/colour][colour=#282828]Transfusion[/colour][colour=#282828]Reflect???[/colour][colour=#282828]Rippler[/colour][colour=#282828]Grand Delta[/colour][colour=#282828]Beta[/colour][colour=#282828]Electrocute[/colour][colour=#282828]Night [/colour][colour=#282828]Twister[/colour][colour=#282828]Auto-Life[/colour][colour=#282828]Stone Breath[/colour][colour=#282828]Animating Wail[/colour][colour=#282828]Amplification[/colour][colour=#282828]Blood Saber[/colour][colour=#282828]Enervation[/colour][colour=#282828]Exuviation[/colour][colour=#282828]Final Sting[/colour][colour=#282828]Metallic Body[/colour][colour=#282828]Plasma Charge[/colour][colour=#282828]Dragon Force[/colour][colour=#282828]Haste Break[/colour][colour=#282828]Screech[/colour][colour=#282828]Eerie Soundwave[/colour][colour=#282828]Unction[/colour][colour=#282828]Sandstorm[/colour][colour=#282828]Heat Breath[/colour][colour=#282828]Thermal Pulse[/colour][colour=#282828]Zephyr Mantle[/colour][colour=#282828]Warm Up[/colour][colour=#282828]Regeneration[/colour] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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