Sulvuss Posted January 17, 2012 Report Share Posted January 17, 2012 How long is your first chapter anyway? currently 17 pages long. It will properly be 22-25 long at this rate. Link to comment
Conor Colton Posted January 17, 2012 Report Share Posted January 17, 2012 0_0That's a lot of pages.....My first chapter was only nine Link to comment
Sulvuss Posted January 17, 2012 Report Share Posted January 17, 2012 0_0That's a lot of pages.....My first chapter was only nine really. I have been keeping it really short. Link to comment
AsthmaticPegasus Posted January 17, 2012 Report Share Posted January 17, 2012 I've got to go for a few minutes, but I'll be back Link to comment
Conor Colton Posted January 17, 2012 Report Share Posted January 17, 2012 .....What?I'm confused....unless me and you have completely different concepts of the word "Short" Link to comment
Sulvuss Posted January 17, 2012 Report Share Posted January 17, 2012 .....What?I'm confused....unless me and you have completely different concepts of the word "Short" Well, I mention.a bit of a while back that my natural style heavy in description so when I am relaxing. I can release a large amount of word, both extedned and in depth on one scene and that will take up about...two/four pages and sometimes more if I'm really into it.But with this book I realized that its ok to do that for RP posts because people are swallowing those in seperate chunks. But no one going to read a whole chapter like that. It would be crazy. So now I've been going slower...relaxing..adding lines...doing something else and purposely keeping it shorter. Link to comment
Sulvuss Posted January 17, 2012 Report Share Posted January 17, 2012 ALso. I've bene using that style for seven years and I mingled with alot of other writers like that. So I never realized it was long. Link to comment
Solaria Posted January 17, 2012 Report Share Posted January 17, 2012 Fawkes, your Harry Potter discovery made me Link to comment
Conor Colton Posted January 17, 2012 Report Share Posted January 17, 2012 Well we each have our own styles I guess Sulvuss.....Wait what?What Harry Potter discovery? Link to comment
Sulvuss Posted January 17, 2012 Report Share Posted January 17, 2012 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ReAe0JMXdmI&feature=related Link to comment
AsthmaticPegasus Posted January 17, 2012 Report Share Posted January 17, 2012 okay, I'm back Link to comment
Solaria Posted January 17, 2012 Report Share Posted January 17, 2012 Well we each have our own styles I guess Sulvuss.....Wait what?What Harry Potter discovery? The one about Starswirl the Bearded being a "hairy potter." Amniomorphic- bowl or pot shaping, and he was bearded. It was a good find lol. Link to comment
Conor Colton Posted January 17, 2012 Report Share Posted January 17, 2012 Oh....now I get it Clever Link to comment
Acynder Posted January 17, 2012 Report Share Posted January 17, 2012 >Hasn't been here in 3 days>Topic went by 80 pages.fudge Link to comment
AsthmaticPegasus Posted January 17, 2012 Report Share Posted January 17, 2012 where did everyone go D: Link to comment
Conor Colton Posted January 17, 2012 Report Share Posted January 17, 2012 Oh I'm still here No worries Link to comment
AsthmaticPegasus Posted January 17, 2012 Report Share Posted January 17, 2012 Okay, that's it, I'm making a pony image in photoshopI'll never get good at it if I don't try, right? Link to comment
Conor Colton Posted January 17, 2012 Report Share Posted January 17, 2012 That's....... understandable I guess Good for you Pegasus Link to comment
Sulvuss Posted January 17, 2012 Report Share Posted January 17, 2012 Okay, that's it, I'm making a pony image in photoshopI'll never get good at it if I don't try, right?Any form of contributation is great! Link to comment
Sulvuss Posted January 17, 2012 Report Share Posted January 17, 2012 Neir was a great story. As a game, it had a lot of gimmicks but as a story it was fantastic. Link to comment
Acynder Posted January 17, 2012 Report Share Posted January 17, 2012 Nier's my favorite game this gen. Link to comment
Noedig Posted January 17, 2012 Report Share Posted January 17, 2012 ............Anyone? Link to comment
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