Skye

The only part about this that I'm not keen on is him writing a story specifically to the Princess and receving a reply. I would be much more comfortable with him having written to a publisher and being surprised with a letter from her staff in the form perhaps of a fan appreciation letter. We want to try to discourage app-level familiarity with any of the cast characters.

Okay, this has gone above and beyond reasonable limits for application lengths. While applications are supposed to be good and descriptive, there is a limit on how reasonably long they should be. So please chop about 95% of this out and present only the parts that are crucial to defining the character as the character, not telling her entire story. That part, you should save and attach later as a separate response to your app here. In addition, there are components that deal with hard numbers in here. These components are things that we cannot verify in the show directly, because it is of course a cartoon. So please remove these components for your application itself. The rest of it might be helpful for things like HoE when we get that rolled out, but otherwise try to be vague and merely colorful in your descriptions.

Ah, hrm... two things here. Firstly, Tinfoil requires a lot of work to make that isn't something that is going to be done with this level of technology, not in such amounts that could be made into a hat. Secondly, there's no suggestion of 'aliens' of in Friendship is Magic. These two things would need to be modified or changed for this character. However, having him be eccentric is quite possible, just need to figure a better way for it.

Yep.

I have the impression that you're using levitation magic to say that he was floating himself up in the air to paint. I'm not keen on that, but he could be using levitation magic to levitate the paintbrush and paint to do that. Thus far, the only unicorns we have seen using levitation is Twilight during a point where she was using the Elements of Harmony, and Pumpkin Cake during the period where she's capable of extremely powerful bursts of magic, which means that Levitation isn't supposed to be something that just any unicorn can do except during the most extreme of times (Otherwise Twilight would certainly have been able to save herself from falling off the cliff, for example).