NeoExlucky

Time Spinner was directed to the room called...homeroom. He was from Italy and didn't know that much about american schools. He certainly had no such thing as a home room. He wore a grey, short-sleeved, button up shirt with a small pocket watch sewn onto his collar. He wore blue jeans and had round black glasses. He stood around looking at the class room, really confused by the room. The girl who had directed him here had long blonde hair and wore a purple dress, she had a coin design on her dress and was certainly beautiful. She looked up at the teacher with shining purple eyes. "Mr. Fancypants, this is the foreign exchange student, Time Spinner." Said Coin Snatcher.

I vote for digimon!

Time rolled his eyes. Dodgeball? Great. Now he needed to find a way to win. He looked around and spotted Silverbolt. That would be his best way to win, was to join his team. He stayed on the same side they were. (So weird for someone not to like dodgeball. .-.)

Time Spinner was one of the last for his mile but he was almost done. He was so glad to be done with this whole stupid gym thing. He kept to himself and didn't say a word.

(I think it was cause someone asked why Time was acting so evil. Then we got off track.)

Well I for one embrace our new rosey and Dio-y overlords. Plus with all of this change happening it makes me feel better about what I'm about to do. Anyways I think this is appropriate... Me on the Inside: YAY CURSING! Time can be normal!

Final Status: Gadget: Desceased Swift Blitz: Desceased Deity: N/A Time Spinner: Desceased Silver Chain: N/A Seeker: N/A Sundial: Rubble, Alive Pocket Watch: Rubble, Alive Echo Forte: Rubble, Alive Discovered: 100% Ending: Desolate

(Oh my Celestia, I read that in class and I was laughing so hard, everyone stared at me like I was insane.) (Oh yeah, air force doesn't know yet, Time Spinner can control time itself, not here of course but OR (Original Recipe) Time Spinner can stop time for 12 seconds, pretty much anytime he wants to as long as he meets the requirements.) EDIT: (Oh and also *Breathes in deeply* WHOOVES RO TIME!)

(He's not, he just doesn't like physical work. XD)

Time Spinner frowned at the teacher. [colour=#696969]"This is stupid." [/colour][colour=#000000]He whispered as he started to run a little faster, though the key word was little.[/colour]

How come Knuckles never goes super anymore?

Has anyone seen Time Spinner? I've been looking all over and I can't find him...oh well...let's go do this review, he probably got lost in the internet aether. (Where I live.) The Show Stoppers is a nice episode that you can either love or hate. It's one of those episodes that I do enjoy though. The story goes like this: The cutie mark crusaders are finding their cutie marks, and establishing a tree house that will become it's own landmark, after a few comical failures Twilight (and cherilee) suggest entering a talent show, which can only end in queen and failure. I like the stories flow, it's very connected and well thought out, even for a CMC episode. It has that flavour of care put into it and it really seems to show. My favorite part might just be talent show's song. The references and animations were very charming. The animation throughout the episode was pretty good. It had a few times where it could have been better but it was alright now. Characters are pretty believable. Nothing bad about them so nothing to really say. Voice acting for the CMC was...wow. Knocked by imaginary socks off my feet. Very well done. The CMC theme is a song, so I should review it but...it's also a joke song. So...what do I do? For a joke song it was pretty good and got me to laugh at a few parts. The conversations just kept coming and some of them were pretty good. Nice job Script writing team! The episode is pretty good for a season 1 episode, still not my favorite but it was pretty good. One I would recommend a non-brony watch. (If they knew who the CMC were by now.) So with all of this in mind I give this episode my reviewer rating of 7.9. Just a little more work and...and...I'm sorry but am I getting bad at this? It's just...everytime I review something it makes me feel depressed, like I'm failing and not doing a good job. It's not just reviews either, I feel like I've lost my touch in RPing. I just don't feel that same spark I did when I RPed for the first time. Ever since the academy chapter 3 ended, I've not felt that same way...maybe I should just...maybe it's time I...

(I want to play too!) Off in the back, seeming like he was hiding, was a small, weak, boy. He had brown hair and a grey shirt, and on his jeans was a pocket watch. He never liked this kind of thing. I mean, gym? Sports? No way! If you were to get him in a computer lab then he'd be a genius but it was just best if didn't participate in gym activities. Time Spinner sighed meekly. [colour=#696969]"Well this sucks..." [/colour][colour=#000000]He thought.[/colour]

(If this is a roleplay you might want to add a bit of story to entice other roleplayers.)

Hmm...something's not quite right here...I don't know what but for some reason I feel weird about this episode. I like it but and it was a really good episode, good song, great characters, believable story, but why doesn't it sit right? Oh well let's do this! The story is this, Rarity's working on an order and Sweetie belle wants to help but Rarity won't let her. Fluttershy comes in with Rarity's cat (I can't spell her name.) and the rest of the CMC come in after a bit of banter betweem Rarity and Fluttershy. They talk about a sleepover, Rarity says they can't and Fluttershy offers to help them. I have to say that this story is really interesting. I don't hate the CMC yet so this episode makes me really happy. The story reminds me of when I was younger and used to have sleepovers with my best friends. Anyways I like the overall story and I do believe that it makes the characters stay true to themselves. Animation was stunning, the cockatrice turning ponies to stone, to the animations during the song, all to Fluttershy's 'stare' make this episode really good. Best of all it only gets better from here. The characters seem okay here. The CMC are just like they always are, Rarity is like Rarity. Fluttershy and Twilight seem off to me. I don't know how but the stare, doesn't feel right for fluttershy. Maybe because she says that she can't control when she does the stare but does control it on discord in keep calm and flutter on. Twilight...I don't know. She doesn't seem right but...maybe it's the rock. Voice acting was normal. Nothing to outstanding for the show now. The Song "Hush now, Quiet now' is really good. I wish there was a real lullaby version of it and not just that one part because I would love to hear it. What we got was good though. I love the song, plus it gives us some insight on Sweetie belle as a character. The lines well...they flowed really good for CMC and fluttershy but some of the lines that rarity did felt odd and a bit different. Well this episode was an overall success. It seems to stay in the grey more than it should and if it was given a bit more of a push, I'd put it in a top ten, alas it isn't. So overall I give this episode a 7.5 out of 10. Needs just a tiny bit more work. Well now that's done here's your daily comic from Time Spinner! (The stage has been set...)

This...this is one of the greatest things I have ever seen...

So...was rarity technically an alicorn during this episode? I've wondered why this spell isn't used more often, or why we never hear about this event again....wait...why does doctor whooves have wings? Okay so the story is pretty much this; Rainbow Dash is going into a competition known as the young fliers competition. Only Fluttershy can go with her though, since only pegasi can walk on clouds. However through the use of two spells, the rest of the mane 6 are able to walk on clouds, and Rarity, through the use of the other spell, gets wings. Now what do I think of the story? Well...it's pretty simple. Personally I don't care for the story that's in place here. Several things I do want to point is how she could do the Sonic rainboom, have thousands of ponies see it, even ponies in Manehatten and Canterlot, all as a foal, then it just disappears. As said by the 'bullies' it's just a myth, furthermore if the trick is that impressive, wouldn't rainbow dash only get better from there? These just seem like giant plot holes that don't make any sense. Also I do want to talk about the 'bulllies' for a second. For one why were they all bullying her in the first place? Another question, where we're the mares? Wouldn't they be in on the fun of making fun of Dashie? Why were they all guys? It's things like these that kind of remind me that this is a show for girls. The only thing I can think of is 'girl power!' yet it just feels wrong. I hate gender things like this, it's why I don't like some of the lines in ticket master. Applejack did say 'Aint that just like a boy' I absolutely cannot stand gender inequality. On the other hoof, Animation is top notch and exceeds my expectation. The Sonic Rainboom and Rarity's wings look stunning. The characters do seem to act like themselves which is exactly what I'd ask for in any episode. The voice of everypony was quite nice and you can tell that a lot of the actors had fun with their lines. Dialogue is okay. Like I said some lines do remind me of a kids show but most of the time it's alright. So this episode, while many like it, I don't care for it all that much. Cannon wise it's a good episode but, it's just not my cup of tea. I can't talk much about this episode but it does add to another episode down the line a bit. Overall this episode was okay, I give this episode a 7.3 out of 10. I think it needs a bit more work. Well this has been Neo Reviews, thanks for reading!

Name: Aselia RP type: Canterlot Chronicles (CC) Gender: Female Age: Young Mare Species: Unicorn Eye colour: Forest Green Character colour: Red Occupation: Alchemist for the Rosalia Brigade The Rosalia Brigade is a brigade created under the purpose of stamping out the lawless all over Equestria. Created by Balador, they hope to bring a lawful justice into the world by finding ponies and other creatures who have broken the law and sending them to dungeons. They could be considered a vigilante group as some guilds are. This guild was built specifically for finding thieves and are currently on the hunt for a specific group of ruffians. Aselia's job on the team is to supply her allies with potions, charms, hexes, concoctions, and the like so her friends can use them. Mane/Tail/Other: Colored ash grey, her mane is normally of short-medium length. She commonly has a red hair band on. Her tail very long and both are kept relatively groomed. Physique: About average height and weight, normally wearing a red robe covered with pockets and other tools. Residence: Stalliongrad Cutie Mark: A bottle filled with a strange purple liquid. Unique Traits: Aselia has a large knowledge of herbs and plant-life. In combat Aselia normally throws potions to help her allies, however she can also use a rod/staff, and her trusty book, to keep enemies at bay. As stated above, Aselia would prefer diplomatic action and talking rather than war. While her potions are top of the line, her combat by itself isn't very good. Aselia's rod (known as the stirring stick to her.) is thick and would probably not break so easily. However it's rather small and isn't exactly the best thing to use for hoof-to-hoof combat. Her book, the arte of magic, potions, and charms can be used for multiple purposes. While also holding recipes for potions and enchantments, it also has a few pages of (Beginner) magic, and a few hexes. Aselia is more likely to use her potions more than magic, due to her not being very good at combative magic. History: Aselia grew up in Stalliongrad. Her life was fairly normal, she had friends, she had good parents, and she had a great life set out for her. Her two best friends, Melody and Thunder Swift, were always there for her, getting into trouble as kids often would, camping out under stars together, the trio made a great group. Aselia wanted no more and no less for her life, or so she thought. During a field trip in school, the group that they were in was sent to the airship docks, to ride on one of Stalliongrad's famous airships. Under that azure blue sky, the sun shined brightly and it was there with her closest friends by her side, Aselia felt so free, and so alive. Aselia didn't know what she wanted to be when she grew up, as a blank flank she had so many possibilities that her head was spinning. It wasn't until her brother, Yuri, had gotten sick that she learned what she wanted to do. Yuri had caught a dreadful cold, and one day her parents had left to go buy more medicine. Yuri began to cough up a storm, and Aselia went to go see if she could find anymore medicine. She couldn't but if she couldn't find any medicine, she'll just make some! She found a few vials, a book detailing how to make the brew, and the ingredients the book called for. She pulled, mixed, stired, and boiled the liquid until it was finished. She gave it to Yuri, who reported feeling much better afterwards. Both Aselia's face and Flank shined as she had just gained her Cutie Mark, a purple potion, symbolizing her love for potion making. As Aselia grew older, she had to part ways with her friends, she had matured and it was time for her to think about college. Aselia found a school in Las Pegasus that accepted her and she went there. She made good friends, wrote decent college papers, and even got a job as an assistant to a scientist. Yet...why was it she felt so empty? It didn't make any sense to her, she had what seemed like everything she could have wanted. Then she got a letter from Stalliongrad, it was from her mother, just checking up on her but there was photo on the inside. The photo was from that Field Trip from what seemed like so many years ago. Her, Melody, Thunder, and the rest of her class was standing on the airship they were on. Aselia's face lit up at the sight of the photo and it was there she figured out what was missing. She wanted to work near that beauteous sky. Aselia had packed up her home, and made a B-line back to Stalliongrad. She was filled to the brim with hope and excitement that she couldn't contain herself. She went to Stalliongrad and after some talking and visiting with her parents, Aselia went to look for an opening for an alchemist however she couldn't find anypony who would take her. She stayed at her parents house that night, and the next morning there was a vistor. A griffin by the name of Balador who had heard of her and asked to see her skills. Aselia had made a light-weight potion and Balador drank it. After testing it's effects, and a rather odd interview (At least that's what Aselia would have called it) Balador offered her a spot in the Rosalia Brigade. After thinking it over, Aselia came to the conclusion that she would be helping the greater good and accepted the position. Character Summery: Aselia views herself as very intelligent mare, and as such will try to use her brain, potions, and other tools at her disposal to overcome obstacles placed ahead of her. Aselia will break the law though would prefer other methods to going about business. She views battles in the same sense, she has no problem with combat but would prefer diplomatic ways. She hates people who show-off a lot and does not care for those who are seen by her as a 'pride monster'. Aselia is very trusting of her potions and spells, more so than most ponies, and as such will not trust new ponies very often. She isn't the strongest mare in the world nor is she the toughest, but she is smart and quick as whip. Aselia normally will show her curious, angry, and calm sides, instead of other emotions. If someone calls her a witch or anything of the like that is negative, that pony will see the full fury of her anger. From a social stand-point, Aselia used to be very outgoing, now-a-days though she seems to be interested in research, books, and adventure more than the company of others. She loves to read and make potions, and loves the sound of glasses clanking together under the work of science. If one happens to befriend Aselia though, she will defend you to the end. Despite this social awkwardness she has, Aselia cares deeply for the ponies who have befriended her. She is more than willing to help them through their trials and their tribulations, though maybe after she finishes this last brew. "There are rules to Alchemy, I can't just make something out of thin air!"

No you didn't miss type, it's just an adult pony without a cutie mark is rare. I've never seen a blank OC.

Twilight sparkle is actually a recolour of lauren faust's sister's babysitter's dog's bone's child who had a freak accident and became a human that was mutated into you friendly neighborhood batman, then adopted three children who either died, became a computer, or became a gang leader of the pie hunt. She goes around hacking computers and making them say crazy things like jhfioapjfiunvinafogauifiupasnfiuaenifucnsdauifcnhasdjodfjadsuijfiusdankopsdfopjdsaklfnbksda;lfnkoasdfmnianfiuopdanmfioasmdifovsjdaiupfnasdp that seem like you smashed your head into the keyboard when you really didn't and then you grow a pair of wings and fly away as you hold onto your computer for dear life, then you drop into a lovely cafe only to fall in love with the most beautiful cup coffee then you get married to it and have kids with it only to have the marriage end in divorce because you cheated on it with another cup of coffee from work and then you wonder the meaning of life and join the brony fandom. Afterwards you end up going to brony con where 200 brony's brohoof at the same time and open a portal to equestria and you in there and it turns out your twilight sparkle and you've been a pony the entire time, so you live out the rest of your life with a pet dragon and everyone else ships you with some of the most random characters of all time and so you get really annoyed and grow another pair of wings so they can focus on someone else like rarity and then you meet a nice mare named lyra who loves humans and she and you get married and grow old together and then you'll end up on your death bed and fall asleep only to wake up and find out your just a cupcake...or are you?