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  1. Ooh, if this is still open, would you mind drawing Sparkle Fire for me? If possible have him doing something with fireworks. Other than that I leave complete creative control to you Slightly larger reference.
  2. Sparkle jumped and cracked his head when he heard the lunch bell ring, he winced and almost fell from the ladder he was working from. His stomach was growling, so he decided to put down his paint brush for now. He'd been working on the set for the upcoming school performance for weeks now, and he did not intend on working through lunch again. He rubbed his head as he climbed carefully down from his position. "I hope there's something good for lunch today" he muttered to himself whilst walking from the gym. Sparkle soon found himself in the food court, among the mess of pupils he quickly identified his choice of table, the dramas, they were hard to miss with their dazzling attire and flamboyant attitudes. He silently grabbed a tray and sighed when he found that yet again, there was nothing palatable on the menu. He picked up some juice and a fruit salad to keep him going and made his way over to the table he'd chosen. There wasn't really a place for him, but he found a vacant seat and perched himself there, next to a grey student he recognized from his forays into the gymnasium when rehearsals were on. He decided to speak to him for once, too many lunch times had passed with him just waiting for the clique to speak to him, if it wasn't going to happen naturally, he'd make it happen. Sparkle put on his friendliest face and spoke in his most confident voice. "Hi, I don't think we've met, but I've seen you around, I'm Sparkle Fire."
  3. I'd like to register Sparkle Fire if it's not too much trouble http://www.canterlot...y-sparkle-fire/ In WoE, he makes fireworks, but with a bit of tweaking, here's a more Canterlot High Appropriate character without changing his main points. Drama/Artsy:Is part of the set design team for the drama studio. Artist in general, admires the actors and wishes he was one himself. Hope that's fine.
  4. Hi there, Housin, you already know me as Sparkle. I'm gonna offer some suggestions as to what could help refine your app a little bit, now bear in mind, I'm not an RP helper or anything like that, so take my suggestions with a pinch of salt. But you asked me to go into detail, and so I shall. First issue is this, i'd suggest expanding this if you're going to roll with it, what sparked him to help her like that, what kind of operation costs 10 million bits. etc. Just a little Nitpick, I don't think these sound like very "pony" names. You're not limited to simply describing their jobs through their names, ponies aren't psychic, so they don't know what their kids are gonna be when they grow up Other than that, I think your Cutie Mark Section needs to be a little bit less fluffy and more comprehensive, explain how he actually got his cutie mark, In my opinion, I think it would be better if you developed it a little instead of having it just come from a spontaneous burst of magic, Cutie marks are supposed to be a marker of self discovery as well as your talent. As for your character summary, I would follow Lux's advice, characterize him a little better, point out what defines him and why. Hope I helped. You seem to be on the right track. And don't forget, Free For All is always an option.
  5. From the album: Requests

    "Born amidst Salt and Smoke? Is he a ham?" So I decided to ponify a scene from Game of Thrones, Stannis and Renly "negotiating" I opted for the book description of Renly because i was unimpressed by the actor, anyways, just a fun little project.
  6. Of course, I'll get on it as soon as I can, along with the others. For all those I've delayed, I do apologize, I've been tied up dogsitting for my sister, and it hasn't been convenient to do anything recently. I'll try my best to get things turned around.
  7. Happy Summer Sun Celebration everypony!

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    2. Dizcord

      Dizcord

      I'm going to a barbeque

    3. Shockblast

      Shockblast

      You too! Hope mosquitoes don't bite you! I got quite a lot :( kinda itchy

    4. Dizcord

      Dizcord

      And now me and my family are hosting a barbeque after warning the neighbors about my dad calling me Kane and my brother Abel. Well he said it was a warning or a invitation.

  8. Ooh, I'm really liking this idea. You've got yourself a reader :3
  9. Welcome to this wonderful corner of the internet, I hope you enjoy your stay
  10. I AM FINALLY FREE OF EXAMS :D. Now let's catch up on everything I've had to put on hold.

  11. Sparkle debated stopping for the pony's tea party, and eventually came to the conclusion that it would be rude to decline, especially if he could show him a way out of the forest, besides, his request wasn't for another couple of days, and since this was the everfree, he couldn't be more than half a day away from Ponyville. "Um..Sure I guess, where is your tea party being held?" He asked.
  12. "Where is that blasted town" Grumbled Sparkle Fire as he lazily walked along the road that was supposed to be leading him into Ponyville, he'd never visited the small provincial town before, and so was at a loss when a request for a firework display in Ponyville appeared in his mail last week. He'd packed some of his generic supplies and headed along the road that he thought would lead him to his destination, but by now he had to accept the fact, he was lost. The road had narrowed to a dirt path, and a thick forest was present on both sides of him, there was an ominous feel to them, the plants were overgrown and despite it being the middle of the day, the clearings visible from the path looked pitch black. He'd considered giving up hope and turning around until he saw a strange pony stroll out of the dense wood up ahead of him. "Hello!" Sparkle called out. "Do you have any idea where we are?. or how I can get to Ponyville from here?"
  13. Jane certainly is a busy pone.
  14. From the album: Requests

    More like a request for myself :3 Celly P is awesome, so I decided to do a quick sketch, then decided on doing a quick-ish colour. I think it turned out well, Didn't use a scanner on the sketch though, so the picture has shadow, but ah well.
  15. Even though it might be a little out of his means, Sparkle Fire will be attending, this looks like it's going to be fun, especially since Sparkle Isn't terribly well versed in ettiquette and enjoys a good mystery:3 I guess he could have won the tickets as a prize or something
  16. SparkleFire

    Trixie

    From the album: Requests

    Okay, so not exactly a request, but an old Sketch of Trixie I had laying around.
  17. Thankfully, it was still morning when Sparkle Fire touched down in Cloudsdale, it had been a long flight from his home in Manehattan, but when he'd heard about the predicament the weather team was in and the request for any able Pegasi, he jumped at the chance. Despite not going to Flight School, Sparkle still had pride in his Pegasus heritage and felt it was dutiful for him to aid them any way he could. It had been a long time since he'd visited Cloudsdale, but he still knew all the sights, and of course, the Weather Factory was among the most recognizable. Sparkle had seen the bulletin in the Manehattan express and thought it would be interesting to try his hoof at rainbow making, he was good with colours after all. He was shocked to find Princess Luna addressing everypony when he arrived at the factory, the presence of a Princess in Cloudsdale made him worry that this was more serious than he initially thought. Her speech roused him however, and he was soon eager to get started on his work. He didn't quite know the ins and outs of the factory, but he was sure he'd pick them up once he met his instructor. He quickly found himself some protective clothing, a hardhat and white coat, as he looked around he gazed into the gathering of amassed ponies to see if there was anypony he recognized, he hadn't expected many ponies to turn up from Manehattan, but he recognized a few. He was directed towards a smaller group, the rest of the Prism-Mixing volunteers he assumed. They were paying attention to a strange green Pegasus stood before the group, Professor Clyde Krashkop is what he called himself. Sparkle couldn't help feeling a little bit advantaged as the eccentric pony spoke about colour mixing, but it was true that he didn't know any of the specific processes involved. He just hoped that he hadn't bitten off more than he could chew.
  18. I agree wholeheartedly on The Passion and Avatar, but man, comedies like Spaceballs and Hotshots get me every time, I love that kind of goofy humour. As for one I think that you should see once but probably won't be able to sit through a second time is Donnie Darko, I loved the movie when I first saw it, and the message of it was pretty powerful, but the second time I tried to watch it, it didn't have the same effect. Another one I'd say would probably be Watchmen, for those who hadn't read the graphic novel it was a decent watch but It got old really quick. For the opposite effect though, District 9. I've seen that 7 times since it was released, and I don't know why.
  19. I think it was either Pokemon Yellow or Blue, I loved those games. I still have my gameboy colour. That was before I got my Dreamcast and OG Playstation. I think when I got those the first game I played would have been Sonic Adventures and Spyro : Gateway to Glimmer. Both awesome games.
  20. I forgot about The Host, It wasn't the first foreign film I saw, but it's certainly one of the best, It manages to be satirical whilst getting actual emotions across. Plus that monster design is really cool.
  21. I loved Pan's Labyrinth, the storytelling was great, Del Toro always does a brilliant Job, have you seen his other films? I can't wait for Pacific Rim This is all i needed to take away from Labyrinth http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1xAAGh-3sw0
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