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  1. NeoExlucky
    WARNING: I'm going to have to say that this video is NSFW, because I'm not sure if it is. I say something that means Manure and starts with a C. I don't find that as a curse word and now that Canterlot is in america, I don't know anything anymore...
    Anywho, the video.
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2j0Ri7KueFQ&feature=youtu.be
    Happy Anniversary, Me!
  2. NeoExlucky
    So then...we're just gonna ignore the absence and get right to the review!
    Dusk's Dawn is an interesting title that has received it's fair share of reviews, most of which being bad. While observing and taking notes on the video, I began to realize that the fan product wasn't as bad as Snowdrop, in fact I don't know what my opinion on Dusk's Dawn is. Don't get me wrong, when it does something wrong, it's really, really bad, but not everything is bad and some of the things that it does, I have to give it credit for. The title is certainly ambitious and I praise it for being so bold as to go outside the box, but it does have it's problems...
    So let's just get this out of the way, the voice acting in this is terrible. There are some voices that aren't that bad, but there isn't anything too good in this. There was a Pegasus with an accent in the video who I never understood, some of the voices seem like their reading off of the script, and I swear there is a line that just uses google translate's bot as a voice. I never really liked any of the voices, and most of which were annoying. I understand that you might not be able to get people like Elliemonty, but I know that lines can be read and acted better than that, and I can say that from experience.
    Moving on, the animation was...well...not very good. I felt like someone had just copied and pasted the pony creator products into flash and tried to do something, and while that may work for some things, it doesn't work here. There are many times where things seem off and not right, especially when it comes to the wand (I think it was a wand). I have no idea what it really is, and that's a problem. It looks somewhat like a sonic screwdriver actually, but that doesn't make any sense.
    Now let's talk about what I can appreciate here. This video isn't afraid to think outside the box. Most animations I see are fairly boring and stay relatively the same. Most include one of the main characters doing something, or include something that feels really slice-of-life ish, and there's nothing wrong with that, but after a while it gets tiring. This however, made me think it was gonna be a good fight. Seeing something like Swing tavi Swing, in a full animation was gonna be good, and I like that it was a little dark, but I was disappointed that there was no actual fight scene. I also like the song in the video, I like the idea and the general beat to it.
    Now we can reflect on this. So what we have here is something that thinks outside of the box, has a decent song, but lacks good animation and voice acting. I personally don't hate it as much as I hate something like Snowdrop or Button's adventures. There are worse things out there, but I wouldn't tell you to show this to someone who hadn't seen anything in the fandom. There also was the problem at the end where one of the characters stumbles upon the elements of harmony, which kinda bugged me, but the series won't continute, so I'm okay with it. I know that's off topic, but I just wanted to bring that up somewhere in this review. Now then, I give Dusk's Dawn a 4/10, it needs a lot of improvement, but the idea isn't half bad and if it got a revival with some decent voice actors and better animation, I'd take another look again.
    I'm sorry that it took so long to get this review out guys, but I just couldn't get motivated to do a review, and I think I actually tried to quit Canterlot at somepoint, but I'm not sure. I'm still here, and you guys are kinda stuck with me for a while now, so good luck with that.
    Anyway, I'll see you guys at some point later, with the next review in the Hatred marathon, which may or may not be a fanfic...we'll see...
    This has been Neo Review, thanks for reading, take care, and have a good night.
  3. NeoExlucky
    I've been waiting to announce this for the longest time. It is with deepest apologies and sincerest regret that I announce that I will no longer be reviewing episodes of My little pony Friendship is magic. Now this doesn't mean that this blog is going to be thrown into the garbage can, far from it, in fact there's going to be a lot more of it around!
    Something that I really enjoyed, was reviewing turnabout storm, and I never felt anything like it when I reviewed the official episodes. However, to try and re-capture this moment, I will now begin reviewing fan-content. This will require a bit off tweaking with my normal way of reviewing things, but all in all, I will still be reviewing. So expect a review of some type of fan-content this friday, or next week. I'll review anything, except for fanfics, which I may do at a later date. I can't wait to get started!
  4. NeoExlucky

    MLP season 4 episode 3

    By NeoExlucky,

    (Warning: Spoilers!)
    Star Spiders, and hall of hooves, and an organ outside, oh my! Castle Mane-ia was certainly a very good episode. Not only did it follow up on what happened during the season premiere, instead of ignoring it, it already gets a few brownie points! Referencing past episodes won't just make an episode good though, there were a lot of other good things in the episode that I really adored, and thus I will begin the reviewing process.
    So one thing I like is the story and characters. Every character is going to the castle because of something that greatly is related to their personality. Since these stories differ from one another I'm going to just give a summery for why everypony is going.
    Twilight is researching about the chest they found in the season premiere. she gets a letter from Celestia saying that there might be a book about it in the castle of the two sisters. She takes Spike and together they go on an adventure!
    Rainbow Dash and Applejack are competing to be the most daring pony. Which could be a reference to daring don't. (Season 4 Episode 4!) They go into the castle and play the "First one to leave loses" game. Of course we know how this turns out, with hilarity ensuing.
    Rarity is going because she got a 'tip' that there are tapestries that she wants to restore in there. She tells Fluttershy that it's important so she comes along to, with Angel the bunny, who doesn't act like a complete brat in this episode. Angel goes missing during the events and that's the reason they are prowling around the castle, after they've been scared enough to leave. (Or in Rarity's case, annoyed enough.)
    I enjoy the different stories and how they all connect. Except for Angel, everypony acts like they should so far. Though it bugs me how Twilight got good at flying already, but I guess she learned during the season 4 premiere...I guess. Oh, and Pinkie Pie? Well...eh. I was kind of hoping for somepony else but I'm okay that she was who she was.
    The design of the castle is amazing, I love the decor and the atmosphere of the place. It really reminded me of Twilight's terror time, back in the Nightmare Night 2013 event. Then I got depressed because I remembered that I got hit with a fish during that RP. I will never let that die, Bellosh!
    There wasn't actually anything that bad in the episode, granted maybe Twilight could have found something about the lock, to hint at something in the future, but hey; I asked for subtlety in my review of the first two episodes, guess I finally got it.
    Also something that I'm not particularly enthralled about; the mane 6 are going to keep a journal! I assume that this means our 'dear princess Celesta,' letters are going to be replaced with ''dear diary' entries. That's good, I guess. I never really had an opinion on the letters, but it does teach kids things, so It's good. Sometimes my little sister will just recite them randomly which is adorable.
    I do have a few questions about the episode though. Since I don't have anything bad to say about it, it did leave us with a few questions. So let's make a list!

    Who was the hooded pony we saw in the end?
    Will the elements of harmony/chest of harmony be mentioned more?
    Twilight lives in Ponyville, yes? For a while, I thought she lived in the Canterlot castle.
    Wouldn't Celestia know about the book if it was in there? If it mentioned the elements of harmony, wouldn't it be best to take it? Part of the letter that Spike received doesn't feel quite right to me. I mean she could have forgot about it, or maybe she hasn't read all the books in there yet. I don't know, it just feels off for me.
    Could this mean that there's going to be a season arc?

    I'm sure there will be more questions to come. Anyway, the quality of this episode was amazing. I'm glad I got to see it, and I'm glad that things have gotten this could. If the quality of this season stays like this, I'll be very impressed. It may become my favorite season so far. It's a fine episode, one that I can't give a bad report on, and it anything that isn't good, is good enough for me. So guys, I give this episode my reviewer rating of 8.5 dismembered hooves out of 10! No seriously though, does anyone else find it creepy that there are severed pony legs mounted on the walls? This has been Neo Reviews, thanks for reading!
  5. NeoExlucky
    With 8 days left until season 4, I've decided to get back to work and at least try to finish season 1 in my reviews. We're going by a new system now, which is the old one. If you've read my review of Turnabout Storm, it's gonna be like that, except not as emotional. So let's get on with the show!
    Fun fact: Over the barrel is the first episode that I watched on Television, it was the 11th episode I watched. Does that mean I'm going to go easy on it? No. Let's be honest here, Over the Barrel isn't the best episode of all time. It has it's charms but it over stays in welcome and there isn't enough in this episode for me to enjoy. While I love the inclusion of the buffalo, and appleloosa, there are also things that I do despise about the episode.
    Giving us a new location of appleloosa is pretty good. I love the old western feel that this episode pulls off, and I don't know if it could have done the same thing in a location of, say; ponyville. It reminds of older TV shows that always had that one episode that took place in the wild west, where all the characters were different and didn't know each other, but they were still the same characters that they were in the normal episode.
    The 'weapons' that the ponies of appleloosa used were quite humorous, I loved the apple pie throwing, it really reminded me of some older shows, but it also reminded me of clowns...I don't like clowns.
    One thing I don't like is the story. The story of this all isn't very likable for me, it's not something I find myself watching with bated breath. I find it quite boring, and I would of liked it to have gone in other directions then the ones it did. Pinkie's share song helped with the story, but it just wasn't enough.
    I don't like braeburn. I know a lot of people really like him as a side character, and a lot of people put him in some of the grossest ships I know. (Braemac and Appleburn.) Personally I find him very un likable and down right annoying at times. I will give him the 'mild west dances" joke though. I found that very funny.
    Overall this episode is decent, at best. It has it's charming moments but overall I don't think it does anything. It makes my do-not-watch list and it's overall one of the worst episodes I've watched in season 1. That's not bad, mind you, the worst episode of mlp is in season 2, and there aren't many bad episodes in season 1. It still is one of my least favorite episodes though, and with all of this in mind, I give Over a Barrel, my reviewer rating of a 6/10. This has been Neo Reviews, thanks for reading.
  6. NeoExlucky
    This...this was amazing. I can't tell you how much I love turnabout storm. Unlike most fan-made content I've seen, Turnabout storm just got better and better. I was puzzled at the start, and tried to figure everything out all the way through to the end. I laughed, and I cried. Even now I'm crying as I write this review out to you guys. You know I've gone through some pretty bad times recently, with stuff IRL, things on the Wiki I frequent, and few other things I'd like to keep private, I haven't had something make me feel this better in a long time. Turnabout Storm is, out all of my two years of going through this fandom, my favorite fan project of all time. I think I have good understanding of fan made projects now, and it's thanks to this that I have that. I think it's no surprise that I give this my one and only 10/10 on this quest to review things. However I want to open a bit more, and after all my job as a reviewer is to discuss my opinions on the subject at hand, isn't it? So let's delve deeper into this master piece.
    Most cross-overs I've seen aren't that good. No matter what fandoms are crossed, how they're written, or even who worked on them, I've seen some pretty bad stuff. Sometimes I think that some things could cross with MLP easily but never in all my life did I think that phoenix wright could work like this. I was wrong. The story was enchanting, it drew my in and I couldn't stop watching. I began when part two had been out for quite some time and waited till just not when I finished part five. The episodes never lost their quality and I think they just increased as they moved through the episodes. You can tell that a lot of work and dedication was put into this series. From the voice acting, to the story telling, to the writing. I wouldn't change a thing. No the characters don't sound like their TV counterparts but is that really something we need? The music was put in the right places, the tone was set very clearly and affected me as I watched it. Including cheering loudly when Phoenix said objection. Everything was done right and I love how this turned out.
    The artwork did change while they went through the series. At first it was all official art but they also used their own drawings of Phoenix and the judge later down the road, they also did they own art for different scenes in the last two parts. One thing I want to talk about is the cliche here. The story of Trixie's redemption has been the plot of many fanfics and other fan projects. Not only her but another character's redemption story is also brought up in this series and is a classic story for fanfics I've read. Normally I don't ever think of these as good but this series, I can't express how they managed to do these things right. The stories that are used here may be cliche and over-used, but this series somehow makes it not all it appears. There is more to it than that. The characters of Trixie and the other one do have feelings, what is it like for them to go through this? Yes we see how the good guys see it but maybe Trixie isn't a bad guy. Maybe she's just gone through some rough times. This series really made me feel for the characters, for Twilight, for Phoenix, for Trixie, for Rainbow, almost every character made me feel something for them. Even characters with an affinity for hands.
    I don't know how much more I can tell without sounding like a prancing fan boy. In fact this review probably already makes me seem like that right now, but you know what? This series deserves these praises. The entire thing blew my mind. The suspense, the awe, the sadness, the humor, all of it was like it was coming out of a real Phoenix Wright game, and maybe that's why I like it so much. Like I said at the begging, this series gets my rating of a 10/10.
    I highly recommend the project to any one here. If your a fan of Phoenix Wright, you'll love this. If not, you might still love it. I'm going to post the link to the videos down below but do be cautious. It's a 7+ hour series. I'm also going to mark it as NSFW since the series does have some evidence that is hinted at to be NSFW but they never show you anything except a black picture. I imagine that it's Rainbow Dash biting her hooves but I don't know for sure.

    Well then, this is NeoExlucky, Reviewer of ponies, signing off. Have a great evening, everypony.
  7. NeoExlucky
    Who's!? I demand to know exactly who was responsible for this episode!
    The moral of this story is probably one of the best things anyone could learn...kind of.
    Let me explain when we get to the end.
    The story is that Pinkie pie is having random feelings, twitches, etc that Twilight can't understand and hunts for the truth to the point where she evolves again. That's pretty much it without spoiling anything. How do I like it? Well...I don't. I think this story is kind of odd as we randomly end up in areas with no type of way of knowing where it really is. As far as I know froggy bottom swamp is in the everfree forest. Now I find my dis-interest of this episode to be disappointing as the continuity with previous episodes is awesome and along with derpy and pokemon, I should have liked the story but it just doesn't do that with me.
    Animation was gorgeous, from pokemon, to twitches. to animals, and everything else. (Lab room equipment.) The animation was spot on.
    While all the characters seem to act true to themselves, I think Twilight might be different. I feel like Twilight should have been more open- minded but isn't and that makes me feel odd. Twilight's been really open-minded before and after so why isn't she in this one? Though, maybe I'm just going crazy and this is Twilight.
    The voice acting of Tara was extremely likable. Especially when Twilight makes all her annoyed comments and when she's having her break down: "That's not the dosy?"
    Now we have the lines and what can I say? The conversations that go on are either hilarious or entertaining. There really isn't a line I hate.
    So one other thing before I end it. Dat. Ending.
    All right so here's the deal, I hate the lesson learned, plain and simple. As a christian I feel that I should share my religion with those who want to listen, not those who don't want to. If you want to learn about the bible or anything, I'll help you, if not, cool let's go play some video games. The fact that the lesson says to just accept things you can't understand seems like it's yelling at atheists and I disapprove of anyone making fun or hating on any one's religion. (Or lack thereof.) Maybe they were talking about something else but that's the way I interpreted it. I think the lesson would have been better if it was to not question other people's beliefs or if it was to accept your friends even if they believe something you don't. I don't know but this isn't a rant blog. With all of this in mind I give this episode my reviewer rating of C+. Could have been better, could have been worse. Wow I really need to hurry if I want to get to season 3 before season 4 starts...Well this has been Neo: Reviews, thanks for watching!
    But wait! We're not done yet my fellow informationist, I have a proposal. You know what's better than reviewing by yourself? Reviewing with Friends! I'm planning on doing a review with ZigZag, who's a person not on canterlot, sometime in august and I thought, why stop there? So I'm asking for help! If anyone (and I mean anyone...) Wants to help with a review, send your thoughts in on Episode 16 or whatever episode I haven't reviewed that's next if your reading this from the future. Just send it to me and I'll do mine along with it, and you'll officially be a reviewer! (If you haven't reviewed before.) It's easy!
  8. NeoExlucky
    So...the reason I'm not doing my Review is because I need to make sure I'm not biased with it. That's it.
    Anyway so today I went and Auditioned for my show choir at my school and there a three things that make me wonder if it's good or not. Let me explain it below.
    1. He brought up how one of my teachers wrote that they liked me for a teacher evaluation however then he said I had a D in her class. (I don't have a D anymore but still. It's a problem.)
    2. He wrote for my ear accuracy test. (I have no idea what that means.) That I had a 3.5. This confuses me.
    3. Let me explain with a RP conversation. Green is me, Purple is him.
    [colour=#800080]"Sing ba ba ba ba." [/colour]
    [colour=#006400]"Okay, Ba ba ba- ba." [/colour][colour=#000000](Ba- is crescendo.)[/colour]
    [colour=#800080]"You added a bit of decoration to that."[/colour]
    [colour=#006400]"Is that a good thing?"[/colour]
    [colour=#800080]"No it is not."[/colour]
    [colour=#000000]So yeah, those may or may not have killed me. Either way I'll post what happened next week. Flutteryay.com[/colour]
  9. NeoExlucky

    Mlp season 1 Ep 4

    By NeoExlucky,

    Huh it's been awhile...alright let's get to it.
    (Warning short review!)
    So Applebuck season...ugh. This episode really feels like a filler to me. Already I have started to dislike her but this episode made me dislike her more. First of all, Applejack's claim of the loyalist of friends...Isn't that Dashie? I mean that's why Rainbow has the element of loyalty and Applejack has Honesty, right? Anyway the episode was really too bland for my taste. It only really told us about Applejack and how she can bite off more than she can chew. The Characters have moments where they don't really act like themselves like when Applejack is baking and Pinkie Pie isn't watching her at all. The humor here wasn't really all that good except when applejack tries to do the catapult with Rainbow. That scene kills me everytime. Further more, the writing here wasn't all that good and this may be my least favorite episode. If you wanted somepone to watch Mlp tell them to skip this episode because honestly this really does nothing to further any true character development. While the concept of the episode was good I think it might of just been the execution that threw it off. Also Big mac talking the way he does in the beginning is really weird to watch now. A lot of people actually like this episode which really surprises me. If anyone can tell me why in the comments below that would be really helpful considering I've rewatched the episode several times and so far I've still go the same reaction to everything. My last thing I do want to say as this review is kind of short is why more Unicorns aren't harvesting fruit. I mean did you see Twilight near the ending, she got the fruit from like ten trees at once. Overall the story was good, The writing was mediocre, Character development was alright for some and kind of bad for others and The humor here really isn't all that good, except for the falling...that's funny. This has been Neo reviews, thanks for Reading!
  10. NeoExlucky
    (Warning: Spoilers for the episode.)
    THEY'RE THROWING PANDAS AT US, THIS SEASON! First we have looks in the past, Discord showing up, the castle of the two sisters, and now we get a Daring Do episode! Oh my Luna, this season is amazing so far. As I've said before this season has a lot of momentum going for it, and this episode just carries it on. It also introduces a brand new race! The...cat...things...of egypt...I don't know. I just find them interesting. Not to mention that we got a very interesting action episode that wasn't a season finale or season premiere. Not to mention we got our first diary entry from Rainbow Dash. So then, let's analyze the episode.
    We begin the episode with Rainbow Dash fanning over the next Daring Do book being published. When she walks in on the rest of the mane 6 having a random holiday party...or something. Anyways, when Rainbow is told that the next book has been delayed for two more months, she flips her hooves and decides to proclaim to Twilight that she is the biggest Daring Do fan. Twilight and her get into a bit of a nerd fight and then they decide to head towards A.K yearling's house. When they arrive they find a giant mess, along with A.K yearling who eventually turns out to be Daring Do. This is awesome. The story of the episode is quite interesting and is full of references. Not to mention it gives me a real reason to ship Daring Do X Rainbow Dash.
    The episode gives us some new information on a new species of Equestria. Although, it looks like we only really got to see one. I'm not quite sure what his race was called though, only that he's some kind of alien, cat, pony, thing. I don't know, but he was really cool, and I hope to see more of this species at some time. We also got to see an odd kind of pony tribe that seems to work for the egypt thing, so that was pretty cool as well.
    A.K yearling's pretty cool character. She lives in what I assume is Whitetail woods, but I don't know for sure. We learn that she is Daring Do, and she's quite the thinker. She's rich and famous, she's a reference to one of my favorite author's of all time, and she has a great sense of fashion. Plus she has her whip, and her whip is awesome.

    (I secretly hope that whoever plays her does this.)
    Alright, so this episode was pretty good. It's good to the point where I don't know what exactly to talk about in this review. So it's kind of short. However the episode does have a few problems here or there, but it's nothing I will put against it, since most of them are so small. The animation was pretty good, as were the characters, story, and fan service, but it everything else was pretty normal. That being said, it still does a very good job of keeping season 4 as one of the best seasons yet. I look forward to next saturday, for the next episode. With everything in mind, this episode gets my reviewer rating of 8 whip cracks out of ten. Very well done. This has been Neo reviews, thanks for reading.
  11. NeoExlucky
    This episode was great to start in the first few episodes. Mainly because the grand galloping gala was the season finale here. The episode in general was okay, though it did have a few problems here and there. Before we get on with this though I would like to point out the episode came out on April the 21st. Why does that matter? When spike reads the letter for the gala it says that it will happen on the 21st of some date. Just thought I'd share that.
    Okay, so the reasonings. For applejack, the barn looked fine in the first episode and it looks fine in the fourth episode. Why does it need repairs? We don't see the plow until winter wrap and it looks fine there but truly we can't say anything about it's condition at the moment. Granny smith's hip bone...I got nothing. Rainbow dash interrupting the wonderbolts show would probably get her banned from going to any other show...just saying. Pinkie pie wants to party...okay. Rarity wants to meet prince blueblood. While we're here let's talk about that for a second. Who is the mother of blueblood? Can't be luna, and there's no other alicorns at this t-...wait, Cadence? Uh...actually I don't want to think about that...lets move on. Fluttershy wants to see the gardens. So who do I think should have gone? Spike. I like Spike. That's it.
    Also I'd like to point out a Disney princess reference with Fluttershy. She was singing with animals while cleaning. That seems to be a trademark of Disney characters but that's just my opinion. Anyways it should be noted that at this moment the only character I liked was Twilight and Spike. The others seemed well there. I didn't really have an opinion here until this episode. First Pinkie pie and her songs. Giggle at the ghosties was good but both of the songs here are just annoying. I think this was where I started to dislike Pinkie Pie but that'll change in future episodes. Then there's applejack's line here: "Ain't that just like a boy. Can't take the least bit of sentiment." While this line is sexist and doesn't seem to fit here that's not the reason that made me dislike her and this line. It was the beginning of the episode. Applejack has clearly seen spike burp up a letter already so while did she confuse that with his 'just like every other boy' moment. This really makes me wonder about her and it's due to this that I dislike her and that wouldn't change till apple family reunion where I only tolerate her then. The other characters are just there still.
    Overall the idea to the episode was good and I'm pretty sure Celestia was either being a troll here or was wanting to give Twilight a friendship lesson. The idea was good and this episode and art of the dress both show that they are preparing for the grand galloping gala. I'd like to see some more episodes of them preparing for it but that's out of the question now. The episode isn't my favorite though but what that reason is I can't say why. Maybe it's because of how trivial it is or something. I don't know. Anyways the episode is a must watch only because of the season finale and art of the dress. There are a bit of questions here and there but overall this episode is good with me on some days. This has been Neo reviews, Thanks for reading.
  12. NeoExlucky
    Warning: Spoilers
    My little portal is a very charming web crossover series, crossing the worlds of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, and the world of Portal. (No half life jokes please.) Due to it being a series, I'll be starting by reviewing every episode in a pair of two episodes. My Little Portal is done pretty well, with good animation that seems to capture elements from both it's parent's series, and has an interesting protagonist(s) but we're not their yet. The first episode features Cranky donkey and Pinkie Pie in Equestria Laboratories, with Pinkie throwing a party for the activation of the third AI based off of Discord. Suddenly there is a power surge, yet the Discord AI remains online. At first things seem fine, until the Discord AI begins harming everyone in the room, killing Pinkie Pie, and a random scientist stallion. While also knocking Cranky out. Whooves, another scientist, manages to escape and suits up to try and turn the old AI's on. Along the way he meets Rainbow Dash, where the two split up, Rainbow Dash is killed (Or becomes mostly dead) and Whooves is able to turn the other AI's on. Discord is shut down, and Cranky is sent away to continue testing on the moon, or that's what's implied.
    Then we come to the real storyline in the second episode. It is revealed through a letter that Twilight will be going to the moon laboratories along with the rest of her friends that were at the old testing site. It is also revealed that Rainbow Dash is alive, and is being turned into...something, although we clearly see in the intro that she's being turned into a cyborg-like thing. Ten years later Pinkie Pie, who is now a personality core, accidentally re-activates the Discord AI who has now upgraded from Linux to Mac.Twilight is dispatched to find him and the elements of harmony, alongside Pinkie Pie.
    Aright let's get this out of the way, no the voice actors do not sound like the official ones, but just like I have said with Turnabout storm, I don't need perfect matches of the official voice cast to make me happy. With the exception of Cranky, I enjoy every voice in this series, my favorite being Rainbow Dash and Whooves, but I really like Celestia's too.
    The art style is also really good, I enjoy the cross between the two styles we were given, and it really makes me feel like the two worlds are one. If I had to make one complaint, it would be the AI bots from the first episode. They don't look as appealing to me as the ones in episode two, but it's only minor and we don't see the old AI bots for long.
    The storyline is really good too. It's a mash-up between the storyline of portal and the storyline of MLP's first and second episode, with a few tweaks here and there. It somewhat reminds me of Kingdom hearts, where all the worlds have their own storyline, with a hint of kingdom hearts thrown in there. In fact this whole series reminds me of kingdom hearts, they combined two things that you think wouldn't be able to co-exist in the same world together, and yet it somehow turns how amazing.
    And how about that soundtrack? Using the instruments that portal normally uses, with some of the mlp music just makes my ears melt in happy bliss. I can't even describe, just go look up the theme song and here it yourself, it's amazing.
    Now with all this information I have to say, I can't wait for the next episode. We're waiting on episode 5 right now, and I can't wait, I just know it's going to be good. Christian Cerda, I tip my hat to you good sir, for you are a genius. Now I want to say one thing, this series seems to be missing something for me. When we take a look at Turnabout Storm, it was charming, it was complex, and there was a lot of room for character growth. I don't feel this series has achieved that yet. I feel like comparing the both of those series isn't possible, but they both are crossovers including My little Pony, so I will compare them. Comparing Turnabout Storm to My Little Portal is like comparing a stale piece of bread to a piece of fresh pizza. I think something that is missing might be the humor. See, in turnabout storm, there was times for comedy, and times for seriousness, but in My little portal it's all dark all the time, and that's not something I can totally agree with. With all this in mind guys, this game gets my reviewer rating of 7.5/10, needs some work, but I know there's still some room to grow.
    Well, that was an interesting review. Now that that's over with I suppose I should review something else. So join me next week when we delve into the world of Button Mash, it's not gonna be pretty. So Ladies and Gentlemen, you have a wonderful evening, stay safe, and take care.
  13. NeoExlucky
    You know, about two reviews ago I mentioned the fact that the rainbow thread that Rarity got in Rarity takes Manehatten, and now that I've seen this episode, my theory feels to have proven even farther. Not only that, but now I think I understand what the meaning of the objects are, which not only includes the virtue that the mane 6 represents, but also their has to do with their goals as a character. I do more on that later, but for now; let's get to reviewing.
    So there is one thing that I think should be mentioned above all else, this episode is gorgeous. Everything is full of vibrant colors that, while really stand out, are easy on the eyes and add a great sense of the town of rainbow falls. The feeling of of the incoming event that is the Equestria Games, is actually quite nice and I feel kind of excited about it. It reminds me of the grand galloping gala from season 1. We hear about it a lot, but we didn't see it until the season finale. In fact, maybe the equestria games will be the season finale? I don't know, it's just a guess, but I'm sure we'll see it within season 4, or at least season 5.
    Character development is an...interesting subject of this episode. The mane 6 act like they should, and Biceps acts they way I figured he would act, which was quite humorous at times, and I hope we get to see him again. The problem here is the wonderbolts, from what we've seen about them, they just act all over the place. They were pretty cool ponies in grand galloping gala who just seemed to attract a large crowd, then in the wonderbolt academy they were pretty accepting yet firm of their abilities, and now they seem like lying jerks who are still somewhat accepting. I just don't know what's going on with them. I guess maybe they're a bit like rainbow dash, and all three of these episodes are just showing off different parts of their personality, and I could just be being nit picky.
    Now the last thing I want to point out is how amazing the story is. Like Rarity takes Manehatten, this episode has a very good story that really picks at the main characters (in this case; Rainbow Dash.) weakness and strength. This is something that I absolutely love. When a character gets an episode centered around a weakness of theirs, they should improve upon, turning the weakness into a strength or just make it nonexistent all together. It's something we've seen before, but then was always brought back as the weakness in another episode. This episode, just like Rarity takes Manehatten, picks at the worst weakness that the character has, and also tempts the character to fall into that weakness by using their life goal. Rarity wanted to be a fashion star, and Rainbow Dash, wanted to be a wonderbolt. This makes the trial episodes much better than most other episodes in the entire series.
    Now this episode had very few problems. It's an amazingly crafted episode, built with such great character development and fantastic story telling. I think these episodes are just awesome. Everything is done correctly, and this episode is not something to sneeze at. Personally, I don't think it's better than Rarity takes Manehatten, Princess Twilight Sparkle, or the return of harmony, but it does a very good job, and it totally makes it onto my top ten list. I give this episode my reviewer rating of: 9 out of 10. This episode is fantastic. This has been Neo Reviews, thanks for reading, have a good evening, and take care.
  14. NeoExlucky
    (Warning Spoilers!)
    Yay...an apple pie episode. I'm so excited for this...whohoo...actually once you get passed that part, this episode gets much better, so much better. In fact, the momentum from Rarity takes Manehatten is still here. Things are going excellent for the season so far. So then let's begin this episode of Neo reviews!
    So the fact that Pinkie Pie may be an apple family member is actually a good question. I mean when there is a chance that any main character is related to another main character, it gets interesting. Will we ever get conformation about it? I doubt it, but maybe when Inkie Pie shows up at some point, we'll get answers. I'd also like to point out that this episode's plot may have been better if we hadn't already had all the mane six be honorary apple family members, like it was said in super speedy cider squeezy 6000. I know it's not the same thing, but still, they are family members, just not technically.
    I also love the in-fighting between the apples. It's interesting to see everything they fight over, and how they talk to each other.. Besides Applebloom and Applejack, we've never seen the apples in a conversation with one another that many times, so this makes it pretty interesting. We also got to see Golden Delicious, and she's just swell, isn't she? She's a horder, she's a cat lady, she's senile, and just about everything else you could think of. I may need to write an app to play her, she's so cool. No I'm not sarcastic, I love Golden Delicious.
    And how about that song, hm? I loved it in the animatic, and I love it in this episode. My 2nd favorite singing voice is applebloom (Next to Rarity obviously) and this song really does her justice. She sounds amazing in this episode. So far, considering the CMC theme, hearts as strong as horses, babs seed, and any other song in the series that she's in, I think this is my favorite song sung by her. It's a very good song, not my favorite, or even in my top ten, but still it's a pretty good song, and I don't think that it's just something to brush off. It's a very nice episode.
    Now to finish this off, this episode does a very good job at showcasing the relationship between Applejack and Pinkie Pie. Even though it is partially an applejack episode. (Spoiler alert: Applejack's my least favorite character.) Once you get passed that though, you get a very high quality episode with everything looking nice and sounding nice. Speaking of which, did anyone else notice a change in sound quality, I don't know if it's because I watched this episode in HD or not, but everything sounded different, even the theme song. Anyways, the story is nice, the song is awesome, and the relationships and character portrayals are great! This episode gets my Reviewer's rating of an 8/10...wow I've been giving out a lot of 8s this season. I either need to heighten my standards or lower them. Oh well, next review. This has been Neo reviews, thanks for reading, have a good night, and take care.
  15. NeoExlucky

    Mlp season 4 episode 7

    By NeoExlucky,

    *Notices people doing reviews on canterlot.* Oh...I guess I'd better write my review. After all I am the king of reviews! (Only because I had no competition when I first started...)
    So; bats! Not only did this start a brand new meme for the fan base, but now we also have a new "species" that some new RPers might actually try to put in World of Equestria, even though that won't fly...no pun intended. Now I said in my power ponies review that the momentum for season 4 finally stopped, and this episode doesn't exactly bring it back, it's a very good start and this episode isn't bad, but I still don't like it as much as Castle mane-ia. Now lets get down to the nitty gritty.
    Now then the plot in this story was...alright. There are so many character flaws that I can't even get my head around it. I mean this episode pretty much revolves around Fluttershy and Applejack. For anyone who doesn't know; Applejack is my least favorite character. Ever since episode 3 in the series, I have always disliked Applejack. Now in this episode not only did Applejack act incredibly unlike herself, but so did the rest of the mane cast! Fluttershy, despite her friends ability to sway her, should not have used the stare on the bats. She's only used it in dire circumstances, against a cockatrice and Discord. Furthurmore, Rainbow Dash only does this because of the cider, and as much as I like episode callbacks, SHE WOULDN'T HAVE DONE THIS JUST BECAUSE OF CIDER!


    Commencing Rant Mode

    Some element of harmony Rainbow Dash is! Apparently the only thing she really cared about in this episode was the cider! Her character shows no signs of her even really caring about objects over her friends homes. There is no way in hell that Rainbow Dash would do this all because of the cider and not even give two moons about the fact that these bats are going ruin Applejack's farm. While we're on the subject of the rant, why don't we talk about Twilight's spell, hm?
    So what your telling me is that no unicorn has ever performed this spell with another pony around them? Not even a farmer or anything of the like? No, I don't think so. The explanation for flutterbat seems like it was just shoehorned into the plot so they would have a reason for this entire thing. Plus shouldn't the spell leave a warning for this? None of this makes sense!
    Okay Rant's over...now let's talk about everything that's good.
    The song, stop the bats, is amazing. It reminds me of this is halloween, from the nightmare before christmas. I've got it already put into my pony playlist and my working music playlist that I have set up for when write reviews. It's my favorite song, but it is in my top five songs. The song is so nice and the tune is catchy. I also love the animations for it. Like how everyone is dark except for Fluttershy.
    Now let's play the raridash shipping game! In the song Rainbow Dash joins after Rarity decides to voice her opinion, and while that may be for cider, we can also look at Rarity's line when she gets scared while searching for what's still destroying the forest. "I think I'll go check on Rainbow Dash." She says that when she's scared, furthuring the ship. There you go Phil/Rairty/Raridash/Chrysalis/Twicane/Saber/Rainbow Dash.
    Okay, so this episode was quite nice. While the story makes me want to rage quit, I still enjoy a lot of the episode. The song was good, animation was nice, but the story still needs work. So let's end this, ladies gentlemen, this episode get's my Reviewer rating of a 6/10. Needs work, a lot of work, but I'll rewatch it just for the song. This has been Neo Reviews, thanks for reading!
  16. NeoExlucky
    Hah, does anyone else get it? The first episode was where the Mane 6 go back to the old castle was called Castle Mane-ia. I mean that was really nice of them to hint at something, the next time they go back to the castle, makes my heart jump with glee.
    Anyways, we got a really nice episode here. Not only did it reference some of the greatest super heroes of all time, but I actually understood the references the first time I watched it. It took me three time before I got the chocolate rain reference in the season 2 premiere. This episode had references, a new villain, and some nice action. Does it hold up to the rest of the season? Well...no. As much as I like this episode, I just can't say that I would put it in the same boat as the past five episodes. I mean, I knew this was coming. We can't have a season with perfect episodes all around. That's not to say this episode is bad, it's quite enjoyable, but personally I don't think it was as good as Castle mane-ia or Daring Don't.
    Let's not stall anymore, I want to get to the good part. The story was one that I really liked. Having call-backs to Celestia's old castle (Prediction: Twilight's new castle) is always a win for me, makes me smile every time I see something like that. The world of maretropolis is very nice, and while I don't know who some of the ponies are supposed to be, I like all of the power ponies. Our new MANE villain is also very humorous. I got a joker feel from her and it's very nice to see a villain who doesn't have some kind of weird magic. Nope this one's just an earth pony with a weird mane and some science. Although, does anyone else think she sounds like Luna? Oh well, the rest of the story was pretty good...until Fluttershy hulked out. I don't know why but the story just seemed to drop from my approval at that time. She looked ridiculous as a hulk. After that...well that was pretty much the end. Spike gave his lesson learned and then everyone laughed and went back into the world, like they always do.
    The episode left me kind of frustrated with questions. Who sold the comic book? Is this something normal ponies can do, or is there someone behind all this? Normally I enjoy being left with questions, but not in this episode. I feel very frustrated about all this. Sometimes I'd like for simple questions to be answered right at that moment. I understand if there are some questions they don't want to answer for plot points but really? *Sigh* Let's just move on to the next thing...
    Well...there isn't really a next thing to discuss. The rest of the episode was really neutral for me. I don't know if it's because of all the family stuff I went through today or if it's just the episode, but at this moment I feel pretty "meh" about the rest of the episode. There's a lot of promise for Celestia's castle now, and you can tell that there is something going on with a sub plot. I guess you could say this was a good episode for spike, since a lot of people leave spike out of most of the main characters in the series. People even consider Celstia, Luna, and Cadence more important than Spike. While in Equestria they are, I still feel like Spike is a more important character, since he does appear in more episodes than the princesses. I guess I could say those things. Anyways, this episode get's my reviewer rating of 6/10. It's not bad...but it's not all that good. This has been Neo reviews, thanks for reading.
  17. NeoExlucky

    Mlp season 4 episode 5

    By NeoExlucky,

    Warning: Spoilers
    I'M DONE! I'M SO DONE! HOW THE...I DON'T EVEN...WHAT JUST...WHAT! This episode is probably my favorite Cutie Mark Crusader episode so far, and why for the love of Luna, did Scootaloo not get her cutie mark? Oh right...hasbro. Well anyways, let's actually get to the review!
    So the story of Scootaloo getting picked on because of her wings was really ingenious. It's basically a disability story that some kids will have to deal with. It's only made even better because I remember getting picked on for being dyslexic and not being able to read or write like anyone else. I'm sure that almost anyone can relate to this story and it's because of this that the whole episode can be looked at so much better. You really feel for scootaloo as she throws away everything that she was good at.
    Also this is throwback to the episode, games ponies play, which actually...was not a good episode of season 3, at least compared to this. We get to see Mrs. harshwinny again and that's pretty good. I do wonder about Rainbow Dash though. She says that she was the flag carrier for the cloudsdale games but didn't she say in games ponies play that cloudsdale didn't get to host the games? That was kind of the whole drive of Rainbow Dash in the episode. I mean maybe they got to hold it at a later time but...it just doesn't make sense. It takes away from Rainbow's drive in the episode.
    The song, hearts like horses is also really good, and really meaningful. It really seems like a better version of the old CMC theme song, which pretty much talked about their despair. However, this one is much more about their friendship and the strength they have together. They song is much better than most of the other CMC songs and I will always keep it in my favorites playlist.
    Overall this episode does not disappoint. Momentum for season 4 is flowing strong, and this episode keeps up with it. I love the episode. This was definetly needed for Scootaloo's character, and I'm so glad they did this. Now if only she could realize that HER CUTIE MARK IS FOR HER SCOOTER AND NOTHING ELSE! Anyways it's time for that grand old number that everyone likes so much, for whatever reason. This episode gets my reviewer rating of 9 out of 10! Amazing episode, amazing character development, but I'm confused a bit about what Rainbow said. This has been Neo Reviews, thanks for reading.
  18. NeoExlucky
    Can I skip swarm of the century? Please? No...Fine.
    This may be my least favorite episode. Let's get this over with as I love the episodes after this.
    This episode is overall terrible as none of the characters act like they really are. This includes Zecora and Celestia, who are only in it for a few seconds. The writing is terrible. The exploration does nothing and NO ONE REMEMBERS THE LESSON! The only thing that this episode really has going for it is the animation of the parasprites and the fact that we use this term for our trolls now. Even then, this is an episode where nothing could save it. Now let's go to the details.
    Okay animation of the episode is kind of nice. The parasprites are interesting and do look great with everything they do. When the characters round them all up it does look good as well but everything else feels terribly wrong. The writing here doesn't seem all that good and there is nothing memorable about it. The only lines that I like were Zecora's and that's because she is Equestria's Dr.Suess! There is nothing in the writing department that really adds to the case of it being good. Some of the lines said remind me this is a show for little girls, which so far only one line reminded me of that and that was back in ticket master. The lesson here was to understand a friend even if you don't understand them. You know when Twilight forgot this lesson? Feeling pinkie keen, which only happens 4 episodes from now! Then there are the way the characters act. First, so Fluttershy now has an animal she has never heard of? Even though she knows about every animal but the parasprite? What are they new or something? Further more if these things can cause so much damage wouldn't they have been written down in a book where Twilight would read about them? The fact that neither of the two know about them is really terrible as this is just a huge contradiction. Then we also have other characters like Celestia and Zecora. So if your watching the episode for the first time like I was then the only thing would be Zecora saying 'Have you gone mad?' as Zecora seems to never be rude. Even in Bridle gossip when the other ponies are calling her evil and an enchantress. However if your watching this after you have seen the rest of the series then that fact that zecora has no cure seems rather odd as she seems to know the cure for everything. Plus if Pinkie knew a cure that obscure wouldn't Zecora? Then we have Celestia who does nothing the whole time. The fact that she seems completely oblivious to the crisis at hand is ridicules. Now I do have an explanation to this and that is she is just trolling. She may have just said that there was a problem in another city may just be her saying 'I know what you did.' but I digress. Also if Twilight was having such a hard time fixing it, wouldn't Celestia save her like she did in Lesson Zero? Now like I said before are the parasprites new? The reason I think not is because Pinkie Pie knows as soon as she sees them how to fix it. The fact that no one listens to pinkie is kind of idiotic in itself but maybe that's because they haven't LEARN THE LESSON TWICE! Anyway I give the episode a D as the taste is terrible, the writing isn't good, and there are characters even as side characters who don't act like they should. This has been Neo Reviews, thanks for Reading.
  19. NeoExlucky
    (Waring you are about to read a post written by the pony; Time Spinner. This is important! XD)
    Huh it's been a while. Sorry guys, Neo's been wanting my help with the reviews and then we got sidetracked into another Dimension and it was just really weird. Anyways I'm here to talk about Equestria girls. Now what do I think might happen here? Well I think it might be a good thing. Let me explain.
    Equestria girls is basically the girls as humans in an earth-like or maybe even actual earth setting. Now this could go a multitude of ways. It could be just the characters if Equestria was full of humans, or it could be the mane 6 get sent to earth. (My Favorite being the latter.) If it is the second one this could be a very good show and indeed might be an addition to bronies. However even if the first option is chosen it could still be really good. Imagine Lyra as a human 0.0. This might be a good show. The show itself might be something that the brony community could survive on if the real show ever dies. (Hopefully it doesn't or I die too then. D:) I personally would like to see the girls come join the fun here on earth as I think it could be really fun. While it does seem to have the look of some type of fanfic or perhaps something of that sort I've read really good fanfics before. (Of course none of the good ones were written by Neo.) I know Neo and I are going to give it a chance as it might work upon building the characters a bit more than the main show does. The characters Kind of look cool and maybe the picture used as the Entry image is just beta for other things. I have seen the other picture and I noticed Unicorns don't have horns but the pegasi and alicorn have wings. This is a bit interesting but I wonder if they will have either hide the wings or if all humans have wings in this series. The show will be interesting and I would recommend you to watch the first episode. I mean all of you watched a show made for little girls and now you're all here. (This goes for you too Neo!)
    Anyway Let me check the internet for anything I have missed. Let's see friendship is witchcraft, marshal lee, legend of korra, and...DOUBLE RAINBOOM! Sorry I have to go.


    Sincerely,



    Time Spinner

  20. NeoExlucky
    This episode is one I really enjoy. The relationship between Trixie and the mane 6- Oh I'm sorry I mean Dashie, Rarity, applejack, and Twilight. Pinkie's there but she really doesn't do anything too memorable and I don't even recall Fluttershy being there, is well played and this episode's message is good. Though I can't tell if it's don't lie or don't show off. Anyways let me go into detail here like I normally do.
    The animation for the magic is really good and I love the way the ursa minor looks. This is what truly added to the way the episode looks and feels. Trixie and Twilight both are really good here. The other characters do add to this and make it really good. We also see that Big mac isn't the only guy with a speaking role here, which is snips and snails but they are just so Idiotic! Anyway the dialogue is good except for the ending where Twilight asks spike if she should give them mustaches. I don't understand why she would do that but I gave up trying to figure that out a while ago. Trixie is an interesting character and I truly wish she appeared in more episodes besides this and magic duel. She really could have added to a few of the episodes and would have made a great enemy for Twilight when they aren't doing premieres/ finales. It also would have added a lot more to magic duel's ending as we would finally see the ending of the rivalry. Trixie is a character who I love to hate and yet I hate to love at the same time. This episode also made me like Twilight a lot more as well as start liking Rarity for a bit until her hair turned green. (Green's my favorite colour.) Character development here really only shows how powerful Twilight is with magic and why she is the element of magic. That also should have been said in the episode, but then again having an episode with Twilight just saying 'Hi there! My name is Twilight Sparkle, element of magic and the destroyer of Nightmare moon, who are you?' wouldn't really have a good message to the kids. I also wonder why everypony else was so into the magic Trixie did. I also do have a question though. What is Trixie's talent? The moons don't really tell us anything and I don't think they would represent being a show-off or being a traveling performer. The only other time we've seen a moon cutie mark was with Luna. We haven't really see another Star cutie mark so what if the moon actually is a magic Cutie mark and That Trixie earned while doing magic but thought it was about some type of special effects as she was setting those off with here magic? I just really want to know what Trixie is talented at. Anyways this episode is still really fun to watch and I truly enjoy how everything looks. This episode also causes me to wish another character would make more appearances so that's a great thing. I give the episode a B+. It's a good episode but I feel like they wasted a bit of potential with Trixie as a character. This has been Neo reviews. Thanks for watching.
  21. NeoExlucky
    So...Dragonshy...I truly have no opinion on this episode at all. It teaches a lesson that Nopony ever actually cares about, the Dragon looked decent, the writing was just meh, and the song doesn't really do anything to me. This episode offered nothing positive or negative to me.
    Okay so now details. The lesson doesn't affect any of the mane 6 ever. Fluttershy goes back to being normal and doesn't stand up to anypony until Iron will shows up in season 2. Dragons don't cause any problems until late season 2 either. I also question what the lesson was. Was it about not losing faith in friends or was it about being bigger means being more considerate? We never really see anything to good here. The dragon here wasn't what I was expecting. The dragon did look really good but here is a question, "Why didn't it speak in the first place?". Also why the ponies didn't just try to copy Fluttershy and maybe not attack the dragon. This is literally the only episode where all the characters are unappealing to me. So I guess there is a slightly big negative here. The writing here doesn't seem to spark anything truly good. It isn't anything that I would remember. The song here is okay, defiantly not something I would listen to while working on something. This episode is quite sad considering I really like the next two episodes but that's for later. This has been Neo reviews. Thanks for reading.
  22. NeoExlucky
    (Warning you are about to read a post written by a pony by the name of Time Spinner. This is Important. XD)
    So in my last entry I told others about sending your apps into world of equestria. Soon I will be in as well. (Though I'm much more snarky.) While that is all find and dandy a thought came to Neo's mind. He said he wanted to tell the origins of the OC's he plays as and to give tips on designing new OC's. While I'm sure other people have done that, Telling you all the origins of myself and my friends will be interesting. So here we go!
    Time Spinner: Hey that's me! Well, where do I begin? I started a very long time ago. I think if I remember correctly it was around a year ago when I was first imagined. Some where from december-march Neo was watching the show and I know it was a few episodes before super speedy cider squeezy 6000. Neo thought it would be a great idea to make a pony version of him. As such he went to the internet to see if he wasn't the only one and sure enough yaplap had shown up on youtube. If you don't know Yaplap is a hilarious brony on youtube and has an OC named solrac. Anyway Neo started writing ideas down and he made me. Except it wasn't me. I started as an alicorn, with the ability to control Time and Space and used magic to hide my wings. Terrible idea right? Luckily Neo came to his senses eventually got rid of the wings and space part, as well as limiting my time magic but still letting me keep it. Then there were differences in backstory and a few other things and eventually I was a mare.It wasn't until later that I went back to being a colt as I was a ponysona for Neo. Eventually Neo found pony generator and drew me there and started to write a fanfic about me that would soon become hated and rewritten and re released twice and rewritten again but not released once. Right around when Neo quit fanficing he found canterlot.com and well here I am.
    Echo forte: If I ever need to have a wingman or a bro by my side, Then it will probably be echo. As seen in the entry pic, Echo is a red Pegasus and is the OC of Neo's best friend. Echo started as being able wonderbolt who quit but that was too awesome so he became a normal Pegasus. Echo actually went through very little changes after that. He will soon appear in a series Neo is starting on youtube along with me and my brother gadget. He will also play a big roll in a soon to be series Neo is starting here on canterlot. (Also expect another blog by him.)
    Gadget Spinner: As I am the ponysona of Neo, Gadget is the ponysona of Neo's brother. Gadget only really exists due to a temporal loop I started with a Time spell that went horribly wrong. Not much to say here except the fact that he is an inventor and used to be called gizmo...That's it.
    Pocket: Pocket watch is the thief of equestria. In her original back-story she is part of a group called the collecters, who steal objects of interest and sell them to a client. She is a master of infiltration and is actually Bi-sexual. (though at first she was a lesbian.) Anyway, Pocket is a rival/romantic interest for me. However she causes me a lot of problems through out the series. She was inspired by a picture of a thief. Not much else to say...
    How to make an OC:
    One of the great things about an OC is the personality. While yes, being powerful and being a genius would be nice, Even I am not a genius and am not too OP. (Though I can be in some cases.) The main thing though is the personality. One of the nice things to do is too base an OC off of a person or even an Item. Neo, Neo's best friend, Neo's brother, and the picture were all inspirations to make the OC's Neo has. Another good idea is to give the OC a set personality or traits. That way if your character goes against these with there own purpose then it will show a lot of pain or growth. Another thing that Neo did with me was he made me rich with detail. Give your character a lot of detail. Make us feel like we could know how it is to hang out with the great and powerful Time Spinner, or the Silent and smart, Echo forte. Your OC can be a lot of things and often times other RPers won't object to it. (Unless your in World of Equestria.) Also it can be really fun to hide references in the backstory of your OC. I am a combination of Samurai jack and the Legend of zelda: Majora's mask. Neo says making an OC is really fun and I would reccomend it to anypony but please no alicorns. If you ever need help with a backstory feel free to message my owner Neoexlucky or even comment below.


    Sincerely,



    Time Spinner

  23. NeoExlucky
    Look before you sleep is an interesting episode That I really love. This episode is very close to being one of my favorites but it doesn't make it for certain reasons but let's cut to the chase.
    So let's get the little things out of the way. The writing in the episode is very well done as is the animation. The moral was one that children should learn as well. Now on to Character development. Applejack and Rarity act the way I think they should act in this episode. I love their fights and I love their comments to each other. My favorite line being 'Why can't you get an education for a minute!' I really think that they were portrayed well. Then theirs the other characters...yes Plural. WHERE IS SPIKE IN THE ENTIRE EPISODE!?! We know he lives with Twilight so why isn't he in the episode? He would have added a few seriously good points and comments to the overall episode that I feel like he was needed. Worse part of it is that wee don't even get an explanation as too where he is. Then there's Twilight. Why did she want a sleep over, which would need friends yet she never wanted friends? I never really understood this part of the episode. Twilight also doesn't really act like herself here. Despite this I do like the episode and I give it a B. This has been Neo reviews. Thanks for reading.
  24. NeoExlucky

    Sundial

    By NeoExlucky,

    I said I wouldn't do it...
    I said I dislike Alicorn OC's...
    I said that I Time was a terrible Alicorn OC...
    I've done something Terrible.
    Okay so maybe it's not that bad but I did it. I made an Alicorn OC and I made her in a way that isn't too bad but is still kind of bad. She not only is the romantic interest to Gadget but is also Time Spinner's archrival. Due to this the Two HATE each other and for good reason.
    In Time's backstory he was promised by Luna that he would become a prince after Celestia and her took over. So in this way, He would become the Alicorn of Time control, However he was thrown to the future. (The day before the season 1 premiere to be exact.) Due to this anotehr pony would have to step up to hold Time together and cause all Time travelers to exist. Time traveling ponies are small in number though and in the legacy story, (My official Timeline of my OC's and holding the main story of MLP true as best as possible. I will release it soon.) In the Legacy story there is Time Spinner, Doctor Whooves, and Sundial. (That have been met.)
    Gadget can't ever remember his past and that's because Time took his memories with his time loop. However Gadget was romantically involved with Sundial and as a result she is looking for him. Now onto her. She became an Alicorn a few years after the diarchy began.
    Here is her as an application.
    Name: Sundial
    Age: Young Mare
    Species: Alicorn
    Cutie mark: A Sundial.
    Sundial got her cutie mark after discovering her ability to control Time.
    Backstory: After find out her gift, Sundial learned her powers should be used for good, and she often did just that. At one point in her life she was approached by Princess Celestia and was turned into an alicorn for her power to control time. She kept track of it and cared for it. Eventually she came into a battle before Nightmare moon took over Luna and was erased from history for 300 years. Afterwards she grew up along with Celestia teaching her what happened in her absence and discovering a few things about Luna and Celestia's past. As she grew older she met and Pegasus named Gadget and fell in love with him. Later in their life though something happend. Gadget disappeared from Time itself. Nopony but the alicorns and a soon met fellow Time traveler with a brown coat knew who he was at all. Now she hunts for him, trying to find a lover and wanting to destroy the pony who cause this to happen to her lover.
    and her looks:

    Anyways's Happy Friday!
  25. NeoExlucky

    An odd thought

    By NeoExlucky,

    GUYS I JUST HAD AN IDEA!!!
    Okay so I was thinking about the princesses and all of their history and things of that sort for Neo's youtube series starting. (One has started but only one episode.) Anyway so I was thinking about them and I went to Google images and typed 'mlp princess Luna and Celestia' and after I went through a bunch of really weird pictures (Including some awesome swords!) I got one of nightmare moon and an Evil version of Celestia which I call Blazing Sun. So I was thinking about them and I started to think about cadence and a thought occurred to me. What if the evil version of Cadence is Chrysalis and Cadence simply cast the evil out of her. This would be an interesting thought as Chrysalis does in fact have a lot of love for the changelings, a little bit too much, which Nightmare Moon just gave too much Moon light and I assume Blazing Sun would give too much Sunlight. So I now have a theory that while they absorb and feed on love, Chrysalis and the changelings love each other too much and Chrysalis is actually the dispelled version of Cadence.
    Wait I'm not done! So I kept thinking about it and another thought occurred to me, actually two. The first being that maybe Nightmare moon is still on the moon but Luna is fine. What if the Elements of Harmony dispelled Nightmare moon out of Luna and trapped her in the moon again. This would explain why Luna doesn't even have flashes of Nightmare moon again and why Luna resent's her so much. Then there is the other thought. So in this theory two of the alicorns have evil sides. Cadence has Chrysalis and Luna has Nightmare moon. Celestia may have the willpower to not activate this evil side or had it cast away by her parents a long time ago. So then we have one Alicorn left. Twilight Sparkle. What if, WHAT IF, Our next villain is Evil Twilight, or Trixie is Evil Twilight and Twilight was just able to befriend her as Unicorn so she wouldn't become fully powered Alicorn Dictator Trixie Lulamoon. Further evidence for this would be the fact that while she is fraud, Trixie has a moon Cutie mark. Magic is normally connected with the stars and the moon, meaning that it may be possible that Trixie has VERY strong magical power. Not to mention she is shown to be an opposite to Twilight in a lot of ways but there power. Trixie doesn't have friends, she's a show-off, and she doesn't seem like that much of an introvert. Now there is a lot I could say about this but I want to hear what you guys have to say about this. So I eager click my hooves together in...eagerness.


    Sincerely,



    Time Spinner

    (If you want to check out the first episode of Neo's series, you can find it here; http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j6wxmE5nLZc )
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