Mojo

"Yes, yes of course we have blueprints, Mr. Greyfeather! Professor, show him the royal blueprints!" Ms. Harshwhinney said sternly. "Javol, frau Harshvhinney!" Professor Krashkop neighed, producing a large tripod stand where the edlerly Pegasus placed a wooden piece of sheetboard with the blueprint pasted to it upon it. Taking a pointing stick in his right hoof, the green Pegasus pointed to features of the blueprint as he explained them. "As you can see, Herr Greyfeather, dere are a number of distinct features to dis structure vee are looking for. Here, vee vant tvin glass doors for dee entry vay. Und up here, dis second floor vill consist of office space. Vone large meeting room, und several smaller office areas for dee Equestria Games staff. Downstairs, dee lobby vill be very spacious, und yet must have a distinct Equestria Games look to it. Up here, dere is a planned third floor but for dee moment, it vill be storage space. In dee future, perhaps if dee Games staff is expanded, den dis third floor can be more developed. Vith dis plan, vee already have an eye on expansion. Do you have any suggestions, old friend?"

Hi Starsprite! This app looks very good! All of the required fields are filled, and it's very well written. I suppose ponies could have 'dojo's' since we say AppleBloom using karate in the cartoon (she had to learn those moves SOMEWHERE, right?). Excellent work!

Excellent app, GhostGirl! All of the required fields are filled and it's very well written! Well done!

Since my internet is working (at the moment), I'll post this quick Home internet is derping badly, may not be online much till it's fixed (at the earliest, Tuesday 9-3-13) Till then, I may not be able to RP or interact with my claimed app.

Hi Pudding! Looking over this app, and I have to agree with Armony's recommendation! This app truly is WOE quality! All of the required fields are filled and though this app is brief in a few places, you've covered all the basics well! Excellent work!

Hi Dubstep! This is an excellent and very unique OC app! All of the required fields are filled, and it is very well written! Great work! I love the character concept! Well done!

Hi Tiktaalik! Fantastic Changling app! All the required fields are filled and it's very well written! Good job!

Hi Harv0kz! Excellent CC app! All of the required fields are filled, and it's very well written! Well done!

Granny Smith gleefully accepted the warm, loving hug from her youngest granddaughter. "Glad ya like it, AppleBloom," the elderly mare neighed. Likewise, Uncle Apple Strudel accepted his hug from the birthday filly as well. "You are quite velcome, AppleBloom," the bearded stallion replied. Haywire happily received her 'head rub' from the gleeful filly who then opened her gift. "Glad ya like'm, AppleBloom!" the rust colored filly neighed as she noticed where AppleBloom had placed her firecracker rockets. The blonde blank flank was very surprised to see that they all seemed to fit inside the silo of her playset. "Good place ta put'm! Wait, I fergot ta give ya the pack of matches that go with the rockets!" Haywire neighed, reaching into her saddlebag to hand her a small pack of matches. "Gonna need'm ta set'm all off!"

"Indeed!" Mr. Waddle neighed, trying to make all his fellow bowlers feel better. "I do believe it is my turn to bowl." "Go get'm Mr Waddle!" Pigpen cheered. "Javol! Get a strike!" added Professor Krashkop as the elderly Earth pony rolled his ball up to the line with his front hooves. Carefully taking aim, Mr. Waddle gave his ball a gentle push, sending it slowly rolling down the alley. The ball began to veer to the left and by the time it reached the pins, rolled past the first three rows before knocking down a single pin on the last row. "Need to aim a little better with this next ball," Mr. Waddle said as he launched his second ball. This time, the ball veered right and clipped a single pin on the other side. "Well, that's two!" Pigpen said, trying to sound upbeat. "Ja! Dee important ting here is to have fun!" the gray maned Pegasus stallion neighed. "Who vill be next?"

"Me family's all doin' groovy, thanks for askin' babe, er.. I mean, Miss AppleJack." Mojo said with his nervous quick correction. The Paint stallion remembered all too well the mare's stern warning to him during the time he helped a work crew to restore a damaged barn at Sweet Apple Acres not long ago. "How's that barn we fixed up hold'n up? We did a rippin' good job on it, I must say!" "Yessir, we all sure hadda fun time fixin' up that thar barn," Granny Smith added. "Ya need ta come by and visit us more often. Ain't that right, AppleJack?" "Granny.." Uncle Apple Strudel said sternly. "Now now little brother. Ain't nothin' wrong with havin' a handsome gentlecolt caller from time ta time. I'm sure AppleJack would agree with that.." "I don't tink dis is dee place and time to discuss such tings, mein sister." All this time, Mojo tried hard not to blush, but there were some distinct patches of red visible through the hippie brony's facial fur.

Well, for shipping in my area, I have to use the U.S. Postal Service because the nearest UPS or FedEx office is over 35 miles away in two directions in neighboring counties and... (reads the thread and entries) OH! THAT kind of shipping! To quote Derpy Hooves: "Oops! My bad!"

Mojo was a bit surprised at the apparent miscommunication going on between himself and his new friend Flax Seed. The Paint stallion pondered for a moment before replying. "Half a 'mo, chum," Mojo said with a bright smile as he spoke with a happy tone, "when I asked ya, 'can ya dig it?', I meant did ya understand me? Sorry bout me language slang words, just a force'a habit. Like, I often refer ta those of the female gender as 'babe' or 'love' and that got me inna bit'a hot water with a pretty filly named AppleJack. I thought that blinkin' mare was gonna knock me block off that last time she warned me NOT to call'r 'babe' again. Never could understand why her Gran's been tryin' to get the two of us together. Don't get me wrong, Flax, AppleJack's one happenin' chick, but I don't think she'd be groovy with me courtin' her. By the way, pal, if ya don't mind me askin', howdidya meet your soulmate?"

When the griffon grab up Professor Krashkop in a hug, Ms. Harshwhinney gasped in amazement. But Clyde was used to this sort of greeting from his old friend, so he was perfectly calm throughout the entire time. "You alvays have dat unique form of greeting, mein friend," the Professor said with a wide grin after he was released from the hug. When she heard Gerrand's words towards her, Ms. Harshwhinney whined and looked very sad. The orange Earth pony hadn't realized how insensative and harsh her 'greeting' was to the griffon. "A thousand pardons, Ger.. I mean, Mr. Greyfeather," the suddenly nervous blonde mare said, "I do apologize for my poor choice of wrods. Please, come this way." Professor Krashkop gave the mare a nasty look as he passed by her and entered inside. Ms. Harshwhinney held the door open for Gerrand, hoping that she could recover from her bad first impression.

Mojo smiled as he put some honey into Flax's tea. "Chill out, pal. Gravity's a groovier way of gettin' honey than usin' some kinda gear-driven contraption," the Paint stallion said as he gave his friend his tea. "And ya won't be findin' any mechanical nonsense on me parent's farm either. All of me family's inta doin' farmin' the all natural way. Can ya dig it?"

This is much better! You did indeed make the recommended changes. Although your app is rather brief in a number of places, there's enough in it to cover all the basics, for a Diamond Dog app. Normally in an app, we require a specific choice of Residence but since this is a Diamond Dog (not known to live in or near pony cities) what you wrote in that field fits him perfectly. Good job!

Fillies and Gentlecolts, to celebrate the fact that I am now the WOE RPer of both Flim and Flam, I want to start up a new RP where the brothers visit Ponyville with a brand new product to sell. Will the brothers be able to convince the ponies of the town to give them one more chance? What I am asking is, how many of you would like to have their characters in this RP? Whether you want your characters to heckle, harass or have an open mind to try their new product, all would be welcome to see where this RP would go! If there's anyone interested, please post here. This could be a lot of fun!

Roleplay Type: Mane RP Name: Flim Sex: Male Age: Stallion Species: Unicorn Eye Colour: Green Coat: Tan Mane/Tail: Red mane and tail with white striping Physique: Lanky, tall and skinny Residence: Fillydelphia Occupation: Business Colt/Con Artist Cutie Mark: A quarter slice of a Red apple. Flim was very competitive in his foals years, even with his own brother. One day, when his brother was home sick, Flim worked his charm in the schoolyard, peddling hoofmade apple shaped quill holders. Of course, unknown to his classmates, Flim had chafted each one from real discarded apples he managed to sneak from the trash and painted to look like they were carved from wood. When his classmates discovered this, they all threw their now rotting apple shaped quill holders at Flim, pelting the young enterprising colt so intensely he galloped all the way home crying. When he told his parents and his still ill brother what had happened, they gave him a great idea to benefit from his new found unpopularity. The next morning, when Flim returned to school, his angry cheated classmates were there waiting for him with more rotten apples. But the lanky unicorn colt had a brand new product to offer them: Dart boards with his own photo in the center of them! When Flim convinced his classmates (with the best sales pitch of his young life) that these wooden backed dart boards would be perfect for rotten apple target practice, he sold out of them within a matter of minutes! Though he was still unpopular with his classmates for a time afterwards, at least Flim had discovered a way to profit from the situation. As he sold the last one, to his own teacher, a flash of light appeared behind him. It was then that the unicorn colt discovered he had earned his cutie mark. Since it was apple related, Flim now realized his destiny would be somehow connected with apples. History: Flim, with his twin brother Flam, was born into a business-oriented family where their parents, Easy Street and Shell Game, passed on their somewhat shady knowledge of business to them. Although his brother was more mechanically inclined, Flim was superior to his sibling in regards to creativity. During their early foal years, Flim was very competitive with his brother, each trying to out perform the other when it came to swindling his classmates and sometimes, even adult ponies. As the twin brothers grew up, they realized that they could do a better job at deal making and profiteering by working together. Besides, since his brother's cutie mark seemed related to his own, Flim reasoned that it was their destiny to cooperate to 'make their fortune' in Equestria. So when the two brothers were old enough to strike out on their own, they did so together. It was Flim who came up with the idea for the Super Speedy Cider Squeezy 6000 while his brother drew up the blueprints for it. After many weeks of hard work and trial-and-error testing, their new creation was ready to present to the world! Their first stop was Ponyville, where the brothers had a very stressful as well as unsuccessful encounter with the Apple Family. In the end, it was Flam's idea to shut off the Quality Control monitor of the SSCS6k that produced the inferior apple cider their potential Ponyville customers rejected flatly. Accepting their defeat, at Flim's suggestion, they drove their wheeled machine to the next town. However, it seemed that the duo's nack for underhooved tatics and 'short cuts' in quality worked against them with each subsequent town they visited. Flim has never lost his desire to make a 'fast Bit,' a philosophy his twin brother shares equally. Character Summary: Flim usually appears in public as a charming, dazzling gentlecolt who can carry a tune surprisingly well. The dapper lanky unicorn is a master of giving convincing speeches, a skill he often uses when trying to sell his wares. It is said that Flim could sell snowshoes to desert ponies and ice cubes in the frigid northern regions of Equestria. In reality, Flim is a very cunning, devious stallion who'd sell his own mother if it would make him a large enough profit. He is very ruthless when it comes to business, as he and his brother demonstrated during the infamous Sweet Apple Acres incident. Flim loves only one thing more than money, and that's MORE money! Greed is his number one motive in all that he does, says and plans. Of the two Flim-Flam brothers, Flim is definitely the 'spokespony' of the outfit, leaving his brother with most of the mechanical work. Flim can be very nice to other ponies, until he gets what he wants (usually their money). He dreams of making one 'big score' that will earn him enough bits to live comfortably for the rest of his life. The only true friend he has in life is his brother Flam. Any other friendships he manages to make are very temporary, especially when those friends discover Flim's true motives.

(ooc): Oops! I let this one get away from me, sorry folks Now that things have calmed down considerably, many were now watching the birthday filly, AppleBloom, open all her gifts. "I hope ya like mine, deary," Granny Smith said, the brightly wrapped package near AppleBloom held a hoofmade sweater the elderly mare had been working on for months with bright white colour, blue borders and many red 'apples' sewn into it. "I know she vill like mein gift also!" Uncle Apple Strudel neighed. Inside of gift box he had set in front of AppleBloom was a genuine authentic Germaney folk dress with matching green hat like he wore. "OH, I can't wait! AppleBloom, open my present to you!" Haywire shouted out, hoping her friend likes the slingshot and four small firecracker rockets that were inside it.

Hi Tales! Seems we've had a run on Diamond Dog OC's lately (which is a good thing!) And this app is superb! All of the required fields are filled and its very well written! Great job!

Mojo smiled when Flax Seed accepted his offer of tea. "Well Flax, since it's about midday at the moment, I'd suggest me mellow mornin' blend! It's me own mix of relaxin' tea ta bring calm and inner peace ta the soul! I'll whip up a batch quicker than ya can say 'Bob's yur Uncle!'" With surprising speed, the hippie brony created a small fire and rigged up a 'stand' over it to boil the water for the tea. He then tossed several teabags into the pot. "There we go! It'll be ready very soon. And I have ta tell ya, Flax, me pal Starflower's no snob. She's very kind and carin', after all she founded a clinic in her hometown ta help ponies stay healthy! In fact, she's got such a kind heart, I'd make a go at datin' her if she wasn't as old as me own mum, but don't tell'r I said that! AH! Tea's ready!" Within seconds, Mojo had a nice hot cup of tea ready for Flax Seed to sample. He sat it on a makeshift card table he had previously brought out of his wagon. "Do ya take yur tea with honey or lemon, pal?" Mojo asked before he began to pour the tea into cups.

When Mojo saw what was going on at the front of the line, the Paint stallion felt compelled to step in. "Half a mo', love," Mojo began to speak, "beggin' yur pardon, but that's not cool ta shortchange the lad here. Yur sign clearly says each one who buys yur apples today's entitled to a kiss, and cousin er not, Valen here deserves what he's paid for. If ya don't wanna kiss'm, that's groovy, but one of yur family should honor the agreement." "He does have a point, AppleJack," Granny Smith interrupted. "Valen here did fulfill HIS end of the bargain, and we Apples NEVER break our word! That thar means that the burden of kissin' Valen falls ta either me er AppleBloom. AppleBloom! Front 'n center! Our Apple family honor's at stake here! So half pint, it's up ta either you er me ta kiss Mister Valen! Are ya gonna do it, er shall I?" "It is true!" added Uncle Apple Strudel, "Vee Apples do not break our contracts! Not even in Germaney vould an Apple do such a ting! Herr Mojo is correct in his observation. Dee Apple Family must honor it's vord!"

Welcome back, Tales!!

So the new era begins. All hail our new Admins! It's also good to see that Autumn and Manestream will be with us as well. Oh yeah, and here's Granny Smith bowing to the new 'royalty' of Canterlot.com Well, Granny's old, and that's as far as she can bow!

Hi Tiktaalik! This is a very good first app, and kudos for apping a Diamond Dog! All of the required fields are filled and the character looks very original. There are a few minor spelling errors ('Diamon Dog' instead of 'Diamond Dog' for example) and you have used the 'Residence' field twice. Might be just a simple matter of proofreading and editing this app to get it ready for a full review. Great app, just needs a little more work.