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  4. {Tier 2} Zecora {Final!}

    in Friendship is Magic Cast

    Posted · Edited by FireFoxx

    Hi QuickLime! I'd be happy to work with you on this app :) You did a great job fleshing out this character with her history and summary.  I have a few requests at this time before I put this up for a second review.

     

    - Can you make a separate section of history and then a section for the character summary? The summary should just be a brief overview of this character. Something that could be read quickly to give a general idea about Zecora if someone was jumping into in RP with you playing her. You have lots of great info in the summary section that just needs to be shifted around in the app. These are the last four sections we currently want to see in apps for WoE.

     

    Unique Traits:

    History:

    Character Personality:
    Character Summary:

     

    -In the title for this thread Zecora is listed as T1, she is listed in our T2 section. 

  6. RainbowFoxxy's Character Vault

    in Character Logs

    Posted

    Earth Pony Mare

    Applejack

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    PROFILE

    RP Text Color: Dark Orange

    -threads-

    Stallions and Mares 

    It Happens to the Best of Us

    AJ explores her feelings for Rarity with LunarDisplay (dropped thread)

    Begin Rarijack saga with Steel's Rarity!

    Summer Nights

    AJ tries to make her feeling for Rarity known...it doesn't happen.

    An' They Call the Thing a Rodeo!

    AJ is finally able to make her feelings known after much inner turmoil. 

    Light As Air

    AJ and Rares take to the air and get caught up in a mystery theft case with my OC Gridlock.

  8. Red Delicious (Final)

    in Friendship is Magic Cast

    Posted

    Hi Quicklime! I'll go ahead and work on this a little with you and then I'll be ready to send it on in for you.

     

    There should be a history section and a character summary section for the app. It looks like you have the history in there, if you could split it from the summary section that would be great. :)

     

    I love the sparrow pet BTW, really cute!

  9. Soarin' [Ready]

    in Friendship is Magic Cast

    Posted

    I had a chance to look this over. It looks just fine :) One thing to ask... change the app to fit the new application. You don't need to add much, it just has a section of two missing from the new application. Once this is done I will be happy to put this one in for second review!

  14. How This Works

    in Pony Chatter

    Posted · Edited by FireFoxx

    I would totally be down for taking care of the Rainbow Dash thread! I would go with it being themed kinda like Rainbow's updates to herself on how awesome things are going in her life. It would include highlights of what she's up to of course along with what her friends are doing. It could also be a little like a dairy in that she might be able to share deeper thoughts and feelings when the mood takes her. She 120% cool on the surface, but that mare's got lots of feelings too! :!:

  18. Star Crusader [READY]

    in Original Characters

    Posted

    Hi! I'm happy to help you get this application approved :D

     

    A  suggestion:

     

    A few bullies had the poor foal held down and were force feeding him mud

     

    WoE is meant to stay as close to slice of life for MLP FiM as possible. There are a few cases of bullying in the show, but nothing as drastic as force feeding mud. I would say it's enough just to say some bullies were bothering him, or at most pushed him down.

     

     

    Other than this, I'd say the app is ready to go! Let me know here when you've made a change to the suggested area and we can move forward with this one! :)

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